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Timothy’s Terrible Prompt Stories - 33. Prompt 425 I never thought it could be like this.

Eric and Nelson end up in need of a shower, too. :P 

Sort of a shared POV chapter

“I never thought it could be like this.”

Nelson’s whisper was barely audible, but since his mouth was next to Eric’s ear, the younger teen caught it. They were lying on Eric’s bed closely entwined after kissing each other breathless. The admission emboldened him to go a step further.

Nelson might have tried to slow things down by putting his jeans back on, but he didn’t resist when Eric began undressing him again. The blond teen slid his hands under Nelson’s T-shirt, while his mouth nibbled on his lover’s earlobe.

“Can I take your T-shirt off, Nel?” He pushed the lower hem upwards and smiled in victory when Nelson answered by simply stretching his arms above his head. Once his torso was bared, Eric took full advantage by kissing and licking everywhere, making Nelson moan as he teased his apparently sensitive nipples.

At some point Nelson managed to flip them over and attacked Eric’s neck and chest. His mouth and hands made the excited teen squirm with pleasure, and Eric kept hoping Nelson would make his way south to the rigid steel bar trapped in his underwear. In return, he would love to bury his face in the soft fabric of the red briefs and suck on the hard rod they were concealing. But first he had to get rid of those damn jeans.

The next time Nelson’s face was near his own, Eric whispered, “Please let me see you naked.”

Nelson froze.

“Or at least let me take off your jeans,” Eric pushed.

“Okay, but…” Nelson didn’t complete his sentence, but he let Eric unbutton, unzip and remove his jeans.

“Oh, fuck, Nelson, you’re so hot!” Eric whispered as he stared at the handsome guy sprawled on his bed in nothing but sexy red briefs, his disheveled hair framing a flushed face. The prominent bulge drew Eric’s gaze like a magnet and his hand followed. Nelson gasped as the warm fingers caressed his cock on top of the soft satiny cotton, but he didn’t object.

“You know what I want, don’t you?” Eric lifted his blue eyes to Nelson’s heated pools of melted chocolate.

“Yes babe, and I want it too. But I don’t want us to rush…” Nelson might have uttered sensible words, but his hand found Eric’s dick and gently traced the contours of his balls. It was the first time he’d taken the initiative to touch Eric so intimately and his boyfriend moaned and thrust his hips towards him.

Nelson’s lingering kiss as he fondled Eric was deep and seductive, and Eric did his best to return the caresses, which were slowly driving him crazy. His other hand was buried in Nelson’s hair as they built up experience in tongue play and the feel of nearly naked bodies touching. When Nelson drew back, Eric almost growled with annoyance.

“Ehmm, Eric, can I ask you something?”

“Okay – as long as you don’t stop touching me.”

“Have you done any…uh, research?”

“What?” Nelson’s hand cupping his balls was distracting.

“You know…on the internet? Porn or websites or such?”

“Ahh, ehmm, not much. Mainly looking at pictures of hot dudes, when I first realized I was attracted to guys. But I only got my own laptop at Christmas.”

“Yeah, having a private computer makes all the difference in the world.”

“So have you…looked at stuff?” Eric wasn’t sure what the purpose of this talk was. But as long as he got to lie next to Nelson, touching and kissing him, he didn’t care.

“Some, but it’s difficult to find the helpful stuff among all the porn. And there’s always the risk of getting a computer virus or some nasty pop-up ads. Jasper got one with big boobs once; it kept poppin’ up at the most inconvenient times.” Nelson sniggered, but Eric wanted to finish the conversation and get back to making out.

“Perhaps we can search for info together. What exactly did you want to find out?”

Nelson’s face suddenly matched his red briefs.

“Ummm, how to prepare…”

“For what? Oh…” Eric gulped as the answer to his question occurred to him. “But I thought we weren’t gonna rush anything? Not that I don’t want to… I mean…”

“Seems to me we’re having a hard time taking it slow.” Nelson glanced down and his hand squeezed Eric’s erection. A naughty smile hovered on his face as his eyes returned to Eric’s face.

They stared at each other for a second, and then started laughing. It turned out to be a good way to release tension.

