Ahhhh! The plot is thickening. The characters have developed perfectly. You have balanced your pace so there is riveting action, informative scene setting, and a richness to your tableau. Everything seems to be going so well, and yet, your beta reader drops a bomb on you.
"It's just falling flat."
What are you supposed to do? Where do you turn? How can you enrich and round out your characters? How about a little emotional rescue?
Let's try filling in the back story of y
December 14th 2022 - Holidays and Observances
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Christian feast day:
Folcwin
John of the Cross
John III of the Sedre (Syriac Orthodox Church)
Matronian
Nicasius of Rheims
Nimatullah Kassab (Maronite Church)
Spyridon (Western Church)
Venantius For
December 13th 2022 - Holidays and Observances
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Further information: December 13 (Eastern Orthodox liturgics)
Christian feast day:
St Antiochus of Sulcis
St Judoc aka St Joyce
St Lucy
St Odile of Alsace
Acadian Remembrance Day (Acadians)
National Day (Saint Lucia)
The plot of this novel is riddled with cliches. A novelist, Caz, who is staying in a country cottage to write her next book. She meets a young fan, nine-year-old Theo. Through Theo she meets his mother Ann and finds out that Theo's father Alan was murdered three years ago in strange circumstances and the killer was never caught. Then Theo confesses to Caz that he killed his father. Caz and her boyfriend Will set about finding out who really killed Alan. They do and everyone lives happily ever af
Paramount has done such a fine job with Star Trek, turning it over to the 10,000 Woke Monkey's Typing script shop, Gene Roddenberry wouldn't even recognize it and would be horribly embarrassed by it.
Star Trek offered an optimistic, idealistic post-scarcity vision of the future. It offered insights into technology that inspired its child viewers to grow up, become engineers and invent the tech. What the hell were they thinking? They took something inspiring and wonderful, then shit all over
Step back from the candy canes and cherry cordials, the chocolate coins and the Christmas cookies... otherwise the reality in this month's story review by @chris191070 might just take a bite out of you. The holidays can be a time when people are usually kinder to their fellow man, but what happens when being that good person means more than holding open a door or saying please or thank you?
Finding Good Trouble
by @Ronyx
Reviewer: chris191070
Status: Complete
Word Count: 72,532
December 12th 2022 - Holidays and Observances
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Christian feast day:
Abra of Poitiers
Columba of Terryglass
Corentin of Quimper
Edburga of Minster-in-Thanet
Feast of Our Lady of Guadalupe
Finnian of Clonard
Vicelinus
Constitution Day (Rus
I will tell you off the start, I had some fun this week
I had the pleasure of stepping in to do the Ask An Author for Aaron this week. It was kind of nice to give him a much needed week off. Still not sure the reason for his absence, but make sure you check out the blog and hazard a guess .
So what is new and exciting in my life this week? Well a whole lot of nothing. I'm in what I call the 2 weeks of hell at my real life job that happens every year. Luckily that is done and over with
December 11th 2022 - Holidays and Observances
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Christian feast day:
Cian
Daniel the Stylite
María de las Maravillas de Jesús
Pope Damasus I
Sabinus of Piacenza
Victoricus, Fuscian, and Gentian
December 11 (Eastern Orthodox liturgics)
Est
Cheating (Part Two)
Welcome back everybody! ((Hugz)) As I’m writing this, I’m hoping that I didn’t offend anyone or step on any toes as far as their writing process is concerned with Part One of this article. I’m writing these back to back, and it will be a short while before you guys get to see them, so my apologies if I sounded like I was singling out any kind of writing style or anything like that. I wasn’t, promise. These articles come mostly from stuff that I’ve found in my own writing
December 10th 2022 - Holidays and Observances
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Alfred Nobel Day or Nobeldagen (Sweden)
Christian feast day:
Behnam, Sarah, and the Forty Martyrs (Syriac Orthodox Church)
Eulalia of Mérida
Karl Barth (Episcopal Church (USA))
Thomas Merton (Episcopal Church (USA))
Translation of the Holy House of
Magic is in the air!
PT#95
Sam got a magical advent calendar from gran Lulu. So far, the chocolate and marzipan were delicious but magical? What does the calendar’s magic do to Sam?
PT#96
Looking for the box with Christmas decorations in the attic, your protagonist pushes cardboard boxes around. Suddenly something strange drops on the floor. After a closer examination, it turns out to be a mechanical arm. After playing around with it for a while it suddenly attaches itself to them,
December 9th 2022 - Holidays and Observances
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Anna's Day, marks the day to start the preparation process of the lutefisk to be consumed on Christmas Eve, as well as a Swedish name day, celebrating all people named Anna. (Sweden and Finland)
Armed Forces Day (Peru)
Christian feast day:
Feast of the Conception of the Most Holy Theotokos by St. Anne (Eastern Orthodox C
Anyone who's watched Dead Poets Society is familiar with the phrase carpe diem. Even if you haven't watched this iconic Robin Williams movie, Myr featured this phrase as one of his Words of the Day last week. Carpe diem was also the theme for the Summer 2009 Anthology. So seize the day and reacquaint yourself with the stories from this past anthology.
https://gayauthors.org/stories/browse/category/22-2009-summer-carpe-diem/
December 8th 2022 - Holidays and Observances
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Battle Day (Falkland Islands)
Bodhi Day (Japan)
CARICOM–Cuba Day (Caribbean Community (CARICOM) and Cuba)
Christian feast day:
Budoc (Beuzec) of Dol
Clement of Ohrid (Julian Calendar), and its related observances:
Student's Day (Bulgaria)
December 7th 2022 - Holidays and Observances
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Armed Forces Flag Day (India)
Christian feast day:
Aemilianus (Greek Church)
Ambrose
Maria Giuseppa Rossello
Sabinus of Spoleto
December 7 (Eastern Orthodox liturgics)
Eve of the Immaculate Conception-related observances
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Windlass comes from the Old Norse word 'vinda' (to wind) + 'ass' (a pole or beam). The latter part is similar to the Gothic word 'ans' (a pole or pillar). The word windlass was brought into Middle English as an alteration of the Anglo-Norman French word windas around 1400.
Windlass type devices are used in modern ships to raise the anchors, whereas capstans were used in sailing ships. The main difference is windlasses are horizontal and capstans are vertical.
The short story as a form is challenging. It condenses everything about writing into a short piece that can be read in a sitting.
It's a good place for a beginner to start because it forces you to be concise. Every word matters.
You can easily get lost if you try writing a novel first. The short story is a nice, tame hundred acre wood to play in.
Razzle-dazzle, what an interesting combination of words.
Dazzle is an intransitive verb: 1) to lose vision when looking at a bright light; 2a) to shine brilliantly; 2b) to arouse admiration by an impressive display.
Transitive verb: 1) to overpower with light; 2) to impress deeply, overpower, or confound with brilliance.
It’s also a noun as dazzle or dazzler.
Dazzle came into usage in the 15th century as the intransitive verb 1.
It also has a bunch of primary synonyms an
Authors should be cautious about using razzle-dazzle in their prose. If it works, you get the fireworks you were hoping for. If not, you get a messy fizzle.
Write, rewrite, drink heavily, cuss, rewrite and hope for the best.
This is a great article and I'm sure it resonates with many authors on GA, it certainly does for me. I wrote a one-chapter short story intending it to be a one-off, readers loved it and it ended up being the first in a series of stories, some are short one-chapter stories and others are novels of varying length. It's a great way to experiment and find out if there is a readership out there for what you are writing. If you look at Carlos Hazday's CJ series it is a mix of short one-chapter and lon
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