Headstall's Reflections - 8. Chapter 8- Prompt 15 Free Verse- Beautiful Mess

On 03/08/2016 08:00 AM, Victor Gutte said:

Reading this poem would make anyone understand that this has been written by someone who misses their lover I could totally imagine you sitting in a rocking chair (They are really great, don't judge ) reminiscing your time together you did prove that love is not related to age and is just as magical in any age reading this make me want to know how love feels like thank you for sharing such a personal thing

I also take this opportunity to congratulate you and your loved one for what you have All the Best

Thank you, Victor. It's so nice to get your thoughts again. I can see you got the point of this poem. It is mostly about love, and what that means to the physical part. I appreciate your congratulations and the wonderful review... cheers, my young friend... Gary...

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On 05/21/2016 01:48 PM, Arazon said:

That was riveting and beautiful, I could feel the passion between them! It captures a moment of both body and soul. And I loved the line: 'in the silent language of lovers'...it says so much. Thanks for sharing

Thanks, Arazon. This one is very special to me. Some of the poems I've shared have been difficult, but this one was easy. I wish this for everyone, and I'm so glad you could feel what you did. Thanks for the wonderful review and the support... cheers... Gary...

Okay, that's the first time erotic poetry has made me want to take a cold shower. Fiction, yes...movies, yes...but a poem? Now I can add that to my list thanks to your amazing use of words and imagery.
*fans face with cd case*

On 05/28/2016 04:08 PM, ColumbusGuy said:

Okay, that's the first time erotic poetry has made me want to take a cold shower. Fiction, yes...movies, yes...but a poem? Now I can add that to my list thanks to your amazing use of words and imagery.

*fans face with cd case*

Thanks, CG. I'm pleased you liked it. I was inspired at the time. It was a poem about love which was exhibited through eroticism, I guess. Anyway, it's a ver special poem to me personally. Thanks for your review and your support, my friend... cheers... Gary...

"fingertips impersonate air

And breeze across taut skin..."

So many wonderful images;

you are very talented.

An explosive evocation of love and lust.

5 hours ago, Rigby Taylor said:

"fingertips impersonate air

And breeze across taut skin..."

So many wonderful images;

you are very talented.

An explosive evocation of love and lust.

Hey, R. I very much appreciate you reading this one. It is definitely a favorite of mine, and quite personal. Thanks for the kinds words... cheers... Gary....