Nelson was the first to sober up. “Eric, I know I wanted us to go slow, but I’ve realized something. It was never difficult to hold back before. I mean, because I’ve been out for a while, I’ve had offers to be with guys, but I was almost proud of my ability to decline the chance at casual sex, with or without dating.”

“But this is not casual sex.” Eric knew he was stating what they both felt.

“No, and I’m finding out what difference that makes. When we kiss and touch each other, I have no control. All I want is to get naked and make love. I never thought it would be so wonderful, almost overwhelming.”

“I’m glad I’m not the only one to feel that way.” Eric added a kiss to show his satisfaction. Just then his cell phone announced the arrival of a text.

“Fuck!” He rolled away and grabbed it from the nightstand. “They’re done. Rob says we can use the shower in ten minutes.”

“OK.” Nelson sat up and grabbed the discarded T-shirt.

“Oh no, you don’t.” Eric tackled his boyfriend. “We have ten minutes to make sure we need a shower, and I intend to make the most of it.”

“But…” Nelson began but got no further as Eric dived in for more kisses. He stared up at Eric when he pulled back.

“So you find me irresistible, eh?” Eric might have sounded cocky, but he craved the reassurance of Nelson being attracted to him, wanting him.

“Yeah, so I thought we’d better be ready.”

“You mean as in buying lube and condoms?” They both turned a bit red.

“Uhm, no in fact I have both already.” Nelson admitted sheepishly.

“You do? But I thought…” Eric wasn’t sure how to phrase this question.

“I use them for…ehm…my private playtime.”

“OK, that’s a relief. Then I won’t have to ask Rob or my dad to buy me any.”

“Ask Rob or… Eric, you wouldn’t!” Nelson’s face was so horrified, Eric burst out laughing immediately.

“You dickhead, that was mean!” Nelson pushed Eric away and sat up in bed to scowl down at his chuckling boyfriend.

“Awww, babe, I’m sorry. Don’t be mad. Tell me what you use them for all by yourself.” Eric wriggled his eyebrows at Nelson and pulled the brown-haired teen down on top of him.

“Can’t you guess?” Nelson maneuvered himself upright, until he was sitting on Eric, his butt grinding gently down on Eric’s crotch.

“Oh fuck, Nel. I can’t think when you do that!” Eric grabbed Nelson’s hips and held him in place while he pushed his cock deeper into the cleft between the firm buttocks.

“Well, how do you think I know I’d like you inside me?” Nelson reached out to pinch Eric’s nipple.

That did it, Eric had been on edge for a while, but the thought of sliding his cock into Nelson’s hot ass was too much. He grunted as he unloaded in his briefs for the second time that evening.

Nelson’s brown eyes got huge, and his right hand disappeared into his underwear. He stroked himself and muttered ‘Oh fuck, Eric’ as he came. Both of them panted heavily looking into each other’s eyes. Suddenly Nelson grinned, withdrew his hand from his red briefs and smeared a handful of cum all over Eric’s chest.

“Ewww, Nelson.”

“Well, you wanted to be in need of a shower, didn’t you?”

“Fine, but you get to wash it off.”

“Deal.”

“And that means I get to see you naked.” The smugness in Eric’s voice made him sound like Rob for a moment. Nelson rolled his eyes and got up from bed, followed by Eric, and they made their way into the bathroom.

“By the way, do you like my gifts? I enjoyed seeing you in them.”

“Yeah, I do, but I can’t believe I managed to make a mess in both of them.”

“That just made them even hotter.” Eric reached in to turn the shower on and adjust the temperature. He stepped in still wearing his briefs and made room for Nelson, who was busy bundling his long hair together at the nape of his neck. They took turns getting wet, but Nelson made sure to keep his hair out of the water and use his hands to splash water on his face.

Neither of them spoke, just eyed each other shyly, and then turned away before they shed their underwear. In spite of Nelson’s agreement to wash Eric, they took care of themselves, while stealing glances at each other. The possible arrival of Rob and Jasper lurked unsaid and made them hurry to get clean, dried and dressed. While Nelson packed away the two wet pairs of briefs and his new clothes, Eric straightened the bedclothes and unlocked the doors.

“Rob and Jasper are probably finishing off the pizzas in the kitchen, so let’s go down there,” Eric suggested.

