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tim's Bits and Pieces - 72. Soulmate

Soulmate

 

Your gentleness called to me

Made me peek from between my fingers.

The laughter in your eyes

Brought the smile to my lips.

The love you show and share

Swells my heart.

You bring me closer to my own self

And to you.

So close, I am sewn to you, skin to skin

With the threads of silken love, we made

And make.

Soulmates grown from a love well-tended,

not from the first bloom.

 

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Thanks for reading and for your likes and comments. I hope you all stay safe and well.
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This is a wonderful poem, Tim! You have captured and put into words that joy of being one with another person! Reader1810 is spot on! "Mad skills our Tim has!" Ask Michael to give you a hug from me. Thanks. 

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On 4/17/2021 at 9:36 PM, headtransplant said:

This imagery of being sewn together speaks to me so much.

Absolutely beautiful poem. 

Thanks for taking the time to read and to comment.

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On 4/17/2021 at 9:49 PM, Reader1810 said:

tim, that was absolutely wonderful! :D 
I see the imagery of your words in mind’s eye as clear as day and they make me smile. 
A lovely and unexpected treat you’ve given us tonight.
As always well done.

I’m still smiling... :) 

Thank you, Reader. i'm glad it made you smile xo

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On 4/17/2021 at 9:52 PM, Parker Owens said:

This is a poem so beautiful, it made me my heart beat faster; it made me smile and tear. Each line, each image, unfolded like a new flower. Thank you. 

Thank you, Parker.   i appreciate your support.

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On 4/17/2021 at 10:55 PM, MichaelS36 said:

you are my soulmate.  There is no simpler truth than that.  And I agree, we are so much closer now than at the first bloom of our relationship.  Beautiful. xo

xo thank You, Michael

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On 4/17/2021 at 11:07 PM, kbois said:

You've officially turned me into a fan of poetry. 

This is absolutely wonderful tim. You and Michael are so fortunate to have each other. 

Thanks for sharing. You made my heart sing. 

Aw, thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.  I'm glad you're giving poetry a chance. i don't like every poem i read or every poet.  But it's nice when you find one or two that speak to you. xo

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On 4/18/2021 at 3:18 AM, chris191070 said:

Another beautiful poem tim x

Thank you, chris.  xoxo

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23 hours ago, Wayne Gray said:

I love the whole thing, but the last two lines most of all. Interest in another person often happens instinctively, but maintaining and building love really takes effort. It's apparent, you believe that is effort well-spent.

Great poem, tim. 🙂

Thank you, Wayne.  It is worth the effort and time. 

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23 hours ago, mollyhousemouse said:

what a wonderful tribute to your very special love

 

Thank you, molly.  He is special to me (so are you :D  )

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23 hours ago, JeffreyL said:

This is a wonderful poem, Tim! You have captured and put into words that joy of being one with another person! Reader1810 is spot on! "Mad skills our Tim has!" Ask Michael to give you a hug from me. Thanks. 

Aw, thanks very much, Jeffrey.  I'm glad it spoke to you.   He did give me a big hug, thank you oxxo

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I love this one, tim.  Especially the last two lines.  Often, we think soulmates simply "are".   You make it clear they "become" as well. ❤️

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21 hours ago, Backwoods Boy said:

I love this one, tim.  Especially the last two lines.  Often, we think soulmates simply "are".   You make it clear they "become" as well. ❤️

i think we had a huge connection when we met. But some things have happened that many split up over.  Humans screw up. We had to decide whether the years we'd put in were worth losing.

They weren't.  And so we carried on together, and we made it work.   Even soulmates who are.. need to tend their relationship.

Thank you for reading and your comments!

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