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Occasional Poetry - 42. Meteor and Bernoulli

i>Two more in a series. Meteor was written in mid-August, and you might guess why. If I erred, gentle reader, please don't turn me in to the authorities.
Meteor
 
That Perseid, a meteor,
so blazed the sky at Baltimore,
it caused a thousand hearts to sigh
with wishes made, a million score.
 
We look northeast and watch the sky;
the Earth meets flotsam drifting by,
which, captured by the atmosphere,
will spend themselves in flame and die.
 
No stars are shot, the skeptics sneer,
despite our superstition dear;
no hopeful thought on burning rock
will alter physics, so I fear.
 
Yet scientific rules I mock
in wanting Newton's laws to block
by asking Perseus once more
that I might yet your heart unlock.
 
 
Bernoulli
 
Bernoulli had a thought, you know,
that air which farther had to go
would travel faster, leaving naught,
creating lift beneath the flow.
 
This principle, so I was taught,
is one of which the world was wrought;
it's why a plane might leave the ground,
although with gravity it fought.
 
Bernoulli showed, it might astound,
why, just today, you might have found
me cursing in the washroom steam,
and with the shower-curtain wound.
 
Yet vacuum's lift I might redeem,
for if I stand in life's full stream,
a force will lift me near you, so,
and closer to my favorite dream.
 
i>I hope you will leave a comment, rant, indictment, response or verse of your own.
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I loved Meteor, Parker. We all wish upon a star... it's in our DNA to stare at the heavens and make our pleas. Whether it is a star shot or a rock scorched matters not. It is a tradition that gives wings to our dreams and light to our hopes. Well done... I must admit the other had elements that soared over my head in lift and drag and left my mind in a vacuum... :) Cheers... Gary....

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On 09/08/2016 07:02 AM, Headstall said:

I loved Meteor, Parker. We all wish upon a star... it's in our DNA to stare at the heavens and make our pleas. Whether it is a star shot or a rock scorched matters not. It is a tradition that gives wings to our dreams and light to our hopes. Well done... I must admit the other had elements that soared over my head in lift and drag and left my mind in a vacuum... :) Cheers... Gary....

I am glad you liked Meteor, it was my pick of this pair, too. Jiminy Cricket sang in the back of my head, distracting me as I wrote. But I sat in airplanes a lot this summer, and got to thinking about how the magic of flight is supposed to work (the Bernoulli effect, I learned in school). I hope your mind recovered.....many thanks for your response,

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On 09/08/2016 10:13 AM, AC Benus said:

Gary left review. I agree with him, and your poem reminds we that we are all nothing but star dust anyway

I am happy you liked these. Perhaps there is a physics to wishing on a shooting star, but for the moment, it's better just to believe. Thanks for the response.

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As Ben said we all have to agree with Gary. and I too have a list of pleas I wanted and asked a number of times. Coming to the second poem, you channeled your talent. I love the way how you make a boring subject into an interesting approach.

 

Are you practicing hypnotizing with poems??? :o Just kidding... :)

 

~Emi.

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On 09/22/2016 04:47 AM, Emi GS said:

As Ben said we all have to agree with Gary. and I too have a list of pleas I wanted and asked a number of times. Coming to the second poem, you channeled your talent. I love the way how you make a boring subject into an interesting approach.

 

Are you practicing hypnotizing with poems??? :o Just kidding... :)

 

~Emi.

Well, I did think the words were kind of hypnotic. Why shouldn't the words of science and math be used for their fun and sound? Meteor was fun to write, especially.

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You do find inspiration in some very strange things ... :) Stars and the heavens are common enough but a scientific priniciple? Yet, it is said that there is poetry in all things and you demonstrate that amply. Wonderment, humour and that final touch of making the universal, personal.

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On 09/30/2016 01:42 AM, northie said:

You do find inspiration in some very strange things ... :) Stars and the heavens are common enough but a scientific priniciple? Yet, it is said that there is poetry in all things and you demonstrate that amply. Wonderment, humour and that final touch of making the universal, personal.

Often, inspiration comes from the sound of the words themselves. How can one not muse long on the euphony of the name 'Bernoulli?' But meteor came straight from the late summer starlit heavens. And thank you for your comment on my penchant for turning things to the personal; for in such connections is understanding made, perhaps. Many many thanks.

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