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  2. Al Norris

    Chapter 6

    I like how you think! Needless to say, things begin to ramp up from here on out.
  3. Al Norris

    Chapter 6

    There is a fundamental difference between Cattle/Mining towns, here in the West, and farming towns or what most are used to (city, urban, and suburban domains). Those who live in the town are either employees of the cattlemen or mines whereas the rest are merchants whose livelihoods are the cattlemen or mine owners. Things can happen at breakneck speed if the normal order is threatened. Perhaps not so much 'progressive' as they take note of those that stand on their own two feet. Something Peter has done from the start. Thank you for that. I have an excellent beta reader to help with all of that. Luckily a dislocated shoulder heals much quicker than fully stretched or torn ligaments!
  4. drsawzall

    Chapter 6

    Another fast paced and great chapter...I'm thinking Pete may need to use an umbrella on sunny days, look for the blazing tails of meteors headed towards earth, and cowboy boots for all the pesky vermin just awaiting a chance at his ankles!!! I wonder if Dr Danbury will become roommates with Mr Chilton???
  5. I had figured that Amos loved Gregor. So that was no surprise. What will be a surprise is if Simon also loves Amos and how that might work out! I am a bit surprised that our slimy Abbot would use his own troops to take Westwood. If there are escapees... The next town will be duly warned and on guard. I also wonder when Simon will see through what has been done to him.
  6. Nope. Never have I ever used a bowling pin as a dildo
  7. Paladin

    Chapter 7

    "The quality of mercy is not strained" I agree with @chris191070 that this is an awesome chapter. It was fascinating watching Greg and Chris spar to arrive at a just punishment. I loved the humour and the inclusion of of small details such as cleaning the boys feet and butts. Now for what happens to Chipper and Craig. All good I expect.
  8. Anton_Cloche

    Chapter 4

    Ass over teakettle might be just one of many positions Joe's "consultants" will use to loosen (before removing) Mohammed Bin Ibrahim's tongue. (According to someone with first hand knowledge of "their" ruthlessness.) Hopefully Ken, Joe and PD can find chopper flights, and also continue to stake out the local FBO for jet being "readied".
  9. mikedup

    Chapter 6

    Well the band of bigots is expanding, the pool of them is getting crowded, they will definitely get their just rewards, the best part is if and when they end up behind bars, they will absolutely find out that homophobia has no place in prison, but as the saying goes a hole is a hole , and the bigots will be on the receiving end . I think that a lot of things are going to happen and a lot of people are going to fall by the wayside, choose your friends carefully, I hope he recovers quickly
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  11. drsawzall

    Chapter 4

    See below....
  12. chris191070

    Chapter 7

    Awesome chapter. The perfect punishment for the crime.
  13. drsawzall

    Chapter 10

    Why is it the those with the strongest hate in their hearts are the ones who disobey the precepts of their faiths???
  14. drsawzall

    Chapter 9

    One can only hope the phone is with Thomas so he can be tracked...
  15. chris191070

    Family

    Julie seems nice.
  16. Nope Never have I used a rolling pin as a dildo
  17. Dhpiet77

    Chapter 6

    The action piles up in this chapter. Well written, too! Thanks for giving it to us.
  18. wallycleaver

    Chapter 6

    This story gets better with each new chapter. Thanks!
  19. drsawzall

    The Party

    Oh my goodness...brings me back to my wayward misspent youth...just after the dinosaurs passed and before we discovered leopard skin loincloths....
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