tim's Bits and Pieces - 43. In the Chill of an Early Morning

Writing is a good way to get your feelings out. To me this poem is sad. I hope writing this helps put you on an even keel. Thanks for sharing. 

On 9/8/2019 at 6:44 PM, Thorn Wilde said:

I really feel this. Especially the last few lines. It's a sad world where money matters more than people's lives. Thank you for sharing.

Thanks Thorn  i appreciate it.

On 9/8/2019 at 6:51 PM, AC Benus said:

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On 9/8/2019 at 7:00 PM, Brayon said:

The heart is because I felt your poem is well written, and invoked a strong emotion in me. So it's showing how I feel about the poem itself. As for content, I would be a tear drop like the others, because it is sad. Getting ones emotions out is a good thing. You're right that lately there has been a lot of sadness and heartache. Hugs my brother.

Thanks very much,  A.

On 9/8/2019 at 8:30 PM, Defiance19 said:

This poem spoke directly to me.. 

Thanks Boss ...

On 9/8/2019 at 10:09 PM, Parker Owens said:

Your poetry often resonates with me, and this one did so especially. You give voice to the vexation and discontent I feel at so much I see and hear. Yet I know you are loved beyond price by many who read your poems, including me. 

Thank you, Parker xo

On 9/8/2019 at 10:50 PM, MichaelS36 said:

I often wish I could make you happy.  I know sometimes you are. But then your poet's voice, vision, whatever it is pulls the truth from your gut, and you spill it out. And I know in that moment you never truly will be. 

Mostly i am xoxo

On 9/9/2019 at 5:28 AM, JeffreyL said:

Writing is a good way to get your feelings out. To me this poem is sad. I hope writing this helps put you on an even keel. Thanks for sharing. 

Thanks very much, Jeffrey xo

Sometimes I think you are reading my mind, but maybe you are reading the collective mind.  You are wise beyond your years.  Thank you for putting into words what many feel but cannot express.

6 hours ago, Backwoods Boy said:

Sometimes I think you are reading my mind, but maybe you are reading the collective mind.  You are wise beyond your years.  Thank you for putting into words what many feel but cannot express.

i've seen more than my fair share  ... kinda makes you grow up fast. Sometimes i forget i'm 35. I feel more like 300.

Thanks, BB.