timmy's poetry - 28. Suicide

Based on your introduction I read this in a black comedy inflection. I pictured a George Carlin type delivering it with the over the top facial expressions and vocal inflections. Sometimes it just helps to find whatever "humor" you can in a tough situation. I think it captured that perfectly. 

37 minutes ago, phoenix_0826 said:

Based on your introduction I read this in a black comedy inflection. I pictured a George Carlin type delivering it with the over the top facial expressions and vocal inflections. Sometimes it just helps to find whatever "humor" you can in a tough situation. I think it captured that perfectly. 

  thank you.. for getting it.. sadly i didnt think it sounded all that serious so a bunch of people didnt see the intro.. 

i took you at your word and didn't read more into than you intended. it reminded me of a tv show i watched, way too  many years ago to tell you, called Blackadder.

you keep fighting 

1 hour ago, mogwhy said:

i took you at your word and didn't read more into than you intended. it reminded me of a tv show i watched, way too  many years ago to tell you, called Blackadder.

you keep fighting 

I loved Blackadder!!! Completely different genre, but Are You Being Served is another old favorite too

My analytical mind says the poem was meant to be a black comedy as @phoenix_0826 so accurately described it ...

but my emotional mind ... 

anyway, sending all my love to you tim, and all my positive energy as well !

7 hours ago, hohochan657 said:

My analytical mind says the poem was meant to be a black comedy as @phoenix_0826 so accurately described it ...

 

but my emotional mind ... 

 

anyway, sending all my love to you tim, and all my positive energy as well !

  

thanks hoho .. i'm okay, much better than i was a few days ago.. doing what the doc says. xoxo

11 hours ago, mogwhy said:

i took you at your word and didn't read more into than you intended. it reminded me of a tv show i watched, way too  many years ago to tell you, called Blackadder.

you keep fighting 

watched all the seasons of blackadder ..lol... never quit, eh, moggy?   thanks for your support.. xoxo

21 hours ago, hoaluu said:

Light reading  

 

Send you lots of 

You'll be fine. 

 

thanks .. i will be.. appreciate your comments xoxox 

20 hours ago, BlindAmbition said:

Remember... if I don't give up. You Don't! I won't give up! Love Ya, XOXO

i'll never forget, jp .. not never.. xoxo

19 hours ago, clochette said:

Keep breathing.

One day at a time.

You'll make it.

I have faith in you. 

Love you.

i will clo...thank you, your words help xoxoxo

18 hours ago, BHopper2 said:

Good days, and Bad days. I know all about them. It's another poem of your's Tim I feel you're taking straight from my soul or mind. Excellent work.

 

thanks for you comments, BH!  they mean a lot xoxoxox

18 hours ago, Defiance19 said:

 

❤️❤️

 

 

hugs Def.xoxxo i'm good.. lil tired but good xox

17 hours ago, AC Benus said:

Yeah, my thoughts exactly...

 

Hang in there, Tim. You need time I think. Hugs 

thanks AC!  i need time .. and i'm glad it's 'friday' oxoxo

Hi tim, here is my promised answer.

I think it is good, that you use your power of words to express yourself this way. Some time ago we both discussed about the empowering by having a gift to write. So I really hope, that it empowers you. The poem itself is written so well as always. The only thing is, that I don`t want my little brother to be in so much pain. XOXOXO Sis

2 hours ago, Lyssa said:

Hi tim, here is my promised answer.

I think it is good, that you use your power of words to express yourself this way. Some time ago we both discussed about the empowering by having a gift to write. So I really hope, that it empowers you. The poem itself is written so well as always. The only thing is, that I don`t want my little brother to be in so much pain. XOXOXO Sis

thanks Sis... writing helps me so much in so many ways.. my pain lessens each day .. today i feel calm and peaceful... happy to be at work.. looking forward to the weekend.. looking forward to getting up tomorrow and writing.. i want to finish Changes before july.. so i have some work to do.. but i'll do it.. .love you to bits my dear Sister.. xoxoxxo

4 hours ago, Mikiesboy said:

watched all the seasons of blackadder ..lol... never quit, eh, moggy?   thanks for your support.. xoxo

not sure if i know how to quit

"Pharmaceuticals are terrific toys"

A strong poem with roots in cold dispassionate despair. Well written.