timmy's poetry - 33. Garden

So beautiful!

someone else who understands the beauty of the oboe and how they can touch the soul and make it sing. i once heard a duet between an oboe and flute. puddles, just puddles

Wonderful poem, tim!!!

It's touching and beautiful. The tying in of the emotional response at the start with the picking of a flower in a garden makes me go to places of inward contemplation and outward freedom. 

I liked the comment Lyssa made last night about this poem in Live-Poets Society, and I imagine the one for whom this poem resonates the most intimately is touched very deeply indeed.

Thanks for sharing your amazing gift with us.  

9 minutes ago, hohochan657 said:

thank you hoho.. xoxo

On 6/25/2017 at 6:36 AM, Lyssa said:

So beautiful!

thank my sweet dear one,  your support means the world to me xoxo

On 6/25/2017 at 6:40 AM, Freerider said:

Lovely.... I really, really like the last 3 lines!

Thank you so much, Free!  I appreciate you commenting! xoxo

On 6/25/2017 at 7:50 AM, Parker Owens said:

When I first read this, I smiled for the sunlight and love I hear in every line. Reading it again today, the same smile returned, as I suspect it always will. Oboes and violins, like soothing like warm light; and the garden of people metaphor is brilliant. Utterly beautiful. 

Thank you very much Parker. I appreciate you reading and your kind comments. 

On 6/25/2017 at 7:56 AM, dughlas said:

Heartspun music drifting through the garden touching, caressing, content.

Thanks dugh xo

On 6/25/2017 at 8:21 AM, MichaelS36 said:

The beauty of your words is not lost on me, boy. They come from your beautiful soul. xo

Thank you, Michael.  xoxox

On 6/25/2017 at 8:32 AM, Reader1810 said:

Beautiful...all of it.  

Thank you very much Reader xo   Easy guy to write for... 

On 6/25/2017 at 2:46 PM, mogwhy said:

someone else who understands the beauty of the oboe and how they can touch the soul and make it sing. i once heard a duet between an oboe and flute. puddles, just puddles

  thanks moggy xo

On 6/25/2017 at 3:24 PM, Renee Stevens said:

Wonderful poem, tim!!!

Awwww, thanks Renee .. xo

On 6/25/2017 at 6:54 PM, AC Benus said:

It's touching and beautiful. The tying in of the emotional response at the start with the picking of a flower in a garden makes me go to places of inward contemplation and outward freedom. 

 

I liked the comment Lyssa made last night about this poem in Live-Poets Society, and I imagine the one for whom this poem resonates the most intimately is touched very deeply indeed.

 

Thanks for sharing your amazing gift with us.  

 

 

Thank you AC. I hope he is touched because I mean every word. Thank you for your comments.xxoo