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Occasional Poetry - 19. NaPoWriMo 2016 Week 1

Here is a week's worth of offerings for 2016, April 1-7. All my errors are unforced, alas. Many, many thanks to Val for sending (mercifully optional) prompts.

APRIL 1

 

So I flirted and I fooled,

I read sonnets 'til I drooled,

then I shouted to the poet crowd: "I'm in!"

Though sometimes sounding phony

(more doggerel than pony)

I would hope my verse makes everyone to grin.

 

Never mind my fingers black,

or the adjectives I lack,

My thesaurus or my dictionary thick;

Every day I'll try a verse

(or an ode - whichever's worse),

and perhaps this literary stuff will stick.

 

 

APRIL 2

 

Snow on bright flowers;

April's unkind foolery

repeated each spring

 

 

APRIL 3

 

A writer whose prose might be deathless

had a date with a poet most breathless;

after meeting at one

they had hours of fun,

and the novelist deathless was yeth-less.

 

 

APRIL 4

 

I want the gentle, kindly spring

its lovely greening song to sing,

as if to heal cold winter's spite,

and put its meanness on the wing.

 

I long for days all golden bright,

suffused with softly glowing light,

as if the gods had sent a flame

to warm the globe from their great height.

 

I want an end to winter's frame

of teasing days, yet all the same,

as if to taunt with promise false,

delighting in a frozen game

 

I yearn for birds, their fluted calls

reminding us that life enthralls,

as if to mock the snowy king

whose frigid storming so appalls.

 

 

APRIL 5

 

Who is this crumpled, ancient hermit crab

with lifeless eye and rolling sidewise gait,

this grey, encrusted, solitary drab
whose mind is bent by recollection's freight?

 

He carries in his head the solemn weight

of cowardice and lies and visage droll;

his carapace festooned with whims of fate

to camouflage the iron in his soul.

 

Well hidden, living near the sunlit shoal

you find him after careful, patient quest;

and see that self-suppression took its toll

while in convention veiled he acquiesced.

 

And yet, this creature once in daylight ran

pursuing here another fearful man.

 

 

APRIL 6

 

I think I cannot taste more fine

an heirloom than the Brandywine;

although for color that you see,

I like the Purple Cherokee.

 

For sauce, prolific Roma's best,

but some like San Marzano's zest.

I love those in small fruited mode;

Matt's Cherry needs a postal code.

 

A yellow pear if awfully nice,

a chance encounter to entice.

I'd really like to plant them all.

Too bad my garden's just too small.

 

 

APRIL 7

 

"Hello, old self, familiar constant friend."

I wondered: should our interview extend

beyond our daily recap and critique

of each event and every goal I seek?

 

I asked myself, "Hey self, what do you think?

You want to go to town and have a drink?"

"I'll stay at home alone" that self replied.

"Which leaves me where?" I wondered as I sighed.

 

But now a complex quandary may arise,

for if myself may inner selves advise,

and all those myriad extra selves in turn

discuss me, soul and body, with concern,

 

Then what a mental babel I shall hear!

Perhaps next time I'd better stick to beer.

If you feel like reviewing any of this, please do.
Copyright © 2017 Parker Owens; All Rights Reserved.
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A lovely and varied week Parker!

 

I particularly liked April 7. (Perhaps it hit too close to home?)

 

I always enjoy your poetry! It'll be quite a Mo.

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Hey, Parker, I loved them all... particularly 3 and 7... the hermit crab had me scratching my head... I'll have to go back to that one lol. My favorite line in any context..."Matt's cherry needs a postal code".... I think I know a Matt that would apply to hehe... awesome collection, buddy... cheers... Gary....

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April 1: I’m glad you’re in. It will definitely stick. :)
April 2: cute
April 3: *grin*
April 4: I ‘d call this ‘Prayer for winter to finally f* off’ very nicely phrased.
April 5: My favorite! What I wrote in the thread.
April 6: All kind of recipes are circling around in my head. Yum!
April 7: A close second. I really love your multi-logue. J

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On 04/08/2016 01:29 AM, Headstall said:

Hey, Parker, I loved them all... particularly 3 and 7... the hermit crab had me scratching my head... I'll have to go back to that one lol. My favorite line in any context..."Matt's cherry needs a postal code".... I think I know a Matt that would apply to hehe... awesome collection, buddy... cheers... Gary....

