This year I’m going to clear out the shed. I’ll try this long hike someone recommended. I won’t sleep in every day. I’ll eat healthy, all these yummy vegetables and fruit that are available now. I will finish the story that has been on hold for so long. Summer break starts on Monday, and I have a very long list. What about you? Maybe try to write a prompt story?
PT Prompt #352
Dale bought an ice cream maker, but vanilla, chocolate, or strawberry are just about that
I have a bunch of CDs and I had to get them organized, so I'll know what I have and where they are. I'm working on my vinyl collection too but, it's a lot more work. I'm taking them out, cleaning them covering the outside in plastic and replacing the liners that need it with an after-market product. I wanted to have this list in a few different places. Anyway, gaze upon my works and despair. Yes- there are duplications (trade bait). Location is where they are. After getting this actually done I'
Brother [M] called at 1:44am this morning. Dad -- who would have turned 100 on Oct. 7th -- had been sliding a bit but not rapidly. We expected something soon - but not this soon.
He was hurting quite a bit last night so Hospice gave him what M called "a very tiny amount" of morphine just to knock the edge off the pain. Before he left they said his vital signs were really good. He hadn't been sleeping that well. The morphine allowed him to relax enough to go into a deep sleep and...just di
My husband and I had our first night out in over a year in a physically distanced, but indoor dining situation. We went to a spot we love - a little, intimate place with dark, burnt orangey walls, ferrous-stained concrete floors with these glorious cracks filled with rust, and of course a terrific menu.
The servers all wore masks, and all the patrons did too until served. Between courses we masked up again, and were all more than six feet apart from other tables. To add a bit of security, I
When the news you get, isn’t the news you want…
My Husband, Phil, gets regular injections to his eyes for complications from diabetes. (DME) Yes, it's as bad as it sounds. It's been happening for over three years now.
Two weeks ago He saw the doctor for His regular appointment. The doctor asked the staff to go ahead and scan both eyes, not just the left. It wasn’t good news. The swelling in that right eye was back. It’s been stable for two years; it’s just been the left eye being trea
Stravinsky Suite Italienne
Stravinsky is a name that scares off many people, maybe thinking Rite of Spring, or The Firebird with lots of dissonance and it’s not for them. Which is not just a shame (both those pieces are incredible experiences with a full orchestra in a concert hall) but simply wrong. Stravinsky was not just an exceptional composer - the greatest of the twentieth century? - but wide-ranging and versatile, composing in many styles during his life and perfectly capable of wri
Well, I have my old editor and I am writing again
Today, I present for those who enjoy short stories of 5K words or less, Never Ending Struggle
It's not a massive story with heavy plots or complex characters, it's just a straight forward slice of life story. I approach modern life and its issues with honest reflection in here.
I highlight facts people don't think about from the lower paying and grinding work of teaching assistants, known as Paraprofessionals. That stuff is quit
It's been a while since I last visited Blogland here at the ol' GA, so I might as well update you on how things are going in my little corner of the world.
First off, my service-connected disabilities were reevaluated by the VA. I'm no longer rated at 50% for Bipolar Disorder. I've been rerated at 70% for Schizoaffective Disorder Bipolar Type. The only reason I wasn't rated at 100% (the next level) was because I wasn't frequently hospitalized, had many suicide attempts, or homeless. Also, m
As it appears, there was very little interest in an old school Wilderness survival story, I've discontinued work on it. It will just go into my pile of abandon story ideas.
Even so, I have just updated my request for editor/beta reader based on a new concept:
Modern Romance Fiction editor/beta request thread
I got inspired by a question in my mind after reading a few more Romance gay stories: What happens next?
Then, I reflect on my own life and wonder, would I have ended up
The “Most Promising Newcomer” award - @CaJu
The “Hercule Poirot” award for Best Deduction Skills - @ReaderPaul
The “Sigmund Freud” award for Best Character Analysis Skills - @NimirRaj
The “Awesome” award for Best Distillation Skills - @chris191070
The “Ghandi” award for Patience - @Summerabbacat
The "Best Supporting Award" All those who registered their reaction to the story.