“OK. But I hope they don’t say anything when our parents are present. I know I’m gonna blush if Rob starts hinting.”

Eric shrugged. “You never know with Rob, but since he gave us the chance to be alone, I think he’ll keep his mouth shut.”

“Hmm, maybe I should be more worried about the rents not being there.”

“Surely at some point Rob will stop being interested in what we do.” Eric tried to sound convincing.

“At least Jazz has absolutely no wish to hear about my sex life. That’s mutual, actually.”

“Lucky you.”

“Yes I am, but mainly because I have the sexiest boyfriend in the world.”

They hugged and kissed one last time, before going downstairs.

For Victor, I hope you like your birthday present. :hug: 

Copyright © 2017 Timothy M.; All Rights Reserved.
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A really great birthday present for Victor, and us as anxious bystanders!
The internet makes research possible these days...all we had was 'trial and error', and maybe a magazine if we were lucky. At least there were a few ground-breaking movies which came out around 1970s that gave a few more clues. There are a lot of things you can figure out on your own, but guys are much more fortunate today.
Underwear and shower scenes...works for me! You know how much I like the exploratory gentleness as opposed to raw, no-frills pounding. Great job, my friend!

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If you turn out things like this after being harassed, you can expect more harassment in the forum... Yummy and sweet chapter. Very nice!

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Two beautiful teens in love exploring the physical ... nicely done. I too prefer the gentle, less explicit, a first shy shower together ...
A very thoughtful gift for Victor.

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I don't know about Victor but I loved this chapter. :) The two boys exploring the physical part of their relationship was extremely well done Tim. It was sweet and loving and hot. Nelson is a smart boy to realize that, although he has intentions of not rushing into sex, that when there are true emotions involved that it is going to be hard to resist so better to be prepared. That research can also be something they do together, which might sound smutty but isn't meant to be. :P

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On 07/23/2015 05:49 PM, ColumbusGuy said:

A really great birthday present for Victor, and us as anxious bystanders!

The internet makes research possible these days...all we had was 'trial and error', and maybe a magazine if we were lucky. At least there were a few ground-breaking movies which came out around 1970s that gave a few more clues. There are a lot of things you can figure out on your own, but guys are much more fortunate today.

Underwear and shower scenes...works for me! You know how much I like the exploratory gentleness as opposed to raw, no-frills pounding. Great job, my friend!

You're right CG, the internet does make some things easier, but on the other hand you can get information overload. And how to sort through all the crap to find the gems? :unsure:

I admit I did think of you when writing about underwear, and I'm glad you guessed my source of inspiration even without me saying. :yes: I promise there will be more shower scenes. :P although probably not as good as Gary's.

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On 07/23/2015 05:55 PM, Puppilull said:

If you turn out things like this after being harassed, you can expect more harassment in the forum... Yummy and sweet chapter. Very nice!

LOL, I guess it was a good mixture of stick and carrot which got this chapter in the air. I did promise Victor a birthday present, and I have JAR nipping at my heels for more Rob. And I'm actually in the midst of a typical Rob chapter, which I think will delight his Team. :D

It's nice to know you liked the sweet stuff in here.

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On 07/23/2015 08:33 PM, dughlas said:

Two beautiful teens in love exploring the physical ... nicely done. I too prefer the gentle, less explicit, a first shy shower together ...

A very thoughtful gift for Victor.

You must be reading my mind, dugh. I had them jumping into the shower with anticipation :P and Wham! they turned all shy on me and refused to do anything. But I'm glad it resonated with you, then I know I did the right thing.

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On 07/23/2015 09:11 PM, LitLover said:

I don't know about Victor but I loved this chapter. :) The two boys exploring the physical part of their relationship was extremely well done Tim. It was sweet and loving and hot. Nelson is a smart boy to realize that, although he has intentions of not rushing into sex, that when there are true emotions involved that it is going to be hard to resist so better to be prepared. That research can also be something they do together, which might sound smutty but isn't meant to be. :P

I can't help chuckling about the fact everyone else gets Victor's present before he does. The curse of the time zones. :lol:

I'm very relieved everyone seems to like the second half of the boys' private time. I felt it was too similar to the first part, but whenever I tried to take things further, it felt wrong (but I'm saving what I wrote for later, lol).

