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    CLJobe
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Salvation - 1. Chapter 1

Traveling one gets to see not only beautiful works of art, but you get to see all types of people. Depending on the country, you can see what is legal in one country and illegal in another country. In all of my travels, I learned that people would do anything to live or maximize their income, even at others’ expense.

My name is Carleton Jeffries, and by profession, I’m an international lawyer. Upon completing my law degree, I selected to stay an additional two years to study international law. As a result, many of my cases originate in the United Nations and from individuals who have come to know me through the UN.

I was sitting at an outdoor cafe having a late breakfast when I noticed several young boys hanging around a door across the street. I’d estimate their ages between 16 and 18. As I watched, I began to realize I was being watched as well. A young boy showed up with an older man. I watched as the other boys spoke to him. He turned to look at me. I knew they told him that I was watching them. The man spoke to the young boy who, after nodding, crossed the street. He approached me, sat down in the empty seat across from me. I didn’t say anything to him. From the reflection in the cafe’s window, I could see the other boys and the older man watching me. The young man who was sitting across from me kept looking at me. I continued to drink my coffee. I was curious to find out what the next step would be.

After about 15 minutes, the man began to cross the street. The young boy looked at me with panic in his eyes. He was afraid of something. Before the man reached us, I asked the boy if he wanted something to drink. He asked for a coffee. I signaled the waitress, ask for a refill for me, and order a cafe au lait for him. I gave him the menu and asked if he wanted something to eat. After looking at the menu, he pointed something to the waitress.

The waitress looked at me, and I nodded yes. Seeing this, the man retraced his steps back to the doorway. The waitress brought us our drinks and a sandwich for the boy. I asked her if there was a backdoor to the cafe. She said there was through the kitchen. “I’ll pay the bill inside if that’s okay.” She nodded yes and left me with the bill.

When the boy was finished with the sandwich, I told him I would pay the bill. Getting up, I spilled my coffee on purpose. I told the boy to go to the men’s room and clean up. He headed there. I followed to pay. I paid the bill knowing the group across the street could see me through the glass window.

After paying, I headed to the restrooms. When the boy came out, I took his hand and headed toward the kitchen. There I pointed out the back door. Entering the restaurant from the kitchen, I waited for about 10 minutes, went to the cashier, and decided to order a cab. I gave the man a large tip and told him if anyone asks, I wasn’t here. When the taxi arrived, the boy and I entered. I gave the cab driver the address of my hotel, and we were off. Arriving at my hotel, I gave the cab driver a large tip, “If anyone asks, you took us to the Wellington.” He smiled and took off.

Through all of this, the boy didn’t say anything. “Before we go further, I want you to know I’m not going to hurt you, nor are we going to have any sex. I have an offer for you, I can take you back to that corner, and that man or you can come with me, and I’ll make sure you never have to perform any sexual acts or be controlled by that man. The decision is yours.”

I’m not sure he believed me, for the first time he spoke, “If I go with you, I’ll not have to talk to strange men or go with them. I won’t have to listen to Daan?”

“That is right.

“Okay, but if you try and sell me, I’ll run away.”

“Okay, let’s go. I have some work to do to get you out of the country.” We went to my room. I sat at the desk and started to make a few phone calls.

“Can I take a shower?”

“Sure, I need the size of your clothing so I can order new clothes for you. Put your old clothes outside the door.”

There was a knock on my door, “Alex, come on in.”

“Where is your boy?”

“Taking a shower, I need some new clothes for him. I’ll call down and have someone go to the hotel shop and pick up an outfit for him. Then you can take his picture.”

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1 minute ago, Buz said:

Salvation indeed...literally.

Did you read the prologue?  I think you will be pleased with this story.

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I'm a little slow just to make sure I'm right Carleton is in a different country to where his house is do I have that right?The kid sounds like he fits the bill of what the previous owner of the house wanted.

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24 minutes ago, weinerdog said:

I'm a little slow just to make sure I'm right Carleton is in a different country to where his house is do I have that right?The kid sounds like he fits the bill of what the previous owner of the house wanted.

Yes, Carleton's home is in the US. But as the story opens he is in Europe.

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I was as confused as others were! After reading the prologue and beginning of the chapter, I thought we were on a sidewalk cafe outside the UN in NYC and was halfway expecting police officers to rollup to apprehend Daan for pimping out the boys. Very vague on clarifying the setting before jumping into an action conflict. While I appreciate the efforts and enjoy reading the stories, I'm more investing time for the quality of the story development than the quantity of chapters that can be produced in the shortest amount of time possible.

