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Occasional Poetry - 20. NaPoWriMo 2016 Week Two

Days 8-14: all errors are mine. Thanks to Val, AC and Tim for prompts and help.
APRIL 8
 
The river gently called today
a conversation to begin;
insistent in her quiet way,
my ear's attention tried to win.
 
She varies so capriciously,
now frowning dark and raging white,
then speaking right judiciously,
or gossiping into the night.
 
I knew we had to talk, although
the topic brought no comfort near.
I listened to her rhythms slow
and knew she'd spoken to my fear.
 
Tomorrow I will bring my friend
to meet her in her greening dress.
Together we may start or end,
perhaps a passion to profess;
 
But not before we've heard her sing
her ancient haunting melody;
So in our hearts, its echoing
confirms our souls' fidelity.
 
 
APRIL 9
 
Explain
to foolish e
why π is far more famed;
irrationally beautiful,
it smiles.
 
Abstruse,
perplexing e, geometry
can't comprehend your scope;
fame favors π.
Poor e.
 
 
 
APRIL 10
 
Furious faceoff;
frantic, ferocious fight for
fast, fleeting foray.
 
Persistent passing
patiently prepares precise
picture-perfect point.
 
Delayed decisions
deflate dogged, determined
dirty defenders.
 
 
 
APRIL 11
 
A flibberdigibbet passed me by,
I asked for the skinny, he asked me why;
'twas then I let out a curmudgeonly sigh,
and all when the sun climbed high.
 
My clodhopper colleague went off his way,
for no information could he parlay ,
to a crotchety greybeard at rest on the hay,
and all on a summer's day.
 
I ought to be glad I knew nothing of use;
a kerfuffle in town put him in the cayuse,
where the bamboozled deputy said "what the deuce!"
when a man he tried to seduce.
 
That night at the jail, a hullaballoo!
There was shouting and yelling; shots fired, too,
for my scalawag friend slipped away from their view -
they say he showed up in Peru.
 
 
 
APRIL 12
 
You spoke aloud a single word;
it flew about, a frightened bird
within a room, without release.
It was too late, for I had heard.
 
My startled heart would have no peace,
its loud tattoo refused to cease.
Your solitary word appalled,
I feared its urgent song's reprise.
 
And yet your word held me enthralled,
I knew it was your soul that called
to penetrate my windowed lair
where safely I remained installed.
 
No refuge could continue there,
you forced me venture out to dare,
to tame the feathered thing that flew
and with its wings disturbed the air.
 
That single word was life anew;
I pray you'll have no cause to rue
the moment when my spirit stirred,
for I can't help but love you, too.
 
 
APRIL 13
 
I heard friend Flicker drilling on his tree,
And thinking in that moment did I find
myself in an epistolary mind.
What message could I write in timpani?
 
What note or composition could unwind
from man to bird in morning's clearest light?
What wisdom, mirth or solace could I write
my feathered correspondent, soon entwined
 
in avian embraces made in flight?
If I could write a word he'd understand,
I'd thank him for his vernal thought so grand
it made me shudder, thinking in delight -
 
So much that I will tell it to you now,
my lips devising lyrics on your brow.
 
 
note: a Flicker is a species of woodpecker common in eastern North America.
 
 
 
 
APRIL 14
 
Out in the marsh reeds, winter thinking snow;
sitting in a duck blind as the waters flow,
thinking lonely thoughts while the frigid breezes blow;
where did the soft, kind summer mornings go?
 
Out in the marsh reeds, decoys on the lake,
thinking how you're gone, my heart begins to break.
Fleeing from the bed, where sleepless I awake,
why am I hunting helpless duck and drake?
 
Out in the marsh reeds, under leaden sky,
hearing now the flocks come, overhead they fly,
Raising now the shotguns, muzzles lifted high;
I cannot do this, cowering, I cry.
 
Out in the marsh reeds, none will hear me fire.
Barrel pointed inwards, conscience screaming, 'liar!'
Pushing trigger gently, I'd land in the mire.
Who would retrieve me, light my funeral pyre?
 
Out in the marsh reeds, sitting cold and numb;
weeping that I've lost you, feeling overcome
momentary madness, almost I succumb;
Now empty moments' endlessness I plumb.
 
i>Comment, rant, review; I'd love to hear from you. Your responses will be noted by a poet so devoted.
Copyright © 2017 Parker Owens; All Rights Reserved.
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April 8: Not comforting? I can't quite believe that. Also she seems to be a chatty one. And what I said in the thread.
April 9: I love this one! Could never understand all the fuss about Pi. Isn't it just a cake?
April 10: Ah yes, you manage to emphasize the rush and hectic with a neat trick.
April 11: As I already said about Val's poem: These old words are quite onomatopoeic.
April 12: I so love this one! Holding my breath until I reached the end every time.
April 13: In search for inspiration you found a bird. Again. I recognize myself. Writing poetry sharpens the senses.
April 14: And I'm without words again. My heart hurts, you made me cry. Gah! Perfectly performed despair.

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Amazing Parker all of them are brilliant. Your old fashioned words were great!, Don't I know you dont talk like that all the time anymore.. :)
Seriously, a wonderful polished collection... super.

 

tim

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I enjoyed them all, Parker, but April 12 and 14 were in my heart's wheelhouse. I felt the genuine transmissions from you with these two... exceptional... cheers... Gary....

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:worship::worship::worship: Brilliantly crafted, all of them. I am very envious of your ability to find rhyme and meter in such a natural way. Your poetry flows very evenly and makes me run the gamut of emotions. I love your take on the prompts you decided to tackle. The 'fame' one was perfect! I had to laugh that we both used 'flibbertigibbet'. It's such an awesome word, isn't it? Your old-fashioned word poem reminded me of Lewis Carroll. The last one brought tears to my eyes. The pain expressed in that poem was palpable. Well done, sir.