Phillip is 16 and new in town with his first job: working for the Y. With no friends and his Dad stuck in London (or was that Hong Kong or Singapore?), he resolves to make a few. One of the new fiends older brother Andy is known to be a real asshole and, he wants to have a talk to Phillip.
Horrible writing advice...
Heroes wear white. They ride on high white horses and have shiny plot armor. They are, of course, interesting because who wants to read about a bum, right? Heroes should be flawless role models because seeing them overcome their petty human experience is just plain boring.
Villains wear black. Their horses don't really like them. They don't get shiny plot armor because the writers guild demands it! They aren't very interesting because they're just plain old e
Words can’t express how proud I am of our daughter. Today, J.J. became a home owner!
This kid has worked her butt off saving to buy a house. As a Paramedic, she works very long hours. She works nights and weekends and sacrifices holidays. When other kids her age were out partying, she was dedicated to keeping our community safe.
J.J. did it all on her own!
Of course I’m nervous for her to leave the nest, but excited to see her grown. 😍
Comforting Touch Story #5 Hearth Keeper
It is now live
Some General Observations from this Author:
1. The series came out much better than I had ever imagined, I had originally conceived it as a one-off with Finding Warmth, but it just kept writing itself throughout December 2020.
2. I've learned a good deal about myself during the writing of this story, which, for those who know me, is about 60% factual and 40% fiction. It's a lot easier to write based on reality. I realized
The Fourth Story is now live in Comforting Touch series:
Relationships aren't fairy tales in real life and more often than not, there's a good amount of complications between even the most committed lovers. How you deal with it is what defines who you are and who your lover is in relation to issues and conflicts.
Maybe to some readers, what happened to Jason in Fanning Flames is off-putting, being given alcohol and drugs to make you more pliable for sexual intercourse is a comm
I swear if I hear one more person say that COVID is just the Flu, I might knock their teeth out!
I’ve had the Flu many times in my 47 years on this Earth and I this is NOTHING like the Flu.
I caught it 4 months ago. It was a brutal 10 days of high fevers, awful cough, chest/lung pain, whole body aches, ear infection, lose smell and taste, I even passed out a few times… I really thought I was going to die!
Mine was a heavy viral load, so I kept testing positive for 6 weeks. (Ne
The other evening a friend said to me; "The hard times are when I think about my vows to my husband. And that helps. We all have troubles, but we can be the constant in the lives of those we love. There's something sublime and wonderful about that."
He's right, of course. Being there for others, a partner or friend, is a wonderful feeling. Those vows we make when we marry are not just words to be said because 'that's what you do'. No. They are and should be words held in the highest regar
Well just to make it clear for people who do not know, I suffer from Congenital Glaucoma, I was born with bad eyesight, and am legally blind with very low vision. One thing I've learned as I read stories, there really isn't much diversity or representation of people with disabilities in various gay fiction genres. People like me exist throughout the world in various forms; for instance, my last boyfriend was deaf, but it very hard for me to find any kind of story that reflect that kind of relati
I hope you all enjoyed the first 47 chapters of Catering with Benefits. Up next is a short story (3 chapters) about Rani, the sister of Raj, one of the characters from Catering.
I call this story 'Mile High Benefits' and is the first of the short stories from my 'Side Salad' collection that will punctuate the ongoing story of 'Catering with Benefits. These short stories will feature characters that have appeared briefly in the main story.
Please enjoy this slight diversion. The main st
PRINCE ALBERT
This was part of the original chapter 25 - Catering with Benefits - But was abandoned.
Craig had no idea what Justin intended to do with the new piercing and, although he had accompanied him to the studio and supported him in the recovery stage, he would not buy him any jewellery for his dick so Justin bought his own. He had started his early serving duties as a bar tender and wanted to use that experience in this new career. So far all the party tricks h
So the next story in the Comforting Touch series is live now:
Fanning Flames
The story goes into areas I rarely explore in the past. It was an interesting exercise.
