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tim's Bits and Pieces - 70. This Fool's Errand

People come and go from our lives. Sometimes not because you want them to ... and sometimes you can never say goodbye.

I’d never have left you

But you walked away

Behind, you leave my broken heart

And your fabrications

are fantasies that you sing to yourself

they sadden my soul

And wondering why is a fool’s errand

Yet, I love you and my heart

Though quiet

Will never truly let you go

 

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Sad, but moving words. Heartbreak always weighs heavy on one's emotions. Well written tim.

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When you open your heart there is always the potential for hurt. Courage is in doing so despite the risk. Once again you've gifted us with your words. Thank you little brother.

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Once again, your words flood my heart. This time,  I feel melancholy for a warm connection that has gone cold. 

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it's hardest, i think, when someone just drifts away

your words never fail to touch me tim

thank you for sharing them

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14 hours ago, Wayne Gray said:

The title coupled with the poem make for an emotional punch. It's a good poem. Well done, tim.

Thanks Wayne .. still unsure of this one, i'd hoped it would help me get over it.  i guess that remains to be seen.

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14 hours ago, kbois said:

Sad, but moving words. Heartbreak always weighs heavy on one's emotions. Well written tim.

Thanks, kbois. i've written lots about this since it happened... nothing i'd post because until now they were just full of anger.

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8 hours ago, chris191070 said:

Moving words, that pack an emotional punch. Thanks tim x

:) Thank you, chris. xo

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7 hours ago, JeffreyL said:

This is beautifully written, very expressive, sad, and too often true. Endings with people are generally tough. Romantic endings even more so. Thanks Tim for sharing another of your poems. 

Thanks very much, Jeffrey. You're right, of course, endings are hard. i appreciate you reading.

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6 hours ago, dughlas said:

When you open your heart there is always the potential for hurt. Courage is in doing so despite the risk. Once again you've gifted us with your words. Thank you little brother.

You're so right, dugh. Thanks for your support. i hope you, Mom and the pup are well.

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5 hours ago, Parker Owens said:

Once again, your words flood my heart. This time,  I feel melancholy for a warm connection that has gone cold. 

Thanks Parker. i guess things don't always go the way we think they should. i'm getting over it. i hope you are doing well.

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1 hour ago, mollyhousemouse said:

it's hardest, i think, when someone just drifts away

your words never fail to touch me tim

thank you for sharing them

Thanks molly. i think you're right, someone just drifting away is very hard to deal with. xo

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1 hour ago, Mikiesboy said:

You're so right, dugh. Thanks for your support. i hope you, Mom and the pup are well.

We are thanks. Mum sends her love.

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tim as usual a thoughtful poem.
thanks for sharing 

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Reacting to this poem with a heart doesn't seem quite right, but it's also the emotion I want to send your direction from reading it. tim, you are so gifted at poetry and never fail to bring an emotional response. Hugz my friend.

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2 hours ago, rickproehl said:

tim as usual a thoughtful poem.
thanks for sharing 

Thank you, rick. i appreciate it.

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34 minutes ago, WolfM said:

Reacting to this poem with a heart doesn't seem quite right, but it's also the emotion I want to send your direction from reading it. tim, you are so gifted at poetry and never fail to bring an emotional response. Hugz my friend.

it's been sometime since this happened, though, while i don't understand the why of it really, you have to just accept things sometimes. But i'm fine. xoxo

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Love is tough schtuff, indeed. Powerful, angstful and beautiful, too! The loss of it...same, same and SAME!

The wonder why? Foolish, perhaps...but necessary!

Wonderfully poeted, I enjoyed molto!🤓

 

 

 

 

 

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5 hours ago, RafaelDe said:

Love is tough schtuff, indeed. Powerful, angstful and beautiful, too! The loss of it...same, same and SAME!

The wonder why? Foolish, perhaps...but necessary!

Wonderfully poeted, I enjoyed molto!🤓

 

 

 

 

 

Hello RafaelDe ... thank you for choosing to read this and for your comments. It's very nice to meet you and i hope you are well.

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