Ravings of a Rabid Werewolf - Poetry by Wolf - 6. Submission

You're full of suprises Wolf.. shall i call you Sir?

A wonderful description of D/s. Greetings, WolfM, always nice to meet a fellow Dom. 

Absolutely feckin beautiful Wolfie. Such a sexy side to you shown with respect and honesty.

4 hours ago, mogwhy said:

you brought the scene to life with your words. well done

Thank you Mogwhy

3 hours ago, chris191070 said:

Really good, brought the scene to life

Thanks Chris

2 hours ago, Mikiesboy said:

You're full of suprises Wolf.. shall i call you Sir?

Thanks tim   It's fun to surprise people.  There's a fun sense of satisfaction that my D/s poem is chapter 6 and brings my poetry word count up to 666

23 minutes ago, MichaelS36 said:

A wonderful description of D/s. Greetings, WolfM, always nice to meet a fellow Dom. 

Thank you Michael.  A privilege to meet you here.

19 minutes ago, BlindAmbition said:

Absolutely feckin beautiful Wolfie. Such a sexy side to you shown with respect and honesty.

Thank you JP   I'll admit, I thought of you and tim as soon as I hit publish.

7 minutes ago, WolfM said:

Thank you JP   I'll admit, I thought of you and tim as soon as I hit publish.

We've talked about this before. Safe to call you sir now?

You are really growing in your ability and confidence. Your poem is an interesting look at the roles in a dominant/submissive relationship. I especially enjoyed the tenderness in the last few lines. My only criticism is just a grammatical correction. In the middle stanza, I believe the line "And it is I who is at your command" should be "And it is I who am at your command." Thanks Wolf for another good poem. Keep up the good work!

I have always believed that the sub has the control. They control the actions, pace, and intensity. Three words: go, slow, stop (but not those exact words) control every move and action the Dom takes. However, once the sub submits and gives the go, they are at the Dom's mercy unless one of the other two words are said. That's why my control words have always been either in another language or really random off the wall words that don't normally come up during sex...like kumquat or pastrami. 

On 8/10/2017 at 8:31 PM, BlindAmbition said:

We've talked about this before. Safe to call you sir now?

I'm going to just grin and leave it there, boy

23 hours ago, JeffreyL said:

You are really growing in your ability and confidence. Your poem is an interesting look at the roles in a dominant/submissive relationship. I especially enjoyed the tenderness in the last few lines. My only criticism is just a grammatical correction. In the middle stanza, I believe the line "And it is I who is at your command" should be "And it is I who am at your command." Thanks Wolf for another good poem. Keep up the good work!

Thanks Jeff.  My confidence, yes, my ability... we'll see

12 hours ago, JayT said:

I have always believed that the sub has the control. They control the actions, pace, and intensity. Three words: go, slow, stop (but not those exact words) control every move and action the Dom takes. However, once the sub submits and gives the go, they are at the Dom's mercy unless one of the other two words are said. That's why my control words have always been either in another language or really random off the wall words that don't normally come up during sex...like kumquat or pastrami. 

Thanks JayT   That was actually my thought when I started writing this.  It was just going to be the center portion talking about how the sub is the one controlling me.  His slow and safe word are commands to me, his limits are discussed before anything starts, I try to push him to his limit and bring his the pleasure he craves in whatever form that is (and yes I get my own in the process).  When I wrote the other two, it just seemed right to combine them, though I did consider posting each one on it's own.

1 minute ago, WolfM said:

Thanks JayT   That was actually my thought when I started writing this.  It was just going to be the center portion talking about how the sub is the one controlling me.  His slow and safe word are commands to me, his limits are discussed before anything starts, I try to push him to his limit and bring his the pleasure he craves in whatever form that is (and yes I get my own in the process).  When I wrote the other two, it just seemed right to combine them, though I did consider posting each one on it's own.

They work best together I honestly believe...The beggining shows that the Dom is in charge at the moment, the middle shows the hidden agreement/truth between the two...The end shows how that agreement manifests in reality. 

3 minutes ago, JayT said:

They work best together I honestly believe...The beggining shows that the Dom is in charge at the moment, the middle shows the hidden agreement/truth between the two...The end shows how that agreement manifests in reality. 

