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Occasional Poetry - 12. Kitchen Metre and Metre Made.

i>Written in response to Poetry Prompt #4, Metre 1. Originally appeared in the Live Poets Thread, which everyone should follow. Just saying.
I made mistakes, I know; you can bear them, though.

Kitchen Metre

Brown the meat, garlic beat, pepper grind, onion slice,
Wash my hands, open cans, oops! Forgot, carrots dice.
Meat reserve, lost my nerve; oh don't cry, onions fry.
Add all in, simmer, grin; pasta boil, end of toil.
 
Metre Made
 
An anapest is rarely best,
an iamb is much nicer.
A trochee? Mustn't use it, lest
you need your dactyl slicer.
 
I get de-spondee in my car
(it's not a catalexis),
my amphibrach sounds like catarrh,
it gives one catalepsis.
 
I've spent the day and most the night
with poetry satiric,
I warred with odes most erudite,
but won a vic'try phyrric.
i>With thanks to AC and Tim, always.
Copyright © 2017 Parker Owens; All Rights Reserved.
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Dude you are something else! Both are fun! But the second is outta my brains league, but it sounds good!

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Parker, I'm not wise enough to review poetry.

 

But I loved these. I only would have changed one word in Kitchen Metre. - Last line "grin" to "gin"

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Love the sense of humor you display through these... and the meter is perfect. Poetry is about expressing yourself, and that you do.lol... cheers... Gary...

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