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timmy's poetry - 45. It's A Little Bit Us

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The universe showered us in its wisdom

Bringing together two bright lights

It showed us the way, gave us each other

Bestowed the gift of Sight, to better see around us

Granted us Clarity, to behold what was always there,

the Wisdom to pluck the fruit,

and finally taste it.

 

 

 

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Today i can finally see, the you ive never seen before

When i opened up, spoke my mind; you helped me cope

Finally i laid at your feet; with firm hands you raised me up

To show me i’m not less than you, but your partner in this dance

 

 

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Things are looking up for you both, I hope. Certainly, that's what both these poems seem to be telling me. Good. :)

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"Granted us Clarity, to behold what was always thereThe Wisdom to pluck the fruit, and finally taste it." Hmm, I'll be carrying these words with me today. Very beautiful.

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1 hour ago, Reader1810 said:

The day may be grey and cloudy, but I'm :).

 

Thank you, tim  :thumbup:

me too ... thanks Reader xo

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44 minutes ago, northie said:

Things are looking up for you both, I hope. Certainly, that's what both these poems seem to be telling me. Good. :)

they are looking  up.. thanks northie!

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26 minutes ago, BDANR said:

"Granted us Clarity, to behold what was always thereThe Wisdom to pluck the fruit, and finally taste it." Hmm, I'll be carrying these words with me today. Very beautiful.

thank you, BDANR .. i appreciate your comments xo 

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i absolutely love the last line of the second poem. a partnership of love. again, another piece  nicely done

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Two beautiful, beautiful poems, tim. They speak to my heart in a language I recognize immediately. To be equals in the  dance is a great and wonderful thing; a thing for rejoicing. 

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16 hours ago, Caz Pedroso said:

Beautiful timmie :hug: 

Thanks cazzie.. for reading and your comments xo

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16 hours ago, mogwhy said:

i absolutely love the last line of the second poem. a partnership of love. again, another piece  nicely done

Thanks moggy!! I appreciate the comments. 

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16 hours ago, Defiance19 said:

♥️ A couple of these lines will linger. Beautiful tim. xo

appreciate that Boss, xo

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11 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

Two beautiful, beautiful poems, tim. They speak to my heart in a language I recognize immediately. To be equals in the  dance is a great and wonderful thing; a thing for rejoicing. 

Thank you very much Parker xoxo

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Two good poems, I wonder if the people they are written for will recognize themselves. Number 2 I know...is us. A nice set, tim.

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6 hours ago, MichaelS36 said:

Two good poems, I wonder if the people they are written for will recognize themselves. Number 2 I know...is us. A nice set, tim.

Thank you, Michael. maybe they will .. 

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