Timothy M. Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 (edited) I was just reading the chapter again before reviewing and something struck me as strange in this sentence. He watched the waiter approach with their meals before turning back to Liam. “Now, let’s figure out what we’re ordering. I haven’t had a good steak in over a week.” Did you perhaps mean menus rather than meals? Otherwise, why would Nathan talk about ordering? Hmm, after writing my review, I think I'm on the conditional team Alek for Liam. But only if you find someone awesome for Nathan. Edited March 17, 2017 by Timothy M. 5 Link to comment
Former Member Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 Dear Drought, You're being exceedingly hard on Alek ... Tram was a typo ... Hoho I think Alek has been unreasonable to Liam. I think Liam deserves better. Nathan is just a better choice. Tram was such a funny coincidence! Did you really expect me to resist? ;-) Link to comment
Kitt Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 Of course not. Resistance is futile. 5 Link to comment
Drew Espinosa Posted March 17, 2017 Author Share Posted March 17, 2017 Vive la résistance! 5 Link to comment
LitLover Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 I was just reading the chapter again before reviewing and something struck me as strange in this sentence. He watched the waiter approach with their meals before turning back to Liam. “Now, let’s figure out what we’re ordering. I haven’t had a good steak in over a week.” Did you perhaps mean menus rather than meals? Otherwise, why would Nathan talk about ordering? Hmm, after writing my review, I think I'm on the conditional team Alek for Liam. But only if you find someone awesome for Nathan. Darn, I meant to fix that. It's supposed to be menu 2 Link to comment
Drew Espinosa Posted March 17, 2017 Author Share Posted March 17, 2017 Hmm, after writing my review, I think I'm on the conditional team Alek for Liam. But only if you find someone awesome for Nathan. Yay! Hey, Team Nathan, watch out! Team Alek will be the majority of readers soon enough! 4 Link to comment
Headstall Posted March 17, 2017 Share Posted March 17, 2017 Darn, I meant to fix that. It's supposed to be menu Sorry... I read it as menu too 2 Link to comment
Former Member Posted March 18, 2017 Share Posted March 18, 2017 While the update was in progress, it said I had 28 notifications. But now it says I have none. This thread seems to account for only a third of them. Link to comment
Popular Post LitLover Posted March 20, 2017 Popular Post Share Posted March 20, 2017 Good morning everyone. I'm still trying not to lose my sh*t with the mobile site. I hate mobile sites of almost any website. I feel like I'm constantly scrolling to find anything. Maybe I'm just impatient? I can't access page 2 of the comments so I've decided to hold off responding to comments for now. I would like to answer those who've taken time to leave me their thoughts, but I'm concerned the responses will go to the second page and won't be accessible in any event. I'll wait it out for now while the upgrade team works out the bugs. Have a lovely Monday everyone! 7 Link to comment
Kitt Posted March 20, 2017 Share Posted March 20, 2017 Carlos is having the same issue with his story. Those of us on page two or later can wait. Tis not your fault. 4 Link to comment
Bucket1 Posted March 20, 2017 Share Posted March 20, 2017 The "page 2" issue has been a problem for me on mobile and desktop versions. Those of us catching up and relegated to page 2 will cope a little longer 2 Link to comment
LitLover Posted March 20, 2017 Share Posted March 20, 2017 27 minutes ago, Kitt said: Carlos is having the same issue with his story. Those of us on page two or later can wait. Tis not your fault. 26 minutes ago, Bucket1 said: The "page 2" issue has been a problem for me on mobile and desktop versions. Those of us catching up and relegated to page 2 will cope a little longer Thank you I just hate keeping people waiting when they've been kind enough to leave a comment, but I understand there are still bugs to work out. 1 Link to comment
Former Member Posted March 20, 2017 Share Posted March 20, 2017 32 minutes ago, LitLover said: Thank you I just hate keeping people waiting when they've been kind enough to leave a comment, but I understand there are still bugs to work out. Just think of it as another cliffie! ;-) Link to comment
