timmy's poetry - 60. Sentinel

Beautiful tim. A complete Fall picture in a reflective and curious moment. You are not merely an observer... You participate and engage my dear friend. xoxo

I think you put into words the poet's lot in life. Brilliant. 

You can step out of life to observe but it's inevitable, you will return to the ebb and flow.

I found this poem to be both visually inspiring, and emotional as well. Seeing the light through the leaves, and feeling a sense of wanting to be a part of it.

Loved it, tim. Loved it.

On 11/3/2017 at 10:52 AM, BlindAmbition said:

Beautiful tim. A complete Fall picture in a reflective and curious moment. You are not merely an observer... You participate and engage my dear friend. xoxo

Thank you jp,  I appreciate you reading.. xoxo

On 11/3/2017 at 11:16 AM, Parker Owens said:

You describe such golden autumn days, rare as fine amber, ever beautiful in memory. Their permanence there accentuates the changes you perceive, experience and record. I love the way you talk about having stepped out of the stream to observe it; yet the observer is always part of that stream, or so quantum physics tells us. 

Thank you Parker. I often feel like i'm just here to watch... thanks for your comments. 

On 11/3/2017 at 11:36 AM, AC Benus said:

I think you put into words the poet's lot in life. Brilliant. 

Awww, thanks very much AC.  xo

On 11/3/2017 at 1:06 PM, dughlas said:

You can step out of life to observe but it's inevitable, you will return to the ebb and flow.

Thanks dugh, I'm sure you're right.. thanks for reading.

On 11/3/2017 at 9:31 PM, BHopper2 said:

I found this poem to be both visually inspiring, and emotional as well. Seeing the light through the leaves, and feeling a sense of wanting to be a part of it.

 

Loved it, tim. Loved it.

Thanks very much A!. Glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate your comments. xo