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Headstall's Reflections - 10. Chapter 10- Prompt 5- Rhyming Couplets- Climbing Out

Just a poem....

Headstall's Reflections

 

 

Chapter 10- Climbing Out

 

 

The ache of my soul comes not from pain

But from desperation when my spirits wane

Buried voices cry out to me

I reject them all for their memory

 

Malaise is something I’ve dabbled in

Held at bay by my need to win

Emptiness grows and I make my stand

Though I’m frightened to dive for fear I won’t land

 

Out, damned rot, I gave you my all

Yet you back away when I start to fall

Alone in our prison we sometimes are

It’s not only our surface we tend to mar

 

I hunt for something I cannot see

The minutiae of life is swallowing me

To count on others doesn’t always make sense

Sanity requires I maintain my own fence

 

Right foot, left foot, don’t look back

Enough time there, let it fade to black

I guess 'happy' will be for another day.
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On 03/20/2016 05:45 AM, Emi GS said:

We trust our Loved one and believe them for life. When the trust broken, we can't cope up that easily. This is a good poem and the line 'You back away when I start to fall' moved me.

 

Nice poem Gary. I hope you stand for your broken trust/heart.

 

Love,

~Emi.

Disappointment in others is one of the hardest things for me... I don't like feeling that way... thank you for pointing out that line, and thank you for reviewing... it means a lot... cheers... Gary...

On 03/20/2016 05:59 AM, Parker Owens said:

Agreed with Emi that 'You back away when I start to fall' spoke to me. Also the 'minutiae of life swallowing me' relates to my experience. This poem as a whole reached into my gut and turned it...dabbling in malaise is more than suitable a description for the experience. I continue to hope for your successful climb out.

Thanks, Parker. I'm glad you could relate to the words. I guess is my therapy... thanks for the review, my friend... cheers... Gary....

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