Changes by Mikiesboy

[Mikiesboy]

need to remember to post that tomorrow ... lol

[Reader1810]

14 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

need to remember to post that tomorrow ... lol

 

[mollyhousemouse]

time to get to bed so that the story posting fairy will post the next chapter

good night all!

 

Spoiler

the story posting fairy is the lesser known second cousin of the tooth fairy, dontcha know!

 

[Reader1810]

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"Lous, he's just a kid." 

 

We moved toward the entrance. "Not anymore he's not. Just think about what he's gone through, Don."

 

 

Damn, tim. I’ve just started reading Ch 2, and you’ve stopped me in my tracks already. Just a couple of short lines, but they say a lot....

 

Okay, back to Ch 2 to see if my mind wondered in the right direction. 

[Reader1810]

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Is the kitchen capable of that, Louis?" Don grinned broadly now. 

 

I smirked back and sighed. "Oh, I'm sure the kitchen is more than capable. It may even go as far as homemade chocolate fudge cake." 

 

 

I love how you wrote this tim. It’s fun and lighthearted, and a good icebreaker to put Max at ease. 

 

[Mikiesboy]

7 hours ago, Reader1810 said:

 

Damn, tim. I’ve just started reading Ch 2, and you’ve stopped me in my tracks already. Just a couple of short lines, but they say a lot....

 

Okay, back to Ch 2 to see if my mind wondered in the right direction. 

a lot of things i kinda base on my own experience... at 16 .. i was no longer a kid... after a year on the street i was about 30 ... but still sometimes very much 16

[Mikiesboy]

7 hours ago, Reader1810 said:

 

I love how you wrote this tim. It’s fun and lighthearted, and a good icebreaker to put Max at ease. 

 

thank you Reader ...  mmm chocolate cake  

[Reader1810]

Just now, Mikiesboy said:

a lot of things i kinda base on my own experience... at 16 .. i was no longer a kid... after a year on the street i was about 30 ... but still sometimes very much 16

The heart is for you, tim. Wish that knowledge came only from your imagination. 

[Mikiesboy]

2 minutes ago, Reader1810 said:

The heart is for you, tim. Wish that knowledge came only from your imagination. 

ah.. you know... it is what it is and it lets me write Max.. hopefully well.

[Reader1810]

27 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

ah.. you know... it is what it is and it lets me write Max.. hopefully well.

So far, so good. 

[Mikiesboy]

Thanks for all of your great comments and for reading Chapter 2 everyone!

[mollyhousemouse]

5 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

Thanks for all of your great comments and for reading Chapter 2 everyone!

thanks for a great chapter!

[Reader1810]

7 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

Thanks for all of your great comments and for reading Chapter 2 everyone!

 

1 minute ago, mollyhousemouse said:

thanks for a great chapter!

 

what molly said... xoxo 

[MichaelS36]

Yes, it's a real place: since 1967. 

 

[mollyhousemouse]

1 minute ago, MichaelS36 said:

Yes, it's a real place: since 1967. 

wonderful to know Sir!

tim's writing is so rich, it wouldn't surprise me that he'd "made it up" but knowing it's a real place adds dimension to the story

 

[Reader1810]

17 minutes ago, MichaelS36 said:

Yes, it's a real place: since 1967. 

 

 

Checked out their website. I need to go there...

[AC Benus]

16 minutes ago, MichaelS36 said:

Yes, it's a real place: since 1967. 

 

Wow, and they still use charcoal to broil the burgers? They must taste great!

 

I love little places like this. Our neighborhood equivalent, I think opened about that same time, closed a couple years ago. I thought someone would move in right away and keep the burger customers, but so far, no. It sits abandoned, sadly.  

 

Thanks for posting this!

[AC Benus]

This was ours 🙁

 

Edited January 20, 2019 by AC Benus

[Mikiesboy]

1 minute ago, AC Benus said:

This was ours 🙁

 

wow.. That's a shame... it could say.. WELCOME TO AC'S     

[AC Benus]

2 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

wow.. That's a shame... it could say.. WELCOME TO AC'S     

That means I'd have to grind my meat daily.... hmmmmmmm

 

LOL

[Former Member]

2 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

wow.. That's a shame... it could say.. WELCOME TO AC'S     

Probably the victim of the high cost of living here in the Bay Area. The real estate is probably worth too much. And it’s difficult to find employees who can afford to live in the area.

[Brayon]

42 minutes ago, MichaelS36 said:

Yes, it's a real place: since 1967. 

 

I should have asked when I Beta Read for tim. I took Johnny's as being Johnny Rockets.

[Brayon]

34 minutes ago, AC Benus said:

That means I'd have to grind my meat daily.... hmmmmmmm

That sounds like it would hurt, LOL

[Mikiesboy]

12 minutes ago, BHopper2 said:

That sounds like it would hurt, LOL

hehe

[Mikiesboy]

32 minutes ago, BHopper2 said:

I should have asked when I Beta Read for tim. I took Johnny's as being Johnny Rockets.

No idea what that is.