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Occasional Poetry - 7. Christmas Carol

em>For the Carol Poetry Prompt: thanks to AC and Tim.

Come and see the baby lying in the manger,

Come and see the sign, the child in Bethlehem!

Come and see the babe, and our release from danger,

Come and see the sign, the child in Bethlehem!

Round us shone the light, an angel came from heaven,

telling out the joy, great tidings of good news!

Round the angel choirs their loud Hosanna's singing,

Come and see the sign, the child in Bethlehem!

 

Haste, oh haste your feet on ev'ry road and byway,

Hurry now to see the babe, the newborn king!

Leave your flock and fields, your work, your hearth, your doorway,

Hurry now to see the babe, the newborn king!

Search we now to find the meanly swaddled baby,

born in cattle stall, of whom the angels sing.

There in Bethlehem and lying in a manger,

Hurry now to see the babe, the newborn king!

em>I claim each and every mistake, flub, error or cosmic problem as my own. Please sing it, anyway.
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Okay, if you're sure ... I'll sing it but well you've never heard me sing. Which reminds me, once when I was in a Catholic church (i was raised as one) and no one was singing, the Priest said, "Just SING, God doesn't care what you sound like!"
I kinda liked that, cuz I do sing and not too badly.
Great carol Parker!!! It feels right for this time of year. I really enjoyed it.
tim

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There is a sense of movement in this carol, and I like that. I believe you mentioned the melody to which this was written is 'zippy,' and I'd like to hear it.

 

Do you play? I'm assuming you do, so hopefully you can share your music with us on youtube.

 

Great carol, Parker. Thanks for posting it!

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That piece demands music! I sing a lot and around Christmas, it's often the same songs year after year. This would make a welcome addition.

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Awesome... awesome phrasing and sentiment, and I did sing it. It works beautifully. I love the traditional aspect of it... well done, good sir... you may have inspired me... if I can find some time... cheers, and cheers... Gary....

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Very traditional take. I somehow pictured men with beards singing this. :blink: Definitely singing though. Great carol.

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On 12/15/2015 09:51 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Okay, if you're sure ... I'll sing it but well you've never heard me sing. Which reminds me, once when I was in a Catholic church (i was raised as one) and no one was singing, the Priest said, "Just SING, God doesn't care what you sound like!"

I kinda liked that, cuz I do sing and not too badly.

Great carol Parker!!! It feels right for this time of year. I really enjoyed it.

tim

Yes, I am sure. I agree with the priest of your memory...don't care what you sound like, just that you sing. Glad you liked this humble carol; must figure a way to get you the tune...

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On 12/15/2015 11:03 AM, AC Benus said:

There is a sense of movement in this carol, and I like that. I believe you mentioned the melody to which this was written is 'zippy,' and I'd like to hear it.

 

Do you play? I'm assuming you do, so hopefully you can share your music with us on youtube.

 

Great carol, Parker. Thanks for posting it!

Alas, I don't play. I will see if there is a way to get you the tune. At last resort, I'll write out the music. Thanks for your commentary. It really does hustle, at least in my imagination.

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On 12/15/2015 01:51 PM, Puppilull said:

That piece demands music! I sing a lot and around Christmas, it's often the same songs year after year. This would make a welcome addition.

As I said to AC, perhaps I can write out the music.Do you play keyboard (or know someone who does)? Anyhow, it will be different from the traditional Swedish song I learned last year...

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On 12/15/2015 05:43 PM, Headstall said:

Awesome... awesome phrasing and sentiment, and I did sing it. It works beautifully. I love the traditional aspect of it... well done, good sir... you may have inspired me... if I can find some time... cheers, and cheers... Gary....

Thank you for singing it! It hustles you right along, doesn't it? Thanks for your comments. I'll be listening for your voice.

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On 12/15/2015 07:11 PM, aditus said:

Very traditional take. I somehow pictured men with beards singing this. :blink: Definitely singing though. Great carol.

Yes, it was pretty traditional. Fun to imagine, though I did not channel men in beards - I thought of setting, first - candles, small stone church (probably), evening or night - that kind of thing. Glad you liked it, and thanks for the review.

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