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timmy's poetry - 72. Dead Old Man

Finally he's gone. Don't truly know how i feel. So there may be more poems, or not.

I don’t care

Runs around my head

Are you really and truly dead?

Why should it matter to me at all?

You hated me and all I am

Why do I even give a damn?

I say I don't

But is that the truth?

You ruined my life, stole my youth

They will bury you with your clan

Because you're a dead man

My dead old man.

There's no need to say sorry, or anything really. It's done, time bury him and the past.
Copyright © 2017 Mikiesboy; All Rights Reserved.
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The content presented here is for informational or educational purposes only. These are just the authors' personal opinions and knowledge.
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What a difference one word makes! Your last line blew me away. How you emerge from bitterness and the past ... may your present and future be all the brighter.

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On 1/29/2018 at 9:43 PM, Defiance19 said:

:hug:❤️ I wish peace for you, my friend.. 

:heart: thank you Def xo

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On 1/29/2018 at 9:47 PM, Reader1810 said:

You stand ten feet tall tim, don’t ever forget that. 

 

:hug: for now and whenever you need or want one... 

 

 

thank you Reader.. i appreciate that xoxoxo 

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On 1/29/2018 at 9:56 PM, BHopper2 said:

I'm here for you my friend, and it's my hope that some of the pain and wounds from the past finally start to heal. Both you and Mike are in my thoughts and prayers, tonight. :hug::hug:

thank you A.. i appreciate your friendship very much xoxo thanks for all of your support xo

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On 1/30/2018 at 12:30 AM, deville said:

A bruisingly complex set of emotions , beautifully enunciated. ‘ My dead old man’ , a powerful end. Blessed Be ! 

thanks very much deville xo  much appreciated 

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On 1/30/2018 at 6:29 AM, dughlas said:

Mum and I love you little brother.

:heart: love you both, dugh xoxo thank you

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On 1/30/2018 at 8:37 AM, Parker Owens said:

How well you write some very hard thoughts and conflicting feelings. You are loved, and held and remembered.

thank you Parker.. love you too xoxox :heart: 

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On 1/30/2018 at 12:08 PM, mayday said:

What a difference one word makes! Your last line blew me away. How you emerge from bitterness and the past ... may your present and future be all the brighter.

:heart: thank you mayday.. you're very sweet.. much appreciated! 

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On 1/30/2018 at 3:00 PM, Freerider said:

Good riddance.

And hopefully some kind of closure for you.

thank's Free .. yeah it does i think.. thank you xo

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