tim's Bits and Pieces - 41. At First; After Consideration; The Truth

I can see the progression in these. Nice work.   you are not an awful person.  Anyone who thinks that hasn't bothered to get to know you. 

Great poems, tim. I can feel the emotion that is in your words.

Love all of them, but especially After Consideration

After Consideration made my gut clench. How often have I given useless, gratuitous words, blather that burdens and breaks my brothers? How often have I unthinkingly shattered another man’s mirror? You make me feel the hurt I’ve inflicted.

The Truth lifted me up again. You make a good case for the enduring real, the lasting truth. 

Thanks for all of these. They are awesome. 

5 hours ago, MichaelS36 said:

I can see the progression in these. Nice work.   you are not an awful person.  Anyone who thinks that hasn't bothered to get to know you. 

Thank you, Michael. I appreciate you reading them. xo

5 hours ago, Brayon said:

Great poems, tim. I can feel the emotion that is in your words.

Thanks very much A.  xo

5 hours ago, AC Benus said:

Thank you for all the hugs and support, AC xo

2 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

After Consideration made my gut clench. How often have I given useless, gratuitous words, blather that burdens and breaks my brothers? How often have I unthinkingly shattered another man’s mirror? You make me feel the hurt I’ve inflicted.

The Truth lifted me up again. You make a good case for the enduring real, the lasting truth. 

Thanks for all of these. They are awesome. 

I don't know Parker. I shouldn't have thought any, or many. Thank you for your comments. I appreciate it.

A great set, tim.  After Consideration should give us all pause. 

4 minutes ago, Defiance19 said:

A great set, tim.  After Consideration should give us all pause. 

Thanks Def... i appreciate your comments.. xo

7 hours ago, Reader1810 said:

 

I like this. 

Well done, my friend, well done...

Thanks very much, Reader.  i am glad you like them. i appreciate you reading them xo

Each of these poems is fueled by anger, disappointment, rejection, self-doubt... emotions we can all relate to on some level. you've voiced yours in clear, concise verbiage, tim. As others here have already said, After Consideration packs its own special punch, right in the kisser. I felt the bludgeoning as I read it. I hope expressing your thoughts this way helped release some of the bullshit. you are loved, boy.

4 hours ago, MacGreg said:

Each of these poems is fueled by anger, disappointment, rejection, self-doubt... emotions we can all relate to on some level. you've voiced yours in clear, concise verbiage, tim. As others here have already said, After Consideration packs its own special punch, right in the kisser. I felt the bludgeoning as I read it. I hope expressing your thoughts this way helped release some of the bullshit. you are loved, boy.

Thank you, Sir.  poem one and two are related .. the third is due to conversation i read that was rather cruel and egotistical.

So all of your adjectives are what i felt on those occasions.

Kissing is too much fun...i'd never punch anyone there, Sir ... hehe    Thank You again for reading and for your excellent comments.