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    Mikiesboy
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timmy's poetry - 67. anniversary and beacon

anniversary

 

You took my hand many years ago

For me You stand and take life’s blow

I came to you a broken thing

A flightless bird on broken wing

Gently you lay me in a cage

To keep me safe, quiet my rage

Your belief in us remains dauntless

Thank You for these years of happiness

 

 

 

beacon

 

I watch and wait

Speak softly, holding out my hand

For you to take, or not, as you will

My love for you

Leaks from my weak eyes

But my heart is strong

My will, faith, and my trust endure

And I will be a quiet beacon in the dark

Until you find your own light, once more.

 

 

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Thank you for reading!
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mayday

I love "beacon". It speaks to me. Has moved me to tears. Especially the last line, but even more the last two words.Thank you for sharing.

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22 minutes ago, mayday said:

I love "beacon". It speaks to me. Has moved me to tears. Especially the last line, but even more the last two words.Thank you for sharing.

i'd take your hand if i could.. thank you for sharing your feelings. this poem means a lot to me and i hope to the person i wrote it for. much love and hugs, mayday xo

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Unshakable love and caring in anniversary. That you know it and feel it makes my heart glad.

 

In beacon, I see that love and caring returned ten-fold.

 

These strong words show the love you have for each other.

 

Happy almost anniversary, tim and Mike. 

 

As always, nicely done, tim, nicely done. :) 

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Parker Owens
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anniversary speaks to me in reflective words of steadfastness, of love, of shelter. 

beacon shines in the darkness, radiating words of hope and faith and strength. 

One seems to send the spirit inward, the other, outward. Together, they are even more beautiful than they are singly. 

 

Happy Anniversary, tim and Michael. 

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FormerMember4

Anniversary shows love, faith, and trust. While Beacon shows distance, sadness, and hope. Both beautiful in their sentiment tim. xoxo

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Mikiesboy
23 hours ago, Reader1810 said:

Unshakable love and caring in anniversary. That you know it and feel it makes my heart glad.

 

In beacon, I see that love and caring returned ten-fold.

 

These strong words show the love you have for each other.

 

Happy almost anniversary, tim and Mike. 

 

As always, nicely done, tim, nicely done. :) 

thank you, Reader   i appreciate you reading these xo

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Mikiesboy
23 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

anniversary speaks to me in reflective words of steadfastness, of love, of shelter. 

beacon shines in the darkness, radiating words of hope and faith and strength. 

One seems to send the spirit inward, the other, outward. Together, they are even more beautiful than they are singly. 

 

Happy Anniversary, tim and Michael. 

Thank you Parker.  Michael is all of those things to me, i'm very lucky.  xxoxo

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Mikiesboy
23 hours ago, BHopper2 said:

Truly wonderful poems, tim.

Thank you very much, A. I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment! xo

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Mikiesboy
22 hours ago, BlindAmbition said:

Anniversary shows love, faith, and trust. While Beacon shows distance, sadness, and hope. Both beautiful in their sentiment tim. xoxo

thanks very much jp. i appreciate you reading and your insightful comments

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Defiance19

Lovely, tim. I like the assurance and certainly in Anniversary. 

 Beacon is such a statement on faith,  and trust that you will always be there, no matter what. 

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