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tim's Bits and Pieces - 13. Walking in the Rain

This was just a little project but i decided maybe it could be a bit more... so a bit of a haibun poem for you.

Walking in the Rain

 

Thunderstorms rolled through my neighbourhood. I had to walk home after disembarking the bus and I was grateful, though I would be wet, at least it was warm. My route from the bus takes me by a cemetery. The sidewalk alongside it is covered by boughs of trees thick enough you don’t need an umbrella. It is a glorious space, in an open suburban landscape.

 

From above, rain falls
but the canopy protects
me, from a drenching

 

As I walked I noticed that some of the headstones were covered in colourful sprays of flowers. Wet now, the colours were even more vibrant.

 

Purple iris, and yellow tulips
together bring cheer to a
place where forgotten
hopes and dreams are buried.


 

Overhead, the deep sound of thunder rolled, yet the sun peeked through the dark clouds. Inside, instinct said hurry, hurry home. But the poet wanted to see and feel the air electric from lightening, see the vivid greens on the water-coated leaves and needles of the pines. I gazed on the ground in front of me and the grass—such an everyday and drab thing—was bright, fresh and brilliant in colour. Drops clung to the blades like morning dew.

 

We walk by our world

oblivious, not seeing

the beauty

offered by the rain.

 

 

Time, though infinite,

is finite

invest a minute

to look around and see.

 

 

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Thank you for reading!

A special thank you to @MacGreg Sir, for the inspiration to write this.
Oh, i'm terrible, and @Zenobia also, who pushed me quite gently to see this as more. Thank you.
Copyright © 2018 Mikiesboy; All Rights Reserved.
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Ahh, fixed it.  

I have no problem walking in the rain...most times. I enjoyed taking this walk with you. Particularly, seeing brightness and cheer, in a place where the first thought is often of sadness and mourning. It’s a wonderful perspective and a great Haibun. 

Nice work, tim. 

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9 minutes ago, Defiance19 said:

Ahh, fixed it.  

I have no problem walking in the rain...most times. I enjoyed taking this walk with you. Particularly, seeing brightness and cheer, in a place where the first thought is often of sadness and mourning. It’s a wonderful perspective and a great Haibun. 

Nice work, tim. 

Its messed up on my phone too...ugh

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30 minutes ago, Mikiesboy said:

Its messed up on my phone too...ugh

I checked.. thought I worked a miracle. It’s ok on my iPad not the phone. 😒

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Calming and though provoking. We do often forget the beauty that comes with the rain. Fall is coming soon 😁

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1 minute ago, BDANR said:

Calming and though provoking. We do often forget the beauty that comes with the rain. Fall is coming soon 😁

thanks BDANR!  I'll have to have a look when autumn arrives..  thanks for your comments.

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