tim's Bits and Pieces - 10. Tommy's Poems

It's an interesting (and perhapts not consciously planned?) approach to a story and I wish you that everything will come together nicely.

I'm not very good with flowers but of course I looked up the words that I didn't know; I'm not very good at thinking in images either. Does it make sense when I say that you create emotional landscapes? All the best xo

On 7/21/2018 at 11:10 AM, BHopper2 said:

Excellent tim! Your second poem on love nearly knocked me out of my chair. Those last three lines are powerfully true. 

thanks A xo 

On 7/21/2018 at 11:15 AM, Reader1810 said:

Love all of them, but I’m lingering on the first because you wrote about tiger lilies, which are right up there on my list of faves. 

Nicely done, rim.  

 

PS: Didn’t know what snapdragons looked like, so I looked them. Gorgeous, they are. 

 

 

thank you Reader ... they are pretty and colourful and very soft..

On 7/21/2018 at 12:14 PM, Parker Owens said:

our Garden filled me with smiles and made me happy. on Love spoke to me we clarity and truth. Those last lines were awesome. for Tarek evokes images of selfless love, reminding me of the poem preceding it, and of the rebirth one finds in a garden. Taken together, these are a terrific trio. 

thanks Parker ... hopefully i can finish the story ...

On 7/21/2018 at 1:00 PM, Defiance19 said:

Loved them all, but our garden put  me in my happy place.

Really great poems, tim.  

 

thanks Def xoxo

On 7/21/2018 at 1:53 PM, dughlas said:

My tiger lilies are in bloom at the moment. When I was a child we would carefully pick the individual blossoms from snap dragons to put one our fingers as puppets. You gave me back some of my memories. Thank you.

my mum grew tigers and all sorts of other lillies, her garden was a wild place but beautiful.  thanks dugh xo

On 7/21/2018 at 10:46 PM, MichaelS36 said:

Love them, I'm looking forward to the story. xo

thank You Michael xo

10 minutes ago, Zenobia said:

It's an interesting (and perhapts not consciously planned?) approach to a story and I wish you that everything will come together nicely.

I'm not very good with flowers but of course I looked up the words that I didn't know; I'm not very good at thinking in images either. Does it make sense when I say that you create emotional landscapes? All the best xo

funny you say not consciously planned ... the story comes from a dream i had. That i remember it at all is funny but the story, i hope is a little different  thank you xoxoo

Now I'm really excited what will come out of it