Disasters, Delights and Other Detours - 23. Three May Cinquains

Lovely.  

1 hour ago, Starrynight22 said:

Lovely.  

 

 

Thank you. I am happy you read these. 

I think my favorite part is 

"A constellation promising and bright "

I am partial to the stars and the great everything they stretch out to 

52 minutes ago, Starrynight22 said:

I think my favorite part is 

"A constellation promising and bright "

 

 

I am partial to the stars and the great everything they stretch out to 

I, too am partial to the night sky.  I am glad that particular line connected with you.

I agree these are lovely ... i like stars but can't see them often . Sometimes we can see one or two bright ones. Just too much light pollution... but these are wonderful! xoxo

I am partial to smiles

that dazzle like stars

And eyes that hold promises

of trips beyond Mars

Sorry, Parker... got carried away... you poetry always inspires me, even when I am reluctant. These were wonderful...  

4 hours ago, Mikiesboy said:

I agree these are lovely ... i like stars but can't see them often . Sometimes we can see one or two bright ones. Just too much light pollution... but these are wonderful! xoxo

Thank you, tim. Some constellations are old friends; all one needs is a glimpse of a few points of light to know they are shining there. Kind of like some wonderful people I know, too...  xxoo. p

3 hours ago, Headstall said:

I am partial to smiles

that dazzle like stars

And eyes that hold promises

of trips beyond Mars

 

Sorry, Parker... got carried away... you poetry always inspires me, even when I am reluctant. These were wonderful...  

I am glad these inspired and made you smile. I love your response verse! Stars and constellations are some of the greatest delights of any time. Thank you, my friend. 

2 hours ago, Valkyrie said:

I think I'll go star-gazing now... lovely poems, as always.   

Thank you. Summer stargazing is one of my favorite things. Glad you liked these. 

These all remind me of the innocence of play. The rising 'sign' of the beloved in the sky, the foggy mirror showing the true pair of carefree boys, the happy union of voice and emotions. A lovely set. They make me feel "Summer is coming!" 

Well done  

On 5/9/2018 at 1:01 AM, AC Benus said:

These all remind me of the innocence of play. The rising 'sign' of the beloved in the sky, the foggy mirror showing the true pair of carefree boys, the happy union of voice and emotions. A lovely set. They make me feel "Summer is coming!" 

 

Well done  

You made my evening when I saw this. You divined my meaning perfectly in the first, and in the third. And you seemed to hear, as I did, a kind of harmony in the second. Thank you for  reading this set, and for your thoughts.