Occasional Poetry - 4. Chapter 4: Lullaby

What a lovely verse to discover upon awaking!

You've already made my day easier, and it's gonna need to be

Thank you Parker!

On 12/03/2015 02:51 AM, skinnydragon said:

What a lovely verse to discover upon awaking!

 

You've already made my day easier, and it's gonna need to be

 

Thank you Parker!

Thank you so much for the review! Glad you liked it, and hope your day is a good one.

Wonderful sentiment, beautifully expressed. I loved the rhythm anfd the form of the poem. You are very accomplished at this, Parker... well done... cheers... Gary...

On 12/03/2015 03:54 AM, Headstall said:

Wonderful sentiment, beautifully expressed. I loved the rhythm anfd the form of the poem. You are very accomplished at this, Parker... well done... cheers... Gary...

Gary - thank you for your very kind comments. This sort of thing does not come easily to me. Hope you sing it for a friend one night.

I feel like this needs music. It would make a great lullaby to sing, since the words themselves hold so much music to them. Very nice and relaxing!

On 12/03/2015 05:17 AM, Puppilull said:

I feel like this needs music. It would make a great lullaby to sing, since the words themselves hold so much music to them. Very nice and relaxing!

I agree, and perhaps I will hear the melody someday. Spoken quietly and with love, it may be musical enough.

Thank you, Parker. It's lovely and you're friend is very lucky to have you around helping him sleep. I know he must appreciate it.

tim

On 12/03/2015 07:46 AM, Mikiesboy said:

Thank you, Parker. It's lovely and you're friend is very lucky to have you around helping him sleep. I know he must appreciate it.

 

tim

Thank you for your review. Maybe you can sing it to someone you love yourself someday. I guess there must be something good about working late once in a while!