Thanks so much for your reactions. 'Hermit Crab' could be a conundrum - lots there that's hidden in plain sight, kind of like the crab himself. And number 3 was pure fun.

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On 04/08/2016 01:32 AM, aditus said:

April 1: I’m glad you’re in. It will definitely stick. :)

April 2: cute

April 3: *grin*

April 4: I ‘d call this ‘Prayer for winter to finally f* off’ very nicely phrased.

April 5: My favorite! What I wrote in the thread.

April 6: All kind of recipes are circling around in my head. Yum!

April 7: A close second. I really love your multi-logue. J

I am very happy you liked these! About April 4: I am so mad at winter right now, we're not even speaking. I am glad you liked April 5; there's a lot going on there. April 7 reminded me of what you see in two opposed mirrors...thanks again. I'm enjoying this!

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On 04/08/2016 01:27 AM, skinnydragon said:

A lovely and varied week Parker!

 

I particularly liked April 7. (Perhaps it hit too close to home?)

 

I always enjoy your poetry! It'll be quite a Mo.

Thank you for reading these. April 7 could have been called 'endless reverberation,' I suppose. Glad you enjoyed them!

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I enjoyed all of these, Parker. It's interesting to see how you interpreted the prompts. Glad you're on board and I look forward to week 2!

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Hey Parker ... all of these are super!! You did a terrific job.. such a great variety. Having fun???

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You have a real and abiding sense of the lyrical, and it shows beautifully whether you are being comic or serious. Your verse is a pleasure to read (your odes on the other hand…. JK ;) )

 

In this collection, the Hermit Crab is a real stand out. Although it's sad, it speaks the strongest to me. The Haiku is lovely, and the April 4th longing for spring is simply beautiful.

 

As for the tomato poem, I love it. Even seeing the words 'yellow pear' brings the full flavor to my mouth. They are like candy, and I hope to plant a few this year, now that our drought is semi-over.

 

Great collection, Parker!

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On 04/08/2016 07:21 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Hey Parker ... all of these are super!! You did a terrific job.. such a great variety. Having fun???

You bet I'm having fun! And now for the next week! Glad you liked them, I did...

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On 04/08/2016 05:48 AM, Valkyrie said:

I enjoyed all of these, Parker. It's interesting to see how you interpreted the prompts. Glad you're on board and I look forward to week 2!

I fear I didn't follow every prompt,

but my ardor was not dahmped.

Thanks for reading every verse

hope my rhyming won't get worse!

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On 04/08/2016 11:34 AM, AC Benus said:

You have a real and abiding sense of the lyrical, and it shows beautifully whether you are being comic or serious. Your verse is a pleasure to read (your odes on the other hand…. JK ;) )

 

In this collection, the Hermit Crab is a real stand out. Although it's sad, it speaks the strongest to me. The Haiku is lovely, and the April 4th longing for spring is simply beautiful.

 

As for the tomato poem, I love it. Even seeing the words 'yellow pear' brings the full flavor to my mouth. They are like candy, and I hope to plant a few this year, now that our drought is semi-over.

 

Great collection, Parker!

I am very glad you liked 'Hermit Crab,' as I fought my way through that one longest and hardest. How to look at a person - oneself, even - at more than one age? I am so glad someone else knows about Yellow Pear tomatoes. Am trying Sun Gold this year. Your remarks are kind and generous, and I really appreciate your reading this first set. I am really enjoying this...

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And in addition to excellent fiction you write poetry - Haiku and even a limerick. Well done Parker, well done.

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On 04/25/2016 10:10 AM, Nick Brady said:

And in addition to excellent fiction you write poetry - Haiku and even a limerick. Well done Parker, well done.

That's so very kind of you to say so. The poem-per-day challenge for April has been stimulating and rewarding. Glad you liked this.

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