Yeah, Nelson is smart, he knows where they are headed. Why fight the inevitable?

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Victor is going to love his present ;) I was a little too rushed and covert/closeted when I was with a guy at that age. but Nelson and Eric have what I wish I'd had at that age. The love they have for each other translates to wonderfully intimate physical moments between them that are as sweet and fun as they are steamy. The shyness in the shower was very true to them.

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On 07/23/2015 10:58 PM, EagleIsaac said:

Victor is going to love his present ;) I was a little too rushed and covert/closeted when I was with a guy at that age. but Nelson and Eric have what I wish I'd had at that age. The love they have for each other translates to wonderfully intimate physical moments between them that are as sweet and fun as they are steamy. The shyness in the shower was very true to them.

Thanks, Isaac, I'm glad you approve of Victor's gift. I know this story is idealistic, but when you tell me it portrays what you would have wanted for yourself, I know I've hit exactly the right note.

Shyness in the shower - that's almost a story title in itself. :lol:

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Smoking, sizzling, scintillating, sexy, shy and sweet... satisfying... for the boys and the readers. This may be Victor's gift, but it felt like mine too. I loved everything that Nelson said to Eric in this chapter, as well as the way he said those things. The research is an important aspect that gets overlooked in some contemporary stories, so I'm glad you included the need for it here. Nelson, pointing out the difference between how he could resist casual sex, but had a hard time when it was something so much more, elevated this chapter for me. Eric, more and more, comes across like his brother, and that's not a bad thing... but I love the sensitivity of Nelson. I just want to add one more 'S' word... superb... thanks for letting us share in Victor's gift... well done, my friend... Gary

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ran out of likes so :heart: :heart: :heart:
Love the part about the pop ups :gikkle:
Overall, I like how Eric and Nelson's relationship is progressing. They are enjoying and experiencing all the little things rather than going straight to the prize at the end. This approach only serves to strengthen their bond. In the long run, they will be all the better for taking this path.

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On 7/23/2015 at 7:13 PM, Reader1810 said:

ran out of likes so :heart::heart::heart:

Love the part about the pop ups :gikkle:

Overall, I like how Eric and Nelson's relationship is progressing. They are enjoying and experiencing all the little things rather than going straight to the prize at the end. This approach only serves to strengthen their bond. In the long run, they will be all the better for taking this path.

A friend of mine once had to teach a group of college students, but someone had used the computer in the class room to look at porn sites. Every five minutes this ad with half-naked full-breasted girls popped up in the middle of the presentation. At first the students giggled but after half an hour even they got fed up.

It's very cool to have support in how Nelson and Eric progress, because I think the urge to go straight for the big prize, as you say, can often get in the way of building a relationship to last. And particularly when it's inexperienced high school teens. But talking about it is fine, I think.

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On 07/24/2015 03:02 AM, Headstall said:

Smoking, sizzling, scintillating, sexy, shy and sweet... satisfying... for the boys and the readers. This may be Victor's gift, but it felt like mine too. I loved everything that Nelson said to Eric in this chapter, as well as the way he said those things. The research is an important aspect that gets overlooked in some contemporary stories, so I'm glad you included the need for it here. Nelson, pointing out the difference between how he could resist casual sex, but had a hard time when it was something so much more, elevated this chapter for me. Eric, more and more, comes across like his brother, and that's not a bad thing... but I love the sensitivity of Nelson. I just want to add one more 'S' word... superb... thanks for letting us share in Victor's gift... well done, my friend... Gary

Aww Gary, you're making me blush and do a little dance of joy (a gay dance?). I hoped your romantic heart would approve, and every S word was another bright star to hang on my author wall of happy moments.

I'm glad you (and others) mention the research. You did that aspect so well in COTT and SAD, and I want to at least mention the need and the difficulty to find useful stuff. And of course it could be fun too, if I can figure out how to write it. :unsure:

Nelson working out why he was unable to resist Eric was an important moment for me too. In fact I struggled a lot with this chapter, rewriting it several times, but when I wrote that part everything suddenly clicked.