One area that people might have caught on from last story, I think the best way to describe my sex scenes in this story is with one word, Sensuality. Using your hands, your nose, and your tongue is just as important to the experience as any other area.
While Sexuality is what many people like to describe in both h
What a strange year it was to live through. I really enjoyed my early 30's and I had gone into 34 thinking it was going to more of the same. Same place of work, same places I went to on the days I had off, and pretty much the only difference in my life would be what movies where coming out when, or what community and regional theater shows I'd watch when I got the chance. (Last show I saw was a Delaware Children's Theater production of Newsies in January 2020. Quite fun.) There were things I alw
My taste in Gay Romance novels made me wonder, why no one has ever done any reviews of well-known and established Male/Male novels on GA. Well, I'll break that mold.
I have a lot of respect for Sarina Bowen, especially after reading her 2.5 novel series about these 2 guys, who are given a second chance at love. She writes it with a bit of integrity, a bit of nuance, and believable realism. Also, the Hockey being played in the background is very good, (I was one of GA's last NHL bracket cham
With the 5th and final story in the series with @Talo Segura, my beta and editor. I am thinking now of what I have accomplished in such a short period of time.
I am surprised I had the energy, the motivation, and the stamina to write a 70K+ word story series like, Comforting Touch even after 4 years of hiatus from writing in general.
I know my writing style is imperfect, my prose is too long for easy digestion at 13-16K words per short story within a series of 5 stories, and obviously
Just the facts:
THRESHOLD Definition & Meaning - Merriam-Webster
THRESHOLD Synonyms: 74 Similar and Opposite Words | Merriam-Webster Thesaurus
Word of the Day: Threshold | Merriam-Webster
ON/AT THE THRESHOLD Definition & Meaning - Merriam-Webster
THRESHOLDS Synonyms: 72 Similar and Opposite Words | Merriam-Webster Thesaurus
A threshold in storytelling marks the vital boundary where a character leaves the familiar safety of the ordinary world and steps into the unknown. It drives the plot forward by forcing personal growth, creating structural tension, and establishing high stakes.
Narrative Architecture and Progression:
Commitment to the Quest: The exact moment a character steps past a physical or emotional line, signaling they are fully locked into their journey with no easy way back.
World-Building
I totally agree with you. I was trying to find examples that did not relate to chemicals & reactions. Something that GA authors and members could relate with. I found the following and I think it sums up what you stated.
It is what Ga Authors does for all of us here, now and has since it first started.
Play the Catalyst Role in Life
Thank you Myr,
sandrewn
"Threshold" comes from Old English (þrescold), denoting a doorsill or entry point. It is a compound word: the first part relates to thresh (treading or stepping), and the second originally signified a piece of wood or base (from the same root as "hold").
According to the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), the noun threshold was first used in English during the Old English period (before 1150), with historical records showing examples like þeorscwold appearing around 888 AD.
Same here. Last week July till September. And I still have 15 days Flexitime...
Going to an island with no running water and no electricity. Digital detox par excellence.
Enjoy the guessing! I am so not participating ... or am I?
Just the facts:
CATALYST Definition & Meaning - Merriam-Webster
CATALYST Synonyms: 59 Similar and Opposite Words | Merriam-Webster Thesaurus
CATALYTIC Definition & Meaning - Merriam-Webster
CATALYSIS Definition & Meaning - Merriam-Webster
A catalyst (or inciting incident) is the irreversible turning point that shatters a character’s normal life. It forces the protagonist out of their comfort zone and into the main conflict. Without it, the story lacks direction, urgency, and the foundational tension needed to drive any meaningful character growth.
The concept serves several essential functions in narrative structure:
Shifts Status Quo: It destroys the protagonist's "normal world" and makes returning to it impossib