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  2. Defiance19

    Chasing Shadows

    Another great chapter, Wayne. “Wolfgang's lead sounds a bit like a ghost story.” - Is that a hint at another supernatural addition to the story? And, poor Jed.. The struggle is real.
  3. So.... just out of curiosity, how's everyone liking the "Author Guess Who" feature?
  4. TBT this'll get your Thursday humming along

    have a great day!!

  5. NimirRaj

    Chapter 13

    I’m glad that Richie is getting over his anger towards Freddie though his lust for him doesn’t hurt when it comes to softening the anger 😂 and thankfully unless signals are being misread there’s plenty of clues that Freddie is at least bi if not gay as he seems interested in Richie. Gabe once again sort of irritates me as he seemed to have a girl a.k.a. Teresa so yeah I don’t know if they’re officially dating yet his actions make him seem unfaithful though to be fair at his age most guys as well as plenty of girls aren’t exactly interested in committed relationships so it’s not surprising Sasha would catch his eye. The main thing that irritates me is his whining and abandoning his best friend. I mean first of all in the previous chapter Richie comments to himself that even though Gabe’s going he at least understands that he wants to spend time with his brother only for Gabe to turn around whining in this chapter about Richie & Freddie spending all the time babysitting their brothers while not going on rides with him. That doesn’t make him seem as understanding as Richie thought he’d be and then while I know sort of off script or whatever(not detailed as it’s not from Richie’ s POV) he’s befriended Freddie as well as has likely been spending time with him it still felt extremely rude that he dragged Freddie off ditching Richie just because of some girl. I mean Richie’s thought that it’s because he’s gay seem sort of ridiculous when you recall Gabe, though possibly not seriously, commented that he thought Freddie liked Richie indicating he had suspicions Freddie is gay so if he just wanted a wingman surely Richie would have been able to play the part as it’s not like Richie is obvious or stereotypically gay so I’m sure he could have handled riding the water slide with a girl. 🤦🏻‍♂️ I may be reading too much into it but it just seems hurtful to Richie that Gabe would drag Freddie along who he hasn’t known for nearly as long and abandon Richie to the tedium of watching after their little brothers when he’s supposed to be Richie’s best friend. I hope Richie tells him how that made him feel as it’s not good to bottle that up inside plus if Gabe is starting to treat Richie like a “convenience friend”, possibly without realizing it, not saying anything would likely only lead to it getting worse as Gabe will be ignorant to what he’s doing as he won’t likely realize he’s treating Richie poorly. I may be greatly overreacting as people can just be insensitive sometimes but I can’t help thinking about how Gabe fluctuates between being ok with Richie being gay and then seems bothered by it sometimes making me concerned that he’s starting to bond more with Freddie because he has no evidence he’s gay so he’s potentially choosing his seemingly hetero friend over his gay friend. Hopefully this is just a case of an insensitive, horny teenage boy who was just temporarily more interested in a girl than anything else with no underlying reasons for his actions.
  6. Will Hawkins

    The Fifty Quid

    I have no difficulty reading a story that uses British spelling, just don't ask me to use it in my writing! I can even understand many British slang terms, but not Cockney, I do have my limits. If I come across a British slang word in a story that I am not familiar with, I will use the internet for an American equivalent, but many British terms are understandable to even an old American like me without translation. Now if I could just figure out how to use the Brazilian telephone system, I would be well integrated. My Portuguese partner has escaped back to the Continent to visit his family and will be gone for two months The couple he has hired to feed me while he is gone do not understand English, so I am incommunicado for that time. They are doing a good job, so far, in feeding me and taking care of all the animals that Jose seems to collect, but I am surrounded by silence until he returns. I guess I will get a lot of reading on GA done.
  7. Bill W


    Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
  8. aditus

    Day 21 - Day 25

    Thank you for reading my poems, Parker and finding something, good.
  9. Cynthia followed up like a professional. Unless those rooms are recorded, which I'd think they wouldn't be for privacy - however maybe they are as part of the treatement record - she managed to his Edith the only way that seems to matter to her - headlines. Reputation. I've come to like Vlad more than Tyson, which is odd on the one hand - both are as they are do to situations beyond their control. Vlad has chosen how he will respond to that, with the support of his family. Tyson doens't have support, but chose to react to the world as his most hated foe does - his mother. I wonder if it will ever occur to Tyson that Vlad sees the world differently, even though his problems are literally inside him?
  10. Defiance19

    Chapter 37

    Roku is going to snore himself awake, roll over, and then, what sleep?
  11. Today
  12. 🤣 I didn’t necessarily think of Daniel dating Nathan rather with just the description of he’s brought home a girl my silly mind thought 🤔 ok maybe this girl is just Nathan wearing a dress, 😂 though I have to say seeing Don have a heart attack over Daniel being gay as well would be a lovely sight indeed. 😉 Sadly, Sue has always come off as caring somewhat though sadly she just has always seemed to care more about how Don felt as well as possibly how others might perceive her family rather than what Robbie was going through. I have some trouble trusting her judgement myself as she is so flakey and finicky though hopefully her recent disgust with Don as well as his methods will hopefully persist going forward.
  13. chris191070


    Awesome chapter.
  14. chris191070

    Chapter 13

    Richie managed a day with no hatred. He seems to be softening towards Freddie and Harley.
  15. mikedup

    Alo Chapter 34

    Brilliant chapter, the family is finally together. 3 cheers to that
  16. Wesley8890

    Chapter 13

    Well, he's softening towards Freddy now. Finally a chapter with no hatred!
  17. Poor Sammy. He didn't even want to come. JT has no choice except to take the offer and live with the guilt of leading his best friend to the slaughter.. How will he ever be able to persuade Renfield to accept these 'scriptures?' The ending leaves interesting questions and possibilities. This 'party' is both an interesting tool for recruiting and feeding.
  18. Tonyr

    Chapter 33

    Excellent chapter. I live this family. What happend to the bunch from where this spin off came from? Do you plsn to retake that story too? Ok, don't be a stranger again for so long!
  19. Parker Owens

    Day 21 - Day 25

    So glad you did not give up. Your translation experiment was awesome. Neanderthal and Not got to me. You’re right, he wouldn’t get a second look on the bus. You characterize doubt very well. And words mock me constantly. You wrote some gems, Adi.
  20. mfa607

    A New Page

    Thank you! Great chapter!
  21. My totally uninfluenced guess would have to be Aditus! 😎
  22. aditus

    Day 21 - Day 25

    It will be good, when we have more time for condensed thoughts.
  23. JT's bosses name brings up images of Bram Stoker. He is disgustingly unimaginative and has total contempt for his potential customer's taste and intelligence. He is the epitome of what we should despise in intermediaries and arbiters of entertainment content. JT never noticed the mysterious Gabriel called him by name though he never told it to him. It should have set off warning bells. What will this 'party' be? His post never appeared. Why is it such a big secret/
  24. Carlos Hazday


    Get ready, another chapter coming at you tomorrow morning! Glad you've enjoyed this one so much; it's amongst my personal favorites. Are you implying I drop hints and Easter Eggs into my stories? LOL. That line could refer to twins or to CJ and Ozzie planning on more than one pregnancy. Let's see what happens. We'll have an answer before this book's over.
  25. #TBT #ThrowbackThursday



  26. HOLY FREAKING CRAP! Cynthia is my spirit animal!! So we get to meet dad
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