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tim's Bits and Pieces - 28. In the Heat of Morning

some raw poetry ...

In the quiet of the morning I listen to you draw breath.
Beneath the blanket lay your soft skin and my desire
and I long for your awakening and firmness of your flesh.
My tongue traces my lips and I taste you there

So I turn toward you and you are disturbed; softly sighing
I can smell you and what remains of last night’s musk
Breathing quickens and my heated blood pushes through me
I let my cool hand find the warm skin of your thigh; sliding upward

Your lips part, and your strong hands grasp my bruised flesh and pull me
Closer, and lips seek softly; your breath in my mouth; I cling to you;
And I cling to you as we are knotted; alive together as one
In your throes, blood vessels break as you grip me but I care not

And at the end; but never the end, my name is a caress from your lips
I am bound in your arms and you are in me and around me
and I am yours, yours, yours, and the wonder of it ever amazes me
You pull me down and kiss me; and we are close as you say, I love you, boy.

~~~

Thanks for reading. i woke up and just needed to write this.
Copyright © 2018 Mikiesboy; All Rights Reserved.
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16 hours ago, Kapucinski said:

This is so beautiful, thank you so much for sharing. 

It feels so real, like being there in your skin (not meant to be creepy ☺️).

I feel so privileged that I live in a different time zone and get to read your poems among the first lucky ones.

Thanks for your wonderful comments. i didn't think it was creepy :)  i'm glad you enjoyed it

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16 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

What an awesome poem to heat up any morning. I love knotted together, and my name is a caress... Beautiful. 

thank you very much Parker xo

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14 hours ago, mayday said:

Beautiful and sooo moving

thanks very much mayday, much appreciated. i'm glad the feelings came through xo

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11 hours ago, BHopper2 said:

This was a fantastic poem and shows a lot of love in it.

Excellent visuals from it too.

Thanks very much A! .. glad you see and feel it xo

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This is hot and beautiful, touched with the erotic and the sensually romantic. (Morning sex is the best!!)

What a lovely love letter.  Thank you for sharing, tim.  

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1 hour ago, FanLit said:

This is hot and beautiful, touched with the erotic and the sensually romantic. (Morning sex is the best!!)

What a lovely love letter.  Thank you for sharing, tim.  

thanks for reading and your great comments.. and yeah, morning sex is the best

thanks again xoxo

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This is so beautiful and sensual, tim. A wonderful way for you both to wake. I've don't remember seeing you write something like this before, but the love in it is evident from start to finish. I can't wait to have my boy read it later to get his reaction.  xoxo  :hug:

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1 hour ago, WolfM said:

This is so beautiful and sensual, tim. A wonderful way for you both to wake. I've don't remember seeing you write something like this before, but the love in it is evident from start to finish. I can't wait to have my boy read it later to get his reaction.  xoxo  :hug:

Thanks Wolfie!  There are pieces to Michael dotted throughout my poetry ... i keep trying to put those feelings into words, it's very difficult.  This is the closest i've gotten so far.  i hope Your boy enjoys it. Thank You for reading it and for Your comments ... xoxo

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You wrote this between breakfast and work? You are a marvel! Read all the other comments. They expressed my feelings better than I could. Beautiful and erotic. Thank you. 

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