timmy's poetry - 10. For Mum

Your memories - twinkling - skinned knees - perfect images to recall the person you still love. Such memories are conveyed so beautifully in this, as is the hurt you bear in missing her. One cannot read this without thinking of goodness and warmth; sadness and yearning. I offer hugs to you for both.

Without doubt I know your mum loved you unconditionally. It is fitting and good that you honor her with your memories and words. I am sorry for her passing as I know your life changed dramatically from that point to bring you undeserved heartbreak. I believe she is proud ot the man you've become.
Thank you for sharing her with us. Namaste little brother.

Oh tim, this is such a soulful poem. I am sure, that your mum still loves you. This loving energy can not be lost in the universe. The physic`s principal of energy conversation tells us so.
But I see the yearning and sadness and if you want to listening ear, I offer one.
Hug you Lyssa

Lovely, tim, and I don't find it sad. I get the same feelings, but with the feeling of loss comes warmth at the memories... in that respect, they'll never be gone.

held close with threads of gossamer

Beautiful imagery - perfect for the memories of a mother's love. She is depicted as an angel, watching over you. A spiritual presence in the room, enveloping you with her love, even now.

The only thing that we never gonna forget is mother's love. I can feel it through your poem. Sad yet rejuvenating the true relationship of earth.

It's mother's love all we want
It's mother's love we don't get
Yet
It's mother's love for what we thought
And fight
It's mother's love all we left.

~Emi.

On 02/21/2017 05:34 AM, Emi GS said:

The only thing that we never gonna forget is mother's love. I can feel it through your poem. Sad yet rejuvenating the true relationship of earth.

 

It's mother's love all we want

It's mother's love we don't get

Yet

It's mother's love for what we thought

And fight

It's mother's love all we left.

 

 

~Emi.

Thanks Emi. Love the little poem! Thanks for sharing!!

tim xo

On 02/21/2017 01:54 AM, Parker Owens said:

Your memories - twinkling - skinned knees - perfect images to recall the person you still love. Such memories are conveyed so beautifully in this, as is the hurt you bear in missing her. One cannot read this without thinking of goodness and warmth; sadness and yearning. I offer hugs to you for both.

Yeah I still love her, miss her sometimes a lot but it's all good.

Thanks Parker.

On 02/21/2017 01:57 AM, Reader1810 said:

Hey tim

The one thing that you have that can never be taken away is the knowledge that your mum loved you without measure or qualification. Of that, I have no doubt.

And you'd be right, Reader. No one can shake it or take it from me.

Thanks for reading and your comments.

xo

On 02/21/2017 02:06 AM, dughlas said:

Without doubt I know your mum loved you unconditionally. It is fitting and good that you honor her with your memories and words. I am sorry for her passing as I know your life changed dramatically from that point to bring you undeserved heartbreak. I believe she is proud ot the man you've become.

Thank you for sharing her with us. Namaste little brother.

Thank you, dugh. I hope she would be. Thanks for your lovely comments...

xoxo

On 02/21/2017 02:47 AM, Valkyrie said:

A sad, yet lovely poem. It sounds like your mom was a very special person.

Thanks Val ... most mums are special I think, at least to their children. Thank you for reading..

xo

On 02/21/2017 02:56 AM, Lyssa said:

Oh tim, this is such a soulful poem. I am sure, that your mum still loves you. This loving energy can not be lost in the universe. The physic`s principal of energy conversation tells us so.

But I see the yearning and sadness and if you want to listening ear, I offer one.

Hug you Lyssa

Thank you Lyssa. You know, the way you think, you remind me of her a lot. Don't worry, I dont think of you as my mum, but she had the kind of strength and passion that you do.

xo

On 02/21/2017 02:59 AM, Headstall said:

Lovely, tim, and I don't find it sad. I get the same feelings, but with the feeling of loss comes warmth at the memories... in that respect, they'll never be gone.

Yeah, you're right Gary. She's always close. But she's been in my dreams lately and i'm not sure why. But it's all good. Thanks for your wonderful comments...

xo

On 02/21/2017 03:22 AM, MacGreg said:

held close with threads of gossamer

 

Beautiful imagery - perfect for the memories of a mother's love. She is depicted as an angel, watching over you. A spiritual presence in the room, enveloping you with her love, even now.

I wrote this poem this morning. I chose the Elegy as the form rather than free verse or couplets, somehow it seemed the right thing to do. I feel spirits here with me often...

xo

On 02/21/2017 03:57 AM, hohochan657 said:

Thanks very much hoho. I appreciate you reading and the great hugs!

xo

Your words always affect me. This time with a longing for the relationship that you had with your mom, and that I used to have with mine. Those moments you talk about, I remember fondly.
Again, thank you for sharing this, with us.

On 02/21/2017 11:12 AM, mollyhousemouse said:

Your words always affect me. This time with a longing for the relationship that you had with your mom, and that I used to have with mine. Those moments you talk about, I remember fondly.

Again, thank you for sharing this, with us.

Thanks for reading molly ... and for your wonderful comments. Mums are special and i'm sure your kids feel the same way about you..

hugs

xoxo

made me miss mine

On 02/22/2017 03:43 AM, Bucket1 said:

made me miss mine

Yeah .. I know the feeling....hugs

Xo