Drew Espinosa Posted March 20, 2017 Author Share Posted March 20, 2017 2 minutes ago, LitLover said: Gary is good. Gary is wise. This could be Team Alek's slogan! TEAM ALEK Gary is good. Gary is wise. Gary's in Alek's corner. Being in Alek's corner is wise and good. 3 Link to comment
LitLover Posted March 20, 2017 Share Posted March 20, 2017 16 minutes ago, Drew Espinosa said: This could be Team Alek's slogan! TEAM ALEK Gary is good. Gary is wise. Gary's in Alek's corner. Being in Alek's corner is wise and good. lol You'll have to get someone on those t-shirts. 4 Link to comment
Headstall Posted March 20, 2017 Share Posted March 20, 2017 1 minute ago, LitLover said: lol You'll have to get someone on those t-shirts. I would add: BIG HOT RUSSIAN NEEDS LOVE 3 Link to comment
Drew Espinosa Posted March 20, 2017 Author Share Posted March 20, 2017 @Headstall Great! Pro Team Alek: TEAM ALEK Big Hot Russian Needs Love TEAM NATHAN Nathan's Been Friendzoned. 'Nuff Said. Pro Team Nathan: TEAM NATHAN Liam doesn't need Drama. Alek is Drama. Nathan is not. TEAM ALEK Alek may be out, but he's still Narnia's Mascot. 5 Link to comment
LitLover Posted March 20, 2017 Share Posted March 20, 2017 7 minutes ago, Drew Espinosa said: @Headstall Great! Pro Team Alek: TEAM ALEK Big Hot Russian Needs Love TEAM NATHAN Nathan's Been Friendzoned. 'Nuff Said. Pro Team Nathan: TEAM NATHAN Liam doesn't need Drama. Alek is Drama. Nathan is not. TEAM ALEK Alek may be out, but he's still Narnia's Mascot. 2 Link to comment
Popular Post spike382 Posted March 20, 2017 Popular Post Share Posted March 20, 2017 On 3/17/2017 at 0:14 PM, Drew Espinosa said: Yay! Hey, Team Nathan, watch out! Team Alek will be the majority of readers soon enough! I just want to point out that three of us were the OGs of Team Alek. But, in all fairness, I've pretty much been on Tim's "conditional" Team Alek the whole time. Nathan the dear man, is flying in the Friend Zone. It's almost impossible to escape. 7 Link to comment
Drew Espinosa Posted March 20, 2017 Author Share Posted March 20, 2017 (edited) 16 minutes ago, spikey582 said: Nathan the dear man, is flying in the Friend Zone. It's almost impossible to escape. For Team Nathan... "Passengers, this is the Captain speaking, Team Nathan Airlines Flight 1 is unable to land at Liam's Heart Airport at this time due to Hurricane Alek. We'll be making an alternate landing at the Friendzoned Airport. I apologize for the inconvenience." Edited March 20, 2017 by Drew Espinosa 5 Link to comment
Site Moderator Popular Post Reader1810 Posted March 20, 2017 Site Moderator Popular Post Share Posted March 20, 2017 6 minutes ago, Drew Espinosa said: For Team Nathan... "Passengers, this is the Captain speaking, Team Nathan Airlines Flight 1 is unable to land at Liam's Heart Airport at this time due to Hurricane Alek. We'll be making an alternate landing at the Friendzoned Airport. I apologize for the inconvenience." NUH UH!!!! 8 Link to comment
Drew Espinosa Posted March 20, 2017 Author Share Posted March 20, 2017 1 minute ago, Reader1810 said: NUH UH!!!! Hey, I did call Alek a hurricane, as a service to Team Nathan. 2 Link to comment
LitLover Posted March 20, 2017 Share Posted March 20, 2017 17 minutes ago, Drew Espinosa said: For Team Nathan... "Passengers, this is the Captain speaking, Team Nathan Airlines Flight 1 is unable to land at Liam's Heart Airport at this time due to Hurricane Alek. We'll be making an alternate landing at the Friendzoned Airport. I apologize for the inconvenience." 2 Link to comment
Drew Espinosa Posted March 20, 2017 Author Share Posted March 20, 2017 (edited) On a serious note, I think I accurately described the current situation in Choices, albeit in a creative way. Here are two important facts: Liam isn't completely over Alek. Nathan is being friendzoned as a result of that fact. The only way for Nathan to claim Liam's heart, is if he gets over Alek. But at this moment, Liam hasn't gotten over Alek, so Nathan is still in the friendzone and will continue to be if things don't change. Edited March 20, 2017 by Drew Espinosa Meant to say "isn't" in my first fact. 1 Link to comment
spike382 Posted March 20, 2017 Share Posted March 20, 2017 28 minutes ago, Reader1810 said: NUH UH!!!! 1810, sweetie, denial is not just a river in Egypt... 3 Link to comment
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