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45 minutes ago, weinerdog said:

I'm a little slow just to make sure I'm right Carleton is in a different country to where his house is do I have that right?The kid sounds like he fits the bill of what the previous owner of the house wanted.

I'm a little lost there too. 🤔Past or future ?

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2 hours ago, CLJobe said:

Did you read the prologue?  I think you will be pleased with this story.

Did We note my :heart: reaction to said same prologue?

I think its safe to assume I am not just pleased, but loving it so far.

May one also drop a 'As always.' to be added to the end of that?!

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Great chapter, interesting way to start reading the father's story, and how it ends at the current house, 

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I'm not saying that CLJobe is purposely misleading us, ("oh what a tangled web we weave...)", but perhaps just a really different approach to story telling? :o

I think weinerdog may have taken the wrong fork in the road.

Carleton 'Jeffries' is not the (still unnamed, and annoying habit) narrator and new home owner in the Prologue. Carleton is, in fact, Steven's father and the deceased owner of the house. Clear as mud? :huh:

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1 hour ago, Anton_Cloche said:

I'm not saying that CLJobe is purposely misleading us, ("oh what a tangled web we weave...)", but perhaps just a really different approach to story telling? :o

I think weinerdog may have taken the wrong fork in the road.

Carleton 'Jeffries' is not the (still unnamed, and annoying habit) narrator and new home owner in the Prologue. Carleton is, in fact, Steven's father and the deceased owner of the house. Clear as mud? :huh:

You may be right nice catch

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9 hours ago, chris191070 said:

Fantastic start. The boy finds Salvation.

Yes, but as the story continues, who and what leads to this salvation will. become appraent'

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9 hours ago, Chris L said:

I was as confused as others were! After reading the prologue and beginning of the chapter, I thought we were on a sidewalk cafe outside the UN in NYC and was halfway expecting police officers to rollup to apprehend Daan for pimping out the boys. Very vague on clarifying the setting before jumping into an action conflict. While I appreciate the efforts and enjoy reading the stories, I'm more investing time for the quality of the story development than the quantity of chapters that can be produced in the shortest amount of time possible.

As you follow, everything will fall into place. 

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8 hours ago, Tonyr said:

I'm a little lost there too. 🤔Past or future ?

The time is current, I will take you Ito the past, but Chap 1 is current

 

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8 hours ago, Buz said:

Did We note my :heart: reaction to said same prologue?

I think its safe to assume I am not just pleased, but loving it so far.

May one also drop a 'As always.' to be added to the end of that?!

I am glad you are pleased. I think as you read, you will come to know Carleton

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8 hours ago, mikedup said:

Great chapter, interesting way to start reading the father's story, and how it ends at the current house, 

Steven's father is an interesting man. You will get to know him as the story progresses.

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This hits home. Kind off. I’ve always imagined myself tgat if I’m gling to get filthy rich, I’ll help out young ones pick up themselves again. To give them a second chance. Heck. It’s my plan to have at least one of my future kids adopted. Whatever it takes!

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4 hours ago, Solus Magus said:

This hits home. Kind off. I’ve always imagined myself tgat if I’m gling to get filthy rich, I’ll help out young ones pick up themselves again. To give them a second chance. Heck. It’s my plan to have at least one of my future kids adopted. Whatever it takes!

Then I think you will enjoy this story 

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Outstanding chapter!  Carleton has the resources and the dedication to help those children who have been taken advantage of. His altruism is extraordinarily rare. I am really happy that the boy was lucky that he was sent to investigate the man who was watching. It appears that he is being rescued and will be kept safe. I am really enjoying this story and am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

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6 hours ago, flesco said:

Outstanding chapter!  Carleton has the resources and the dedication to help those children who have been taken advantage of. His altruism is extraordinarily rare. I am really happy that the boy was lucky that he was sent to investigate the man who was watching. It appears that he is being rescued and will be kept safe. I am really enjoying this story and am definitely looking forward to the next chapter! 😃❤️

I'm glad you are enjoying my writing. This story is about salvation, I think you will enjoy reading it.

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Loving the story, prologues are to be read ... Great idea having the story within the story.

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1 hour ago, Kev said:

Loving the story, prologues are to be read ... Great idea having the story within the story.

Thanks, I hope you enjoy the other chapters.

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