timmy's poetry - 65. Wind and Whispers

i like both, but the second one really connects. i hate silences, the whispers can not be drowned out in silences. i know that you are loved, admired and respected by more people than you know or hear. 

There is a hidden power in ‘ Wind ‘ , so much strength and resolve in the closing line.’ Whispers ‘ is frighteningly intense , baring emotions many relate to , but few would express so candidly or eloquently.Thank you for sharing your voice with us. 

I read these lines and know of your strength beneath the cold and wind. You tell of voices I have heard, and feel the same disjointedness I have experienced. Thank you for your recollection of these things, for you remind me to look for the sun, and to listen for the voices of those I love. 

I think Winter is cold so people will stick together more.  xoxo  Wind might sound like whispers, but I think listening to your own heart is important too.

4 hours ago, Ashi said:

I think Winter is cold so people will stick together more.  xoxo  Wind might sound like whispers, but I think listening to your own heart is important too.

you and me Ashi..we have enough to keep lots of people warm.. and listening to your own heart is very important.. xoxo