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tim's Bits and Pieces - 83. Stones and Blood

two poems that finally made their way to the surface

1.

I’ve forgotten what peace there is in silence

Like a warm hand on your shoulder

Gentle and solid

Awaiting your attention with the patience of stone

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2.

You can look inside yourself too much

until your light is enveloped by dark

While you weep in self-inflicted pain and

peace surrenders to turmoil

 

Blinkered gaze focuses on the soul’s

fragmented imperfections, and

you sit cross legged to pick up the pieces

while your fingers bleed

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Thanks for reading and for your thoughts should you wish to share them.
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I just had five days of almost complete silence in my house. Husband and son were both away. It was so cathartic. A balm to my soul that was desperately needed. Sometimes silence is the best sound there is. 

I try not to look inside myself too much. Most days are okay, but self doubt always threatens to snuff out the light I let in. 

Thank you for sharing tim. xo❤

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On 3/21/2022 at 10:39 PM, Parker Owens said:

Your poems speak to me and make me hear your voice telling me about the  quiet, and that solid, reassuring peace - and about how focusing on perceived flaws can shatter that peace into shards. These lines are spare and beautiful. 

Thanks Parker.  You're very kind.  i know i am remiss in reading your work ... you deserve better and i'm sorry i can't be more right now. 

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On 3/22/2022 at 12:29 AM, chris191070 said:

I like Silence, but the second one really made me think.

Thanks for writing these tim x

Thanks, chris.  The second is dark and better not to think about that overly much.  I hope you're feeling better.

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On 3/22/2022 at 1:08 AM, JeffreyL said:

The second poem is a bit dark, but no less true. I'll repeat what others have commented. It makes me think. Number one is almost a shout for joy! If it's possible to shout quietly. I know the peace in silence, and your poem beautifully captures that feeling. Thanks for sharing, Tim. 🧡

Thanks, jeffrey. Silence is a rare thing for me, living where i do. I do so love it though.  Thanks for reading. xo

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On 3/22/2022 at 9:42 AM, mollyhousemouse said:

The first piece brings me peace & joy.

The second one, like everyone else, gives things to think about. Too much time spent inside your own head can be rough.

Sending you all my love

Thank you for your constant love and friendship.  Thinking isn't always good, as you know yourself.  xoxo

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On 3/22/2022 at 10:27 AM, kbois said:

I just had five days of almost complete silence in my house. Husband and son were both away. It was so cathartic. A balm to my soul that was desperately needed. Sometimes silence is the best sound there is. 

I try not to look inside myself too much. Most days are okay, but self doubt always threatens to snuff out the light I let in. 

Thank you for sharing tim. xo❤

i understand that. looking inward or looking at the past isn't always good.  Thank you for reading. xo

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On 3/22/2022 at 10:41 AM, Lux Apollo said:

So many familiar emotions and feelings here. Thanks for sharing. Makes me want a hug, so I will give you one through the Aether.

hugs back, Lux.  Thanks for reading and your comments.  xo

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1 hour ago, Mikiesboy said:

Thanks dugh. i keep making new cuts ... been struggling lately... however, on new meds again.. and following the doc's advice about exercise and things.

Hugs. Mum asked after you last evening. Said she was just wondering how you are. She sends her love.

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