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tim's Bits and Pieces - 85. All i Know

All i Know

 

Your name

will be the last word

I utter

And no stars will fall

The sun will still rise

When for the final time I close

my eyes

You who are my anchor;

my love

The last and best piece

of this puzzle

When it’s my turn to go

You will be all I know

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Thank you to my Husband, Michael who is my everything. Thanks to you too, who read, comment or leave a reaction, your time and efforts are appreciated.
Copyright © 2018 Mikiesboy; All Rights Reserved.
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The content presented here is for informational or educational purposes only. These are just the authors' personal opinions and knowledge.
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What an amazing affirmation to the love of your life. Just beautiful tim.

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I love this poem, Tim! I think several others more correctly identified it as a love note. ❤

Happy, sad, or thoughtful it is always a pleasure to read what you've written. Thanks.

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13 hours ago, Reader1810 said:

Beautiful love note, tim. :) 

Thanks, Reader. i hope i'm capable enough to follow through when it's that time. xo

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12 hours ago, chris191070 said:

That's a beautiful love note. Thanks for writing tim x

Thank you for reading, chris!  i appreciate it.

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11 hours ago, MichaelS36 said:

boy, I sometimes do not have the words. 

I love you, will have to suffice. xo 

i love You too xo

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11 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

This poem took my breath away. It’s beautiful and powerful. 

Aw , thank you, Parker. i appreciate it.

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7 hours ago, kbois said:

What an amazing affirmation to the love of your life. Just beautiful tim.

Thank you. He is ... everything. I appreciate you reading and commenting, k.  Thank you.

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4 hours ago, JeffreyL said:

I love this poem, Tim! I think several others more correctly identified it as a love note. ❤

Happy, sad, or thoughtful it is always a pleasure to read what you've written. Thanks.

Hello, Jeffrey. Thanks very much for your thoughts and comments. I always appreciate them. xo

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 Thanks for writing this tim

Like others have said this a wonderful love note.

well done.

 

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