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    Mikiesboy
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timmy's poetry - 9. To My Disease

Two poems .. after i've been sick all week...

To My Disease

 

Inside me you live but my death is your goal

You crawl through my veins, my heart and my brain

No amount of wishes or prayers will send you away

My cells, bolstered by medicines keep you at bay

 

It’s hard to think of you as a friend

I judge you to be my enemy

So I promise now, my doc to obey

I’ll fight you, but accept come what may

 

I don’t know if or when you’ll become full blown

Then an earlier death is a certainty

I know I need to do better, it’s the only way

I cannot afford to remain blasé

 

 

To My Husband

 

I look into your deep brown eyes

Then you press your lips to my own

You keep me close and safe

In your generous embrace

 

I’m sick and tired, it’s hard to cope

Whisper I’m sorry, you deserve

So much more than

The future I behold

 

Your words sooth my soul:

I love you more than I can say.

From the first and to

The end, you are for me

Never quit ...
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Michael is not your rock, he's is your boulder. I am very happy he is by your side, my friend.

 

:hug::hug: to you both.

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Parker Owens

Yes, and I wept, too. Your words to Michael, and then his to you opened the floodgates. These are terrifying, courageous and beautiful words. Beautiful.

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hohochan657

I will storm the heavens for you, just because both Michael and you deserve a long, happy and healthy life together. I will argue with Asclepius to guarantee your continuous well being ...
:hug:

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MacGreg

Doesn't matter that I don't know you on a personal level, tim. This poem hurts me. Plain and simple. Hugs to you and hugs to Michael for giving you the love and support you need and deserve. Hope you're feeling a little better today. xo

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On 02/16/2017 03:15 AM, Headstall said:

You made me cry, but because Michael's reassurance was so beautiful :heart::hug:

Awww Gary. Hoping that I can bounce back some through this. If love could fix things, i'd be fine.

Thanks xoxxo

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Mikiesboy
On 02/16/2017 03:21 AM, Valkyrie said:

You made me cry, too. I don't have a review... just lots of :hug: and :kiss:

No tears ... thank you for the love and hugs. No review needed if you're sending me those.. xoxoxo

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On 02/16/2017 03:58 AM, Reader1810 said:

Michael is not your rock, he's is your boulder. I am very happy he is by your side, my friend.

 

:hug: :hug: to you both.

Yeah boulder is a good word. He doesn't let me quit, he keeps me from having to think about what's happening. He often has enough strength for us both..

 

xoxo

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On 02/16/2017 04:16 AM, Parker Owens said:

Yes, and I wept, too. Your words to Michael, and then his to you opened the floodgates. These are terrifying, courageous and beautiful words. Beautiful.

Thank you, Parker. Sometimes i feel so guilty .. he could have married someone healthy, someone he didn't need to worry about so much ... i'm very lucky xoxxo

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On 02/16/2017 05:18 AM, hohochan657 said:

I will storm the heavens for you, just because both Michael and you deserve a long, happy and healthy life together. I will argue with Asclepius to guarantee your continuous well being ...

:hug:

Thank you hoho! Evoking some help from the Gods might be good! Thank you for taking that on. :)

 

tim xox

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On 02/16/2017 05:26 AM, MacGreg said:

Doesn't matter that I don't know you on a personal level, tim. This poem hurts me. Plain and simple. Hugs to you and hugs to Michael for giving you the love and support you need and deserve. Hope you're feeling a little better today. xo

Thanks Mac! Yeah i think i do ... got some drugs today to help fight this flu. But honestly i have to do better...and see the doc sooner. Sorry if this hurt ... i didn't mean for it to. Thanks for reading and your kind comments.

 

tim xxoxo

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dughlas

The tears are because I fear for you ... because you are tim, little brother ... but, I smile too because you are tim, who Michael loves.
Namaste to you both.

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On 02/16/2017 08:12 AM, dughlas said:

The tears are because I fear for you ... because you are tim, little brother ... but, I smile too because you are tim, who Michael loves.

Namaste to you both.

Aw dugh, i'm no worse than usual. But keeping silent has been hard, so what do poets do? They write it out. That's all this is just fighting back. Hugs and namaste big brother.

 

love tim xoxo

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On 02/16/2017 09:30 AM, Lyssa said:

I am still a bit out of words. But I read it and it is both sad and wonderful. :hug:

Thanks Lyssa.. dont be sad... i'm not worse...just need to get it out... thank you for reading :heart:

 

tim xoox

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On 02/16/2017 12:46 PM, Lux Apollo said:

I think you already know my thoughts, to one extent or another. Thanks for sharing this. :hug::heart:

Yeah .. I know. Thanks lux xxoo

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Ashi

It's sad, but I can't shake off the thought, your husband is lucky to have you, to find life, among adversary.

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On 02/16/2017 02:01 PM, Ashi said:

It's sad, but I can't shake off the thought, your husband is lucky to have you, to find life, among adversary.

Ashi dont be sad. I'm alive, i'm here and i promised me and Mike i'd do better looking after myself. We're lucky to have each other. Thanks for your comments.. hugs xoxo

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Caz Pedroso

I'll add my tears to the others wept.

 

But, know you always have friends here and of curse you will always have Michael. We're all grateful to have you as well.

 

:hug:

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On 02/19/2017 06:16 AM, Caz Pedroso said:

I'll add my tears to the others wept.

 

But, know you always have friends here and of curse you will always have Michael. We're all grateful to have you as well.

 

:hug:

Aww dont cry .. so many people in this boat. And well, considering what happened to me, well i'm lucky this is the worst thing. And to be fair things turned out pretty well for me. So onward and upward.. thanks Caz. xoxxoxo

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AC Benus

Your poems always touch me very deeply, so much so it's often hard to find the right words for a review....
Here, take this, plz :hug:

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On 02/20/2017 09:14 AM, AC Benus said:

Your poems always touch me very deeply, so much so it's often hard to find the right words for a review....

Here, take this, plz :hug:

Awww, thanks AC ... hugs are always welcome.

 

Thanks for reading xoxoxo

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