tim's Bits and Pieces - 63. Time For Everything

This poem took me with you on a journey to dark caverns and deep, reverberating tunnels. I feel an oppression, a confining closeness, until you open up the vision of the rose, and the flower with roots that grow around the stones to lift blossoms to the sky. I loved this. 

I find strength once more to tend the dampened spark

Your strength amazes and inspires me tim. Keep tending that spark and the light will get brighter. 

It's a beautiful piece. 

When did you write this?  It is beautiful. 

As Parker has said, it takes us to the deep and dark places filled with sadness and hopelessness. That is until life/The Fates step in and show us the beauty there is in life and the world. 

You are right, there is no answer to that universal question. Keep practicing your mindfulness meditation, it can help you.  The future we cannot stop and the past we cannot change, but living in the moment helps us to not wonder about tomorrow (unless it's your birthday and you know there will be presents and most especially cake!) and not worry about the mistakes of the past. 

A truly wonderful piece. Beautiful. Well done. 

This is lovely. Melancholy but hopeful too.

Hang on to that rose.

Awesome. This is a beautiful piece of writing.

Beautiful.

There are times when it's hard to see the rose through the darkness.

22 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

This poem took me with you on a journey to dark caverns and deep, reverberating tunnels. I feel an oppression, a confining closeness, until you open up the vision of the rose, and the flower with roots that grow around the stones to lift blossoms to the sky. I loved this. 

Thank you, Parker. i appreciate this and i'm pleased you could visualize it. ox

22 hours ago, kbois said:

I find strength once more to tend the dampened spark

Your strength amazes and inspires me tim. Keep tending that spark and the light will get brighter. 

It's a beautiful piece. 

 

 

 

Thank you so much for coming to read this. i know poetry is not really your thing.  ❤️

21 hours ago, MichaelS36 said:

When did you write this?  It is beautiful. 

As Parker has said, it takes us to the deep and dark places filled with sadness and hopelessness. That is until life/The Fates step in and show us the beauty there is in life and the world. 

You are right, there is no answer to that universal question. Keep practicing your mindfulness meditation, it can help you.  The future we cannot stop and the past we cannot change, but living in the moment helps us to not wonder about tomorrow (unless it's your birthday and you know there will be presents and most especially cake!) and not worry about the mistakes of the past. 

A truly wonderful piece. Beautiful. Well done. 

When?  In the morning between 9am and 10:30am

The meditations are helping i think, as are the affirmations. Thank you, Sir. xo

21 hours ago, Wayne Gray said:

This is lovely. Melancholy but hopeful too.

Hang on to that rose.

I will try, thank you, Wayne. xo

42 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

Thank you so much for coming to read this. i know poetry is not really your thing.  ❤️

It's starting to grow on me. 😊❤

This is hauntingly beautiful. It made me cry and smile. Years ago I had lain under those weighty stones of grief. My chest was so tight that it hurt to draw breath into my body. It lasted for a long time,  It was hard climbing out of that place in my life but it did get better, and I'm so glad that I did climb out. 

You are immensely talented. Thank you for sharing such an intimate piece.