timmy's poetry - 11. boy

Very nice image your painted with words! Shows the finesse of an bdsm relation can have.

WHY am I the only one who cringe at the concept of BDSM ? Why do I torture myself reading this ? Why do you all creep up on me with this topic when I least suspect it ?

O M G ...

Okay, it's 2 o'clock in the morning and I have reduced self control and little civility left ...
:collapse into bed:

On 02/26/2017 05:02 AM, hohochan657 said:

WHY am I the only one who cringe at the concept of BDSM ? Why do I torture myself reading this ? Why do you all creep up on me with this topic when I least suspect it ?

 

O M G ...

 

Okay, it's 2 o'clock in the morning and I have reduced self control and little civility left ...

:collapse into bed:

Don't know. It did say bdsm in the notes at the top... hope you managed to sleep.

On 02/26/2017 05:14 AM, Valkyrie said:

Damn... that was hot Nicely done

Thank you Val ... glad it um .. worked for ya..

On 02/26/2017 05:00 AM, Lyssa said:

Very nice image your painted with words! Shows the finesse of an bdsm relation can have.

Thanks very much Lyssa. Yeah it's sort of a dance. Mostly we are just like everyone else...

On 02/26/2017 05:37 AM, Reader1810 said:

Michael is a maestro and love is the only song he knows. That was really quite beautiful....

Thanks Reader. That's a lovely way to put it, very poetic. Certainly works for me... thanks again.

xo

Very good Timmie, you really captured the true meaning of a D/s relationship.

Now, I think I'll head for...no better not write that here

Great work

On 02/26/2017 05:54 AM, Caz Pedroso said:

Very good Timmie, you really captured the true meaning of a D/s relationship.

 

Now, I think I'll head for...no better not write that here

 

Great work

 

Thanks Cazzie .. Mike really is very good with knots... etc. Have fun whatever you decide to get up to.. hehe

xo

What an effective poem you write: you have me trembling with you, anticipating, feeling and imaging sensations. And in this, you also project love and intimacy, as the line 'play the keys of my soul' resonated so much with me. This was magnificent.

On 02/26/2017 06:29 AM, Parker Owens said:

What an effective poem you write: you have me trembling with you, anticipating, feeling and imaging sensations. And in this, you also project love and intimacy, as the line 'play the keys of my soul' resonated so much with me. This was magnificent.

Thank you Parker. I'm glad you like it and that it worked.. there's a lot of love and trust in this relationship.

tim xo

Wow. Every. Single. Word. It was really beautiful to experience this and the care behind this particular melding. I so, so, so understood this... thank you for sharing an aspect of love that sings... I count both of you as lucky men... cheers... Gary... xoxoxo

You know the tune that sets me free...

That's what it's all about. The connection that cannot be undone. Love this poem, tim, and the images it evokes and the heat it exudes and... damn... the title alone - "boy" - got me worked up before I even started reading it. What a nice way to spend a Saturday afternoon. Good for Michael... and for you.

On 02/26/2017 09:01 AM, Headstall said:

Wow. Every. Single. Word. It was really beautiful to experience this and the care behind this particular melding. I so, so, so understood this... thank you for sharing an aspect of love that sings... I count both of you as lucky men... cheers... Gary... xoxoxo

Thank you, Gary. Your review made me smile. We're both lucky to have the understanding of the other we do. Mostly anyway.

Thanks for reading...

tim xo

On 02/26/2017 09:49 AM, MacGreg said:

You know the tune that sets me free...

 

That's what it's all about. The connection that cannot be undone. Love this poem, tim, and the images it evokes and the heat it exudes and... damn... the title alone - "boy" - got me worked up before I even started reading it. What a nice way to spend a Saturday afternoon. Good for Michael... and for you.

Thank you, Mac. Michael knows me very well. He seemed to from the first day, more than i did myself back then. i'm glad you like the poem.. thanks for reading it and for your great comments.

tim xo

Simultaneously tender in erotic. It's a difficult relationship to put into perspective in so few words, eh? Well done.

On 02/26/2017 04:51 PM, Lux Apollo said:

Simultaneously tender in erotic. It's a difficult relationship to put into perspective in so few words, eh? Well done.

Thanks for reading and your comments. No relationship is easy to put into words, they are all a delicate dance.

xo

Really great poem tim! i felt my own experiences in every line....

there's nothing like being handled and loved all at the same time.

1 hour ago, mad_artist said:

Really great poem tim! i felt my own experiences in every line....

there's nothing like being handled and loved all at the same time.

thank you and thanks for reading and commenting!  no it's a special thing, special relationship isn't it?  i wouldn't change it for the world.