That's what I finally thought as well.  From setting the mood to taking care of the subs needs after the scene is finished.

38 minutes ago, WolfM said:

Thanks JayT   That was actually my thought when I started writing this.  It was just going to be the center portion talking about how the sub is the one controlling me.  His slow and safe word are commands to me, his limits are discussed before anything starts, I try to push him to his limit and bring his the pleasure he craves in whatever form that is (and yes I get my own in the process).  When I wrote the other two, it just seemed right to combine them, though I did consider posting each one on it's own.

Sir,

 You honor our lifestyle with love, honesty and care. Especially at end when you show the subs aftercare 

what a wonderful picture you paint with your words, WolfM

any sub would be lucky indeed to have such a Dom

again, thanks for sharing this with us

2 hours ago, BlindAmbition said:

Sir,

 You honor our lifestyle with love, honesty and care. Especially at end when you show the subs aftercare 

Aftercare is one of the best parts, especially with his head wresting on my chest.

1 hour ago, mollyhousemouse said:

what a wonderful picture you paint with your words, WolfM

any sub would be lucky indeed to have such a Dom

 

again, thanks for sharing this with us

Thank you Molly

You paint a picture so fully and vividly, I can see it before my eyes. It lingers in my mind. And you make clear that the power relationship you describe is twofold. It is finely balanced, yet each must be for the other exactly what the other needs, exactly as their spirits demand. Beautifully done. 

On 9/21/2017 at 7:15 PM, Parker Owens said:

You paint a picture so fully and vividly, I can see it before my eyes. It lingers in my mind. And you make clear that the power relationship you describe is twofold. It is finely balanced, yet each must be for the other exactly what the other needs, exactly as their spirits demand. Beautifully done. 

Thank you Parker The power relationship was the biggest point I wanted to convey with this.  I may be the Dom, but at times my sub is the one controlling me and when we work together it is great fun for us both.

Reading more and learning new things.  This helps me understand a type of relationship that I struggle with philosophically.  

On 10/16/2019 at 3:37 PM, Backwoods Boy said:

Reading more and learning new things.  This helps me understand a type of relationship that I struggle with philosophically.  

I think it's something a lot of people have philosophical issues with. Many don't understand or don't wish to. I do talk about using a leather strap on him in this. The general response is, "How could you hit someone who's tied up?" The short answer is I don't ever hit him. He takes pleasure from the strap or other implement and it's applied in a safe and caring manner. There is a comfort to both of us in assuming control of another or surrendering it. Like any other relationship, treating each other with care, respect, and love is what's important.

3 hours ago, WolfM said:

I think it's something a lot of people have philosophical issues with. Many don't understand or don't wish to. I do talk about using a leather strap on him in this. The general response is, "How could you hit someone who's tied up?" The short answer is I don't ever hit him. He takes pleasure from the strap or other implement and it's applied in a safe and caring manner. There is a comfort to both of us in assuming control of another or surrendering it. Like any other relationship, treating each other with care, respect, and love is what's important.

I would be one who would wish to understand, and your poem was more helpful than some careful explanations have been.  The power of poetry reveals itself again.   

This one brings back many fond memories of many wonderful experiences over the years. I'm old now - too old and frail to play the way I used to. The first time I ever watched a live flogging, I wondered how anyone could get off on letting themselves be beat upon. But as I watched, I realized that the Dom was working his ass off to give the sub exactly what he wanted and needed.  I was fascinated and began to explore. As I said - fond memories. Thank you.

On 4/2/2022 at 5:19 PM, Lt.Mac said:

This one brings back many fond memories of many wonderful experiences over the years. I'm old now - too old and frail to play the way I used to. The first time I ever watched a live flogging, I wondered how anyone could get off on letting themselves be beat upon. But as I watched, I realized that the Dom was working his ass off to give the sub exactly what he wanted and needed.  I was fascinated and began to explore. As I said - fond memories. Thank you.

Thank you Lt.Mac. It's not an activity I'm overly fond of since it's too close to negative experiences I've had, but my husband enjoys it from time to time and I'll do most anything for him. I worked with people to learn how to safely and properly administer the flogger. When it's done just right, and I see the pleasure he feels, it's worth it.