Eric becoming like Rob - I think it's the self-confidence he is gaining, from being loved by Nelson. But of course Rob has several good qualities to be appreciated and imitated. I'm sure Team Rob agrees. :lol:

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YAY!! I finally get my present. thank you onkel Tim.... you made me really happy ^_^.
while it may seem that we have known them for ages, Eric and Nelson's relationship is really young (barely 72 hours long) :yes: . you have captured the feelings in a new and budding relation quite well as well as let them behave like teenagers. their interest in exploring but also the need to make it work was told quite perfectly. Eric may have more similarities with his brother than he thinks :D ...not that it is a bad thing :gikkle:. I liked the way Nel was trying to be sensible but had difficulties in doing so :rofl: . the shower scene was perfect, if they had tried to take it further there it would have been quite rushed and I'm sure that they wouldn't want that :no: .
besides I feel that Nel wants to take things slow because he wants to get to know and understand Eric and strengthen their relationship before the big step happensdeep-thinking-smiley-emoticon.gif . anyways tak onkel Tim, elske dig kiss-and-thank-you-smiley-emoticon.gif

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On 07/24/2015 04:33 AM, Victor Gutte said:

YAY!! I finally get my present. thank you onkel Tim.... you made me really happy ^_^.

while it may seem that we have known them for ages, Eric and Nelson's relationship is really young (barely 72 hours long) :yes: . you have captured the feelings in a new and budding relation quite well as well as let them behave like teenagers. their interest in exploring but also the need to make it work was told quite perfectly. Eric may have more similarities with his brother than he thinks :D ...not that it is a bad thing :gikkle:. I liked the way Nel was trying to be sensible but had difficulties in doing so :rofl: . the shower scene was perfect, if they had tried to take it further there it would have been quite rushed and I'm sure that they wouldn't want that :no: .

besides I feel that Nel wants to take things slow because he wants to get to know and understand Eric and strengthen their relationship before the big step happensdeep-thinking-smiley-emoticon.gif . anyways tak onkel Tim, elske dig kiss-and-thank-you-smiley-emoticon.gif

Årrh, tak Victor, elsker osse dig.

I think that's the most emoticons I've had in a review ever, LOL. I'm glad you liked your birthday present, and sorry it was so late. But I wanted it to be perfect.

I'm glad you can relate to them, since you and Drew are probably my readers closest to them in age etc. So having you praise this chapter means a lot to me.

I promise there will be more chapters where they can take a shower and work on their shyness. ;)

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The sweetest of sweet. Proof I cannot write romance, but you could make a fortune with it ... Congrats. JAR

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On 07/24/2015 04:57 AM, JohnAR said:

The sweetest of sweet. Proof I cannot write romance, but you could make a fortune with it ... Congrats. JAR

Thanks JAR and your reward is a Rob chapter. Soon...

But if you knew the effort it takes for me to write credible romance, you'd pity me (and my beta / editors). :lol:

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On 07/24/2015 09:01 AM, comicfan said:

Nicely done. Very sweet, romantic tale. Great use of the prompt. Enjoyed it a lot. :)

Thank you - I wouldn't be able to write this without your first line prompts to inspire me, so I'm delighted you approve. I was worried I'd run out, but the most recent ones have worked well. So keep them coming, please. :D

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On 07/25/2015 08:44 AM, Caz Pedroso said:

I'm sure Victor enjoyed his present, especially the happy ending for the boys ;)

Well, I was happy to see my other readers enjoyed it too. ;)

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Nice. And sweet. And Hot. And everything all over again. Still believable. Doing research on the internet can be fun also. :P

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On 10/04/2015 09:03 PM, aditus said:

Nice. And sweet. And Hot. And everything all over again. Still believable. Doing research on the internet can be fun also. :P

Wow, when you said you were going to catch up on Sunday, you really meant it! I'm completely distracted from the work I should be doing, including editing three chapters for JAR.

But I'm glad you find the interaction believable, because you write great romance yourself. So thanks for the reviews and the compliments. :D

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Suddenly Nelson grinned, withdrew his hand from his red briefs and smeared a handful of cum all over Eric’s chest.

 

- Yep, seems like all the undies are getting quite the action from those too.

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