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Occasional Poetry - 44. Geometric Construction and Avogadro

i>The subject matter may be esoteric, or it may bring back bad memories of school science and math classes. I apologize if these bring back the smell of chemistry lab, or the terror of your Geometry instructor. In this case, the errors are all mine.
Geometric Construction
 
I have construction on my mind,
the T-square and a pencil kind;
I want a man who has that skill -
he's proven rather hard to find.
 
I wish that he would, with his quill
use perpendiculars to thrill
a point of intersection drawn
upon my plane, beneath my hill.
 
He'll circumscribe me in the dawn,
my neck, he'll leave his marks thereon,
and he my angle would bisect,
though that conclusion be foregone.
 
In parallel we'll lie, subject
to Euclid's laws, none else respect;
our limbs transverse, so well aligned -
I think I've found an architect.
 
 
 
Avogadro
 
Now Avogadro had a mole
he used one day to fill a hole
in space with atoms of a gas,
a concept he found rather droll.
 
A mole like this does not, alas,
have standard volume, made of brass;
it's just how many molecules
twelve grams of carbon can amass.
 
From chemistry's more sacred rules,
a mole of carbon's kilojoules
of energy can be divined,
as long as we have got the tools.
 
But Avogadro still was blind
to measures of the heart and mind;
the size of love within my soul
for you, his mole will never find.
 
 
 
 
i>Avogadro's number, 6.02 x 10^23, is the number of atoms or elementary particles in twelve grams of carbon-12. Or, at least, that's the Wiki definition. You can find out more here: https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mole_(unit)

Even if it stirs your memories of high school, you can rant or respond to these as you wish.
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It amazes me every time how you are able to weave together science/math and romance so seamlessly. Well done, as always. ;)

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Loved Geometric Construction, Parker. It sounds a little dirty hehe. But, seriously... I liked it a lot... the rhythm of it. It spoke to me of your desires... a search for your ideal... if I'm right, I hope you find it :)

 

The other, I'll have to read a few more times, but the construction of it was superior... cheers, buddy... Gary....

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He'll circumscribe me in the dawn,
my neck, he'll leave his marks thereon,

 

Daayammm! Never has math sounded so sexy ;) I loved this.

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I like both, but I always had a sweet spot for Avogadro. What's next? The gas constant? Law of mass action? Which by the way sounds way cooler in English than in German. I might borrow your poems and show them my students. Science and math can be fun! :rofl:

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On 09/16/2016 11:50 AM, Valkyrie said:

It amazes me every time how you are able to weave together science/math and romance so seamlessly. Well done, as always. ;)

Thank you, Val. Math geeks have hearts, too, though it sometimes seems hidden beneath all that vocabulary. But the words have such rhythm...

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On 09/16/2016 11:57 AM, Headstall said:

Loved Geometric Construction, Parker. It sounds a little dirty hehe. But, seriously... I liked it a lot... the rhythm of it. It spoke to me of your desires... a search for your ideal... if I'm right, I hope you find it :)

 

The other, I'll have to read a few more times, but the construction of it was superior... cheers, buddy... Gary....

Well, it was kind of racy, in its geeky way. I guess it's just the way math geeks fantasize. I am glad you liked these. And now Adi (see above) is giving me more ideas.

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On 09/16/2016 01:07 PM, LitLover said:

He'll circumscribe me in the dawn,

my neck, he'll leave his marks thereon,

 

Daayammm! Never has math sounded so sexy ;) I loved this.

Yes, well, it is a little racy, isn't it? But It's nice to think that the staid language of math can be used to describe somewhat warmer feelings, too. Thanks so much for your review, and I may very happy you liked this.

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On 09/16/2016 05:22 PM, aditus said:

I like both, but I always had a sweet spot for Avogadro. What's next? The gas constant? Law of mass action? Which by the way sounds way cooler in English than in German. I might borrow your poems and show them my students. Science and math can be fun! :rofl:

You are giving me plenty of ideas! Oh, my, showing them off to students! Something like singing the second law of thermodynamics song? Avogadro has such an irresistibly rhythmic name, I think. Glad you liked these.

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On 09/17/2016 01:09 AM, AC Benus said:

See! Your readers are much starter than I am :)

Thanks, AC. You meant 'smarter than..,' I think, but which I do not for a moment believe. Not a question of smart or dull, but of the vocabulary one hangs around with, I think. I would have a devil of a time writing something about the Dewey Decimal System, or fly fishing. Thanks for responding to these, though...

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As a science student, I'd say I liked both. But I am a math person more than the chem. So my vote goes to Geometry too. And I loved the chemistry you showed in math, that's another reason for me to like Geometry. ;)

 

Nice poems Parker... :) And I can smell the burnt shirt and slippers of my friend all over again. :P

 

~Emi.

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On 09/22/2016 05:03 AM, Emi GS said:

As a science student, I'd say I liked both. But I am a math person more than the chem. So my vote goes to Geometry too. And I loved the chemistry you showed in math, that's another reason for me to like Geometry. ;)

 

Nice poems Parker... :) And I can smell the burnt shirt and slippers of my friend all over again. :P

 

~Emi.

I confess to liking Geometry, too. So many ways for the perfect man to draw! Burnt shirt and slippers! Is there a story or a poem in there, Emi?

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