timmy's poetry - 46. Suspension

18 minutes ago, WolfM said:

Beautifully done and so easy to picture.  I think I could have some fun with this Thank you for the idea.

Thanks Wolfie ...  wonders what you're thinking

5 minutes ago, Caz Pedroso said:

Paints a very vivid image. Wonderful as always timmie  

thanks cazzie xoxo

1 hour ago, MacGreg said:

Each rope, each knot tied with purpose and care. An intimacy based not just in the physical body but in the abdication of control and a willingness to trust. Submitting to these new experiences shows what a fine boy you are, tim. I know Mike is very proud of you. I am, too. 

yes Sir .. it's physical but yes so mental as well ... just the wrapping and knots Sir's touch, was sending me into subspace, but He kept pulling me back.. He said you need to stay with me for at least this time .. 

thank you Sir. i want always to do my best for Michael, You and John, Sir

29 minutes ago, mad_artist said:

beautiful description tim of a suspension dance!

lucky boy you are to be given such treatment.

thank you sean.  i am very lucky and very lucky to have had my mind opened earlier this year ... i had been so closed off but now, now i want to try everything i can, there is nothing to be afraid of .. not really

You tell it, and it's beautiful to envision.. 

nicely done tim. 

16 minutes ago, Defiance19 said:

You tell it, and it's beautiful to envision.. 

nicely done tim. 

thank you Def ... it was really a beautiful experience

3 minutes ago, Reader1810 said:

"Suspension Dance": I need to borrow @mad_artist words to describe what I envision through your words, tim.  Your words speak of exquisite moments between a choreographer and his protege. 

 

They vary slightly, but this one seems to suit your role in the scene quite well, I think it also explains John's role.

Definition of protégé: one who is protected or trained or whose "career" is furthered by a person of experience, prominence, or influence

 

As alway, nicely done, tim.

 

PS: Thank you for sharing this special time with us.  

i think it fits beautifully, Reader .. thank you.. and you're also right about mad_artist's choice of words.. 

Beautiful description lil brother. So happy for you. Definitely a lucky boy! XOXO

8 hours ago, MacGreg said:

Each rope, each knot tied with purpose and care. An intimacy based not just in the physical body but in the abdication of control and a willingness to trust. Submitting to these new experiences shows what a fine boy you are, tim. I know Mike is very proud of you. I am, too. 

Obviously you understand, Mac, but I think many do not realize just how emotional it can be for the top as well. It certainly moved me and John also.  tim also thanked John perfectly. 

54 minutes ago, BlindAmbition said:

Beautiful description lil brother. So happy for you. Definitely a lucky boy! XOXO

thank you very much jp xoxo

tim, my boy, again watching you do this, giving yourself as you do to whomever you are serving is a beautiful thing to observe. you are the boy most Doms dream of .. thank you my boy xo

Such a powerful set of images, the scenes come to me in black and white. And each one is a string and a rope to make the reader your puppet. This is going to haunt me. 

2 minutes ago, MichaelS36 said:

tim, my boy, again watching you do this, giving yourself as you do to whomever you are serving is a beautiful thing to observe. you are the boy most Doms dream of .. thank you my boy xo

thank you, Michael  xoxo

the poem is excellent boy.. since I didn't mention it earlier. xox

Well done. Definitely feel a small ache of the suspension-tension while reading.

22 minutes ago, Lux Apollo said:

Well done. Definitely feel a small ache of the suspension-tension while reading.

thanks Lux .. i'm soooo glad i did it and i'd do it again and again and again... 

14 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

Such a powerful set of images, the scenes come to me in black and white. And each one is a string and a rope to make the reader your puppet. This is going to haunt me. 

thanks Parker .. interesting you see it in black and white... it was something very special .. thanks for reading and your support xooo