timmy's poetry - 55. Cooling

10 minutes ago, MacGreg said:

I felt the cold and dampness in my bones as I read this. your attention to each and every detail illustrating the change of season is exquisite.

thank You, Sir.

You paint a vivid picture tim.. Fall is my favorite.. 

Nicely done. 

2 hours ago, BHopper2 said:

You painted a very vivid picture, tim. Good work.

Think we saw the same thing?😏

1 hour ago, Defiance19 said:

Think we saw the same thing?😏

I think we did, Agent D.

Beautiful imagery tim. Love the description. Reminds me of Autumn growing up in Jersey. The most peaceful season to me. xoxo

Beautiful and evocative. Made me feel the slowing , darkening of the season , even though we're entering summer here . 

18 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

Your powers of description are keen and strong. I can feel the cold, wet rain, and see the bare branches of which you write. And you make me feel for that lost little white moth, with seemingly no place to go before the snow arrives. I especially liked happiest winds from the north blow....  for it often seems that the north wind takes joy in its task of changing the season.

 

Thank you for this wonderful poem.

Thank you so much Parker ... such a tiny thing this moth ... I've seen them all my life, yet I've never really thought about them before. Thanks for reading and your comments, my friend. 

16 hours ago, BDANR said:

Very lovely. I was just taking a walk last night getting excited by the fall weather and you described it so well. Another great piece, Timmy :D!

Thank you very much .. i enjoy autumn as well. 

16 hours ago, dughlas said:

It is amazing how quickly some trees lose their leaves and how desparately others cling to theirs. I saw a pair of your white moths flitting through my garden earlier in the week. Time to grab a sweater ...

Lovely words tim.

Yes, it's cooling,  but i like it. As i said to Parker, i've never thought about what moths do in winter.. time for some research... and yes, a sweater!  Thanks dugh xo

15 hours ago, BHopper2 said:

You painted a very vivid picture, tim. Good work.

 Thanks very much, A!!  xo

12 hours ago, Defiance19 said:

You paint a vivid picture tim.. Fall is my favorite.. 

Nicely done. 

Thanks very much, boss!  My fav too!

12 hours ago, Defiance19 said:

Think we saw the same thing?😏

10 hours ago, BHopper2 said:

I think we did, Agent D.

Great minds, etc.!  Thanks you, two!!

10 hours ago, BlindAmbition said:

Beautiful imagery tim. Love the description. Reminds me of Autumn growing up in Jersey. The most peaceful season to me. xoxo

Thank you, jp. It is peaceful for the most part, isn't it? Do you miss having seasons where you are?  Or are they there, but just much more understated and less defined? 

6 hours ago, deville said:

Beautiful and evocative. Made me feel the slowing , darkening of the season , even though we're entering summer here . 

Thank you very much, deville. I appreciate it you reading and your comments ... 

2 hours ago, Mikiesboy said:

Thank you, jp. It is peaceful for the most part, isn't it? Do you miss having seasons where you are?  Or are they there, but just much more understated and less defined? 

Here in Vegas we have HOT and really HOT with everything dead. For about 3 months of winter, nights in 30’s. If lucky we get one light dusting of snow. This is becoming rarer.

Lovely boy. I know the tree ...