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  2. Geron Kees

    Kahoni

    Two quotes from the Anasazi Foundation: “I have learned that the point of life's walk is not where or how far I move my feet, but how I am moved in my heart.” Appears Pahana has started his life's walk in a new direction. “The most beautiful thing in the world is a heart that is changing.” And that he is learning new ways of seeing what lies around him.
  3. MrM

    Chapter 5

    I knew it would come to something broken or dislocated!
  4. Verse about life, love and loss
  5. . Poem No. 1 Prelude: Tanka Stanza He talked golf, just golf – and talked, that student of mine – so why did I feel so taken, so overwhelmed by so pure a thing as love. Poem: There for once, I failed to fail. For that emotion without reason would not be stopped by blocks of time nor thoughts’ sluggish procrastination. I for once, was free of what they freed, and I became none but
  6. Thomas Wells

    Chapter 40

    Thanks to everyone. I will find Spirit Wolves and End of the Tunnel and read those. It doesn't matter, the whole story is worth rereading each section more than once. Being older, I will think I am reading a new story. Thanks guys.
  7. Don't hold it against me, but I've never watched GoT. Except for a short video here and there on YT.
  8. The Lollipop's landing tube descended, and Frit and Pip stepped out onto the deck of the terminal bay. They looked about quickly, and then grinned at each other. "Seems safe!" Frit called. "I don't feel anything bad!" Pip added. Inside the ship, Charlie nodded to himself, and turned to the others. "Everybody ready?" The two elves had insisted on being the first to go out, saying their powers of detection would quickly look around where mere eyes could not. Pacha had allowed this,
  9. I love that! 😍 I used to read the lyric booklets from every new CD while listening to the album for the first time, and it used to bum me out if a band didn't include lyrics hahaha
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  11. Your point is well taken, Craig. It was raised by another reader in the "Indian Heaven" chapter. As mentioned early on, the story is set in 1967. AIDS didn't exist, condom usage was at a low point due to birth control pills, and not a great deal of attention was being paid to STDs. I definitely do not mean to trivialize STDs, but the behavior of the characters in that regard is consistent with their age and the times they lived in.
  12. BIKES Bob is killing every Sunday MRDER
  13. Snark + Sarcasm ==> Snarcasm

    Who sez math is useless?

  14. Thanks for commenting, Jeffrey. I'm glad you continue to find the story interesting
  15. Some very astute observations there, @Anton_Cloche. And hopefully the experience will help Dallen to look at himself and see that he has the same needs. That particular song (of my youth) has become more meaningful as time passes. As an aside, I would have included some of the lyrics in the story, but such use may be a copyright violation. Or it may not, depending on one's source. In any event, I satisfied myself with the reference to the song. Jefferson Airplane was one of the few groups I really liked when growing up, and I still do. You'll find a reference to another of their songs in the next chapter
  16. Rkench

    The Movie, A Week

    Thanks for that. Several of Walt’s favorite artists were Jewish, including his top songwriters the Sherman Brothers. Other prominent Jews in his life included the man who came up with the first merchandising of Mickey and one of his top lawyers who Walt later made a VP at the company. B’nai B’rith named Walt man of the year in 1955, an honor he accepted in person. Walt had many faults and flaws, but there is no evidence he hated Jews, women, blacks or gays.
  17. MrM

    Chapter 4

    Zack has enormous courage to return home under the circumstances. I would probably have never returned. A park bench or a jail cell would be better than what awaits Zack at home with that psychopath. One considers that Zack loves his mother and would not want to desert her, but even so…there comes a time when enough is enough.
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