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Dallen is developing abilities that the others in his group cannot explain. I agree that Benny needs to get with someone, perhaps their grandfather that has a better understanding of this and see if they understand where Dallen's abilities are coming from and what they can expect. The fact that he seems to be pulling from more than one subculture is more than a little unusual. I am glad that neither Dallen or Tocho seem to be jealous of the other or their activity, but will that continue? At their age, monogamy would be a push. Hate that Kenji was hurt at all, even momentarily, and perhaps he and Dallen should have talked a little more before they went so physical; but glad that Dallen was able to soothe his feelings. But they need to discuss a few things and make sure there they both really understand where the other is coming from and what they expect. Of course, that may be too much for them at their age. Excellent chapter.

I'm not trying to provide sequel material, but Hey! Go for it if you wish. And I agree with the song copyright issues mentioned in a different chapter comment. Some publishers can be real *ssh*l*s or *i**a**s or b*st*rds or f*r**nts about perceived copyright infringement.

As always, thanks for your comments, Flip Flop. I like the way you put things together, some of which may have been subconscious on my part. As for Grandfather's participation, I think you won't be disappointed

"boo-boo-boo-boo-boo" Will Benny's grandfather provide his wisdom to this tale? I would like to hear his interpretation of things.

Yer a wizard @chris191070 ::in my hagrid voice:: Nope. Never have I ever been to diagon alley.

Quite true, but in retrospect, I wish I'd tried a lot more

I partially disagree. Some things absolutely do not appeal to me, and I know it. Other things I might try, and yet more things I would like to try. Therefore, I do not need to try EVERYTHING, but some things would be interesting.

Do you want me to persuade him a little?

Nope Never have I been a wizard

Nope. Never have I ever worked for the No Secrets Allowed Agency

Soup kitchen

Are you trying to provide material for a sequel, Reader Paul? I think I've seen that activity somewhere else in the past

Nope Never have I been Queen

Cider

Thanks for commenting, Scrubber. Let's hope Dallen doesn't let his skills and popularity go to his head

With his one-sided connection, Pahana's empathy is being to resemble that of Deanna Troi of Star Trek fame. He could make a career as a rent boy, but I doubt if that will happen

Fascinating, as usual. What's next -- Dallen/Pahana able to fly by swiveling his hips really fast? Able to change the size of his male member at will? Able to shape shift into a sentient rock? Seriously, a very good chapter.

Another quote from ancient times comes to mind: "... only The Shadow knows..." I suspect Kenji will recover soon, but for now, only The Shadow knows that too

Thanks for commenting again, Chris. Yes, more discoveries. But where are the powers coming from?

Precisely

made soup

Wow. This one takes some thought. Good one.

When I logged into GA earlier, it suddenly said that chapter 5 of this story was in the queue to be posted. I thought it had somehow come 'unposted'. I should have investigated first. It turns out that when I originally posted that story, I posted chapter four twice. There is no way to simply 'delete' a chapter here - all you can do is unpublish it. So, I did that with the duplicate. Why it suddenly popped up again, I have no idea. When I reposted the errant chapter and checked it, I found it was a dupe, and I unpublished it again...and found that doing so unpublished every chapter that came after, too! So, I had to repost the last three chapters to get them to stay in place, and I just put a note in the duplicate chapter head telling any readers to move to the next one. Not content to leave it at that, the site also had to move the story to my latest posted, AND send out notifications that a 'new' chapter had been added. Some days, you just can't win.