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tim's Bits and Pieces - 84. Moments

Moments

 

I am the observer

A lonely watcher of life

My heart beats

I feel the sun and rain

From the kitchen the water runs

I blink

Time leads me on from

One day to the next

As the cardinal flies overhead

Does it count its days and nights?

Or is it only we

Who mark the passing hours?

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Thank you for reading. I appreciate your time and any thoughts you care to share.
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That is an excellent question, tim. Need to ponder for a bit. 

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On 5/26/2022 at 11:12 PM, Reader1810 said:

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That is an excellent question, tim. Need to ponder for a bit. 

Best not to think too much about it.  Thanks, Reader

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On 5/27/2022 at 3:23 AM, chris191070 said:

Great words, with questions that need to be thought about, before you think of answering them. Thanks for writing tim x

Thanks, chris.  oxox

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On 5/27/2022 at 8:07 AM, Parker Owens said:

You made me stop and take notice of passing minutes, as if to try and feel the air move as they went by. This is beautiful.

now that's a thought... thanks, Parker.

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22 hours ago, MichaelS36 said:

you've been quiet and pensive so this poem doesn't surprise me. I like that it's questioning things in the world, rather than turning inward.  

i'm okay, Sir xoxo

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19 hours ago, WolfM said:

tim, you're writing is always beautiful and thoughtful. Lonely observation can lead to insight about the world our about what's within. You have a gift for getting people to set with you and learn.

Thanks very much, Wolfie. i appreciate your thoughts.

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8 hours ago, Wayne Gray said:

you shared this with me, and when you did my comment was that it was "thoughtful." And I still think that's true. It's neither happy nor sad. It's watchful and external.

Nice piece, tim.

Thanks, Wayne. xoxo

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2 minutes ago, rickproehl said:

tim

great thoughts

thanks for writing this. 

 

Thanks for reading it and your comments, rick xo

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