timmy's poetry - 29. An Elegy in Blue

Tears

15 minutes ago, Kitt said:

I can't say I truly understand it fully, but the important thing is that you and Mike do!

thank you Kitt .. we do and i guess unless you're part of our lifestyle, it is harder to understand.. but i think molly does... 

55 minutes ago, mollyhousemouse said:

Tears

i knew you'd get it ... i'm glad that day is done. xoxox

24 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

 

i knew you'd get it ... i'm that day is done. xoxox

And today is a day to show lessons learned appreciation and gratitude

16 minutes ago, Parker Owens said:

Sometimes poetry is about anger, sometimes about nature. But here you give me the tears of fear, of reaffirmation, of love. What you give to each other in this radiates hope to everyone. xo

thank you Parker xoxxo

19 minutes ago, mollyhousemouse said:

And today is a day to show lessons learned appreciation and gratitude

Yes, ma'am... i will be obedient and grateful

Beautiful tim... I get being taught, fear, doubt the disappointment. 
Never doubt the love Mike has for you. 
Great Job lil brother! XOXO

38 minutes ago, BlindAmbition said:

Beautiful tim... I get being taught, fear, doubt the disappointment. 
Never doubt the love Mike has for you. 
Great Job lil brother! XOXO

i'd done something wrong after getting the same answer two other times

pissed Him off .. so He showed me what things could feel like if i chose 

to break our vows and change how we live. i got the message.  that show, not tell thing works in real life too

thanks JP xoxoo

Perfectly said. Some lessons take a jolt of reality to learn, especially when stubbornness is blocking the way. The important thing is that you ruminated over the wrongs, understood the impact of the discipline, and followed through with making amends. 

18 minutes ago, MacGreg said:

Perfectly said. Some lessons take a jolt of reality to learn, especially when stubbornness is blocking the way. The important thing is that you ruminated over the wrongs, understood the impact of the discipline, and followed through with making amends. 

it was a rough day. made me see how things could be depending on my choices. it also helped me understand the flow of our relationship and to remember the promises i made. As well, it made me see who He is because when i figured it out and told Him, there were no recriminations. 

thank you, Sir.. xo

A wonderful written poem. I am glad, that everything is right for you. XOXOX Sis

14 minutes ago, Lyssa said:

A wonderful written poem. I am glad, that everything is right for you. XOXOX Sis

thanks, Sis xoxox .. yeah, it's really good.. xxoxo

I tried to think of something different to say about this than what i usually say about your poems, but then i decided to not mess with the truth. 

This is as always wonderfully written.

The words are powerful and the story they tell is clear. Especially with the happy outcome. A short story in a few powerful, emotional words.  

powerful, beautiful words. the fear, the love shines through to me. we have to face the fears so we can see the love standing right there. its there tim, i see it all the time. peace

3 hours ago, Caz Pedroso said:

I tried to think of something different to say about this than what i usually say about your poems, but then i decided to not mess with the truth. 

 

This is as always wonderfully written.

 

The words are powerful and the story they tell is clear. Especially with the happy outcome. A short story in a few powerful, emotional words.  

 

 

thank you Cazzie xoxo

22 minutes ago, mogwhy said:

powerful, beautiful words. the fear, the love shines through to me. we have to face the fears so we can see the love standing right there. its there tim, i see it all the time. peace

thanks so much moggy xo

7 minutes ago, Reader1810 said:

I think I know what you're saying with these words. So, in the end, I smiled. 

 

Don't know how, but I almost missed this.Ooops, best pay better attention.... 

thanks very much Reader xo

My boy, you are an amazing partner in our life together, I cannot be who or what I am without you. Yesterday was hard, but you saw, and I'm proud of you. M xxx

7 hours ago, MichaelS36 said:

My boy, you are an amazing partner in our life together, I cannot be who or what I am without you. Yesterday was hard, but you saw, and I'm proud of you. M xxx

thank you Michael ... xo