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timmy's poetry - 36. Burden

would that i could take it from you.. you know i would

Burden

 

 

I would take your pain and sorrow from you

Give you rest and ease your troubled mind

I would calm your turbulent soul, so it rides easy

For I can feel your pain

Feel the sadness

Touch your heartache

I would embrace your agony

For I can take it all, if it frees you, eases you

I will bear these afflictions, and then let them fly

Open myself to the heavens, let them carry these burdens

Then give you peace and quiet, a place to lay your head

 

 

 

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for Tommy and others who are troubled...
Copyright © 2017 Mikiesboy; All Rights Reserved.
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Sometimes I want somebody would say these words to me, sometimes I want to say these words to people I know... This is such a nice poem :)

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11 minutes ago, hoaluu said:

Sometimes I want somebody would say these words to me, sometimes I want to say these words to people I know... This is such a nice poem :)

thank you.. i understand what you mean xoxxo 

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my sweet wonderful boy,  I wonder, if people really know just how much you truly do care. This is beautifully written. 

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18 hours ago, MichaelS36 said:

my sweet wonderful boy,  I wonder, if people really know just how much you truly do care. This is beautifully written. 

Thank you, Michael.  xoxo

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There is such love and compassion in this poem, it's easy to be comforted. I hope it brings solace to whomever needs it.. 

You are gold tim..❤️

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