tim's Bits and Pieces - 28. In the Heat of Morning

16 hours ago, Kapucinski said:

This is so beautiful, thank you so much for sharing. 

It feels so real, like being there in your skin (not meant to be creepy ☺️).

I feel so privileged that I live in a different time zone and get to read your poems among the first lucky ones.

Thanks for your wonderful comments. i didn't think it was creepy   i'm glad you enjoyed it

16 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

What an awesome poem to heat up any morning. I love knotted together, and my name is a caress... Beautiful. 

thank you very much Parker xo

14 hours ago, mayday said:

Beautiful and sooo moving

thanks very much mayday, much appreciated. i'm glad the feelings came through xo

11 hours ago, Reader1810 said:

 this

 

Exquisite...  

Thanks very much Reader xoxo

11 hours ago, BHopper2 said:

This was a fantastic poem and shows a lot of love in it.

Excellent visuals from it too.

Thanks very much A! .. glad you see and feel it xo

10 hours ago, MacGreg said:

Mmm. 

thanks very much for reading, Sir xo

This is hot and beautiful, touched with the erotic and the sensually romantic. (Morning sex is the best!!)

What a lovely love letter.  Thank you for sharing, tim.  

1 hour ago, FanLit said:

This is hot and beautiful, touched with the erotic and the sensually romantic. (Morning sex is the best!!)

What a lovely love letter.  Thank you for sharing, tim.  

thanks for reading and your great comments.. and yeah, morning sex is the best

thanks again xoxo

This is so beautiful and sensual, tim. A wonderful way for you both to wake. I've don't remember seeing you write something like this before, but the love in it is evident from start to finish. I can't wait to have my boy read it later to get his reaction.  xoxo 

1 hour ago, WolfM said:

This is so beautiful and sensual, tim. A wonderful way for you both to wake. I've don't remember seeing you write something like this before, but the love in it is evident from start to finish. I can't wait to have my boy read it later to get his reaction.  xoxo 

Thanks Wolfie!  There are pieces to Michael dotted throughout my poetry ... i keep trying to put those feelings into words, it's very difficult.  This is the closest i've gotten so far.  i hope Your boy enjoys it. Thank You for reading it and for Your comments ... xoxo

You wrote this between breakfast and work? You are a marvel! Read all the other comments. They expressed my feelings better than I could. Beautiful and erotic. Thank you.