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  • 02/19/2016
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Headstall's Reflections - 8. Chapter 8- Prompt 15 Free Verse- Beautiful Mess

Warning: Adult theme
For my valentine.

Headstall’s Reflections

 

 

Chapter 8- Beautiful Mess

 

 

Invitation sent through glittering pools of need

Begins beautiful, the mess that is love

Eyelashes flutter on whiskered cheeks while teeth explore

And tongues flick... teasing, tasting, meeting

Names whispered as fingertips impersonate air

And breeze across taut skin

That heats--scalds--as bodies arch, stretch, and seek

Responses quicken in duet with desperate breathing

Promises of love become oaths of always

Forever sworn

And a joining starts from within

Cool fingers stroke through hair... tingling scalp

Claiming and begging both

Welcoming invasion

While the Lord’s name is invoked in vain,

Over and over and over

Writhing, straining, pulsing

Onslaught of sounds become fuel

As pebbled flesh pleads to be ignited

Choreography in flames,

Feeding an inferno

Clenching eyes, clenching teeth, clenching muscles

And unclenching hearts that dare to open

Receiving, giving, sharing

Until delicious agony crescendos

Temporarily sated, but not completed

Never completed

Weight falls into love’s embrace

Mingled, mashed, damp

As fingertips talk to a tenderized spine

In the silent language of lovers

Saying all that needs to be heard

Withdrawal is inevitable, a loss for both

Two sighs sound at the beautiful mess of love

La petite mort, ah glorious rebirth

To body, mind and soul

I am alive… I live and I love

An interlude needed...
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The content presented here is for informational or educational purposes only. These are just the authors' personal opinions and knowledge.
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Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 

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On 03/08/2016 08:00 AM, Victor Gutte said:

Reading this poem would make anyone understand that this has been written by someone who misses their lover :) I could totally imagine you sitting in a rocking chair (They are really great, don't judge :angry: ) reminiscing your time together :wub: you did prove that love is not related to age and is just as magical in any age :unsure: reading this make me want to know how love feels like :blushing: thank you for sharing such a personal thing :)

I also take this opportunity to congratulate you and your loved one for what you have :hug: All the Best :)

Thank you, Victor. It's so nice to get your thoughts again. I can see you got the point of this poem. It is mostly about love, and what that means to the physical part. I appreciate your congratulations and the wonderful review... cheers, my young friend... Gary...

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On 05/21/2016 01:48 PM, Arazon said:

That was riveting and beautiful, I could feel the passion between them! It captures a moment of both body and soul. And I loved the line: 'in the silent language of lovers'...it says so much. Thanks for sharing

Thanks, Arazon. This one is very special to me. Some of the poems I've shared have been difficult, but this one was easy. I wish this for everyone, and I'm so glad you could feel what you did. Thanks for the wonderful review and the support... cheers... Gary...

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On 05/28/2016 04:08 PM, ColumbusGuy said:

Okay, that's the first time erotic poetry has made me want to take a cold shower. Fiction, yes...movies, yes...but a poem? Now I can add that to my list thanks to your amazing use of words and imagery.

*fans face with cd case*

Thanks, CG. I'm pleased you liked it. I was inspired at the time. It was a poem about love which was exhibited through eroticism, I guess. Anyway, it's a ver special poem to me personally. Thanks for your review and your support, my friend... cheers... Gary...

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5 hours ago, Rigby Taylor said:

"fingertips impersonate air

And breeze across taut skin..."

So many wonderful images;

you are very talented.

An explosive evocation of love and lust.

Hey, R. I very much appreciate you reading this one. It is definitely a favorite of mine, and quite personal. Thanks for the kinds words... cheers... Gary....

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