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From strength to strength to strength. This is an impressive collection, Parker.

 

Highlights for me are the river called to soothe a reluctant heart to love; a word like a bird set free (the love word, no less); a Sonnet to a woodpecker; and the false futility of 'carrying on' when it's the last think we want to do.

 

Amazing progress, Parker. I hope you know I am a fan of your poetry; it jest keeps getting better and better.

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OMG Parker, these are so good.

 

I loved the river, chuckled over pie
the NastyFootballLament
the finale in the marsh reeds was poignant

 

Dragon kisses blow your way...

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On 04/15/2016 03:17 AM, aditus said:

April 8: Not comforting? I can't quite believe that. Also she seems to be a chatty one. And what I said in the thread.

April 9: I love this one! Could never understand all the fuss about Pi. Isn't it just a cake?

April 10: Ah yes, you manage to emphasize the rush and hectic with a neat trick.

April 11: As I already said about Val's poem: These old words are quite onomatopoeic.

April 12: I so love this one! Holding my breath until I reached the end every time.

April 13: In search for inspiration you found a bird. Again. I recognize myself. Writing poetry sharpens the senses.

April 14: And I'm without words again. My heart hurts, you made me cry. Gah! Perfectly performed despair.

I thank you for your very kind comments. The old words actually show up,in my conversation from time to time. Only later do I have to restate what I said so as to be understood. Glad you liked the mathematical poem! I did, too. April 12 is possibly my favorite of this group; and birds are creatures I observe frequently. I am sorry to have made you cry in the last one; I thought to be humorous at first, but the beat turned everything somber.

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On 04/15/2016 06:10 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Amazing Parker all of them are brilliant. Your old fashioned words were great!, Don't I know you dont talk like that all the time anymore.. :)

Seriously, a wonderful polished collection... super.

 

tim

For a wizened old codger like myself, I can talk almost like a modern flapdoodle. You are very, very kind in your words, and I really appreciate your responses!

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On 04/15/2016 06:35 AM, Headstall said:

I enjoyed them all, Parker, but April 12 and 14 were in my heart's wheelhouse. I felt the genuine transmissions from you with these two... exceptional... cheers... Gary....

Your heart's wheelhouse...what a lovely phrase! And thank you so much for up your kind comments. I felt best about April 12, personally.

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On 04/15/2016 06:41 AM, Valkyrie said:

:worship::worship::worship: Brilliantly crafted, all of them. I am very envious of your ability to find rhyme and meter in such a natural way. Your poetry flows very evenly and makes me run the gamut of emotions. I love your take on the prompts you decided to tackle. The 'fame' one was perfect! I had to laugh that we both used 'flibbertigibbet'. It's such an awesome word, isn't it? Your old-fashioned word poem reminded me of Lewis Carroll. The last one brought tears to my eyes. The pain expressed in that poem was palpable. Well done, sir.

I'm glad you liked the fame poem, as it very nearly flummoxed me. But then I realized a germ of inspiration in my own lesson planning. Flibberdegibbet is an excellent word,and it's such a pity these fun old words are in disuse. The last was painful in the writing, too.

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On 04/15/2016 07:38 AM, AC Benus said:

From strength to strength to strength. This is an impressive collection, Parker.

 

Highlights for me are the river called to soothe a reluctant heart to love; a word like a bird set free (the love word, no less); a Sonnet to a woodpecker; and the false futility of 'carrying on' when it's the last think we want to do.

 

Amazing progress, Parker. I hope you know I am a fan of your poetry; it jest keeps getting better and better.

AC, your remarks are so kind. Thank you. Each of these were interesting and challenging in their ways. Most of all, I thank you for prodding and encouraging all of us to write, as none of this would have been possible a year ago...at least, not for me. If anything is praiseworthy, you have a portion of the credit, my friend.

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On 04/15/2016 10:28 AM, skinnydragon said:

OMG Parker, these are so good.

 

I loved the river, chuckled over pie

the NastyFootballLament

the finale in the marsh reeds was poignant

 

Dragon kisses blow your way...

Dragon kisses! Will I need a heat shield? Thank you for reading my offerings this week. The lacrosse haikus were pure fun. The marshes of the north country can be a dreadfully gloomy place, no? Many thanks again...

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Another fine group of poems. I like the imagery of the river and the light-hearted Flicker. As a former (and generally unsuccessful) duck hunter I related to this one. The ducks had little to fear from me.

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On 04/25/2016 10:18 AM, Nick Brady said:

Another fine group of poems. I like the imagery of the river and the light-hearted Flicker. As a former (and generally unsuccessful) duck hunter I related to this one. The ducks had little to fear from me.

Thank you for taking the time to read these. There is a great range of feeling in them, and if you got something from them, great. I'm very happy neither you nor the ducks came to any great harm...

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Am I ever glad that I waited till now to properly read these. This set is amazing. I may lack the words to describe how I feel but I loved them.. I can only imagine what awaits in the next chapters..

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On 05/15/2016 03:38 AM, Defiance19 said:

Am I ever glad that I waited till now to properly read these. This set is amazing. I may lack the words to describe how I feel but I loved them.. I can only imagine what awaits in the next chapters..

Thanks for taking the time to read and respond to these. I really enjoyed writing about the river, and several folk tunes ran in my head as it came from brain to page. The final one in the set was originally meant to be humorous, but somehow, the words kept insisting otherwise. You were very kind to read these, and your words were